Pay it forward, huh? Alright! Will do. Thanks! And just fyi: I don't know if this is just specifically a problem with me or if this is going around right now, but I took down my quest to make some changes and republished it. My quest has been publishing for nearly a day now. I've already submitted a ticket on it. So if you…
Try an invisible wall between the player and the grouped encounter. They won't target players through the wall, and it'll keep players from going in that direction, forcing them to explore other options. I did something similar in the early section of my quest and it worked perfectly, forcing the player to "avoid" a group…
Okay,finished it! The Good and The bad. First, the good: 1)Many different enemies kept the encounters engaging. And I must admit, anytime I saw Mindflayer Scourge, I cringed. Those were hard fights for me. 2) A sprawling map for a dungeon like that was interesting and kept the "collecting mission" fresh. 3) Always nice to…
Okay, so, the quest bugged out on me and I wasn't able to complete it. Probably because of what happened specifically to me. So I'll tell you what happened. I talked to the daughters first then went towards the destination marker. I saw the bookshelf through the fire and clicked on it, didn't get anything, so I moved on. I…
If you're really interested in replaying it, I made a boatload of changes (Mostly thanks to your suggestions). It should feel like an almost completely different quest once you get to the ruins. If you do decide to review it again, I would be greatly appreciative. :)
I liked the quest! It was a neat idea and kept up a sense of urgency that I had to find this girl before she dies. Nicely done. The Good: 1) Short simple and sweet. 2) Sense of urgency. I may steal the concept for my next foundry quest. :) 3) Enemies progressively get harder, which is a nice touch. 4) I liked the respawn…
Nice job! Just played it and accidentally messed up my chance to rate it. Oh well, no matter. The Good: 1) I loved the shout out to Evil Dead and this adventure was full of them. 2) I really liked the atmosphere that you created heading up to the house! 3) I liked the "Basement" dungeon that became a portal into hell. The…
Heya, I'll add this one to my list. I'll take a look at it tonight or tomorrow morning, when I get the chance to play. I'm a first time quest maker too. Want to trade reviews? Here's mine: NW-DP6JVC2WO
The good and the bad: First the good- 1) Amazing idea. I liked that the hardest parts of this dungeon (the maze, and the trail of ascendance) had nothing to do with combat. It was all player skill. That was amazing sir. 2) Also, The dead guards were a plus, they told the story without you having to. Well done. 3) There was…
And, by the way, thanks so much for the review and the comments! I appreciate all the feedback too! Besides, how else am I going to get better? lol. I'll be making those updates soon, hopefully today! :)
Okay, just completed it. Things I liked: 1) The quest was simple. I've been encountering many complex questlines lately and this one had the feel of a saturday get-together with the guys playing D&D while the DM had short notice to throw something on the table. Go here - do this - get paid. It felt more real to me than…
Okay, just finished playing it. So now, for the Good, and the Bad. First, the Good: 1) I liked the idea of the optional sidequest, it realy helps immerse you in the area. 2) Beautifully decorated enviromnents. 3) Interesting comments from all the monsters. Especially the zombies: "Braaaaaains" lol. That was a refreshing…
Okay, so the good, the bad and the ugly: First, the good: 1) Great story. I see it going well into a full blown campaign. 2) I really liked the fact that the whole time I'm looking for a simple letter while wading through armpit high goblin bodies. I like the doing-great-things-for-something-so-small, idea. 3) I was…
Added this to my to-do-list. Will complete when the server's back up. Here's mine: NW-DP6JVC2WO Be brutal please. This is my first quest, so I'm in need of solid feedback. Thanks.
Thanks! And yes, you are correct. This is my first foundry quest, so I'm expecting critical reviews and am actually depending on them. So, I do not take it harshly. Thanks for the review.
Great concept! I loved the idea of a ritual for the gods involving the sacrifice of the worst commedian. First, the good: 1) As I said, great concept! 2) The jokes were actually funny, an added bonus. 3) Bar fights! :D Now, the fixer-uppers 1) Mispellings with Rod Daggerfoot. I think he spelled enough "enogh" (Sorry, I'm a…
I'm going to give this a shot today. Check out mine if you have a chance? NW-DGTWG5HJ4 I'm still pretty new at this, so any commentary will be appreciated. Thanks!
Great stuff! I loved the use of the webbing! It was everywhere and very well placed. At times, it got in the way of my camera while I was fighting. Awesome touch, keep it! A couple of notes: 1) How would a person know that a wizard was highly skilled in life, just by looking at his bones? 2) When talking to the servant of…
First off, let me just say that I'm a big fan of roleplay and story, so this quest was right up my alley! However, I do have a few things that I'll say about it that kept me from giving it a 5 star rating. (I gave a 4 instead). 1) It was a little long, granted the story was appropriate, but I felt there were a few times…