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Something Evil

schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
edited June 2013 in Foundry Quest Database
Something Evil by @Schlaften


Short Code: NW-DJU24RA9A

Mission Type: Story driven Hack n Slash

Average Duration: 25mins

Amount of Combat: Medium ratio

Starts at: Doorway in Protectors Enclave

Mission Summary:Three Witches need help!
They are hiring an adventurer to deal with some issues that they can no longer deal with themselves.

This is my first attempt at a foundry, started with me putting a cabin together out of different wooden bits which escalated into this story. It has an Evil Dead kind of theme as the cabin i made reminded me of that.

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  • schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Seems some of the effects i put in do not copy across to the published version, so you are not getting the full shabang!
  • schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Some improvements have been recently made, if this is successful i will also do a follow up as this one was just a go to see how things work.
  • schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Thank you to everyone who voted, this have passed review and is now new in the quests section :)

    Look forward to seeing more reviews whilst i make the follow up :D
  • mrrobsworldmrrobsworld Member Posts: 29 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    I've put you on my quest to-do list. Please do the same for me.
    Descendant of Simon Part 1 -- NW-DDMY3WOTA --
    Thanks. I look forward to playing and reviewing your quest.
  • schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Oh hey, thank you for your response, i will play and review your too :)
    you can also just find mine by title now instead of the code.

    Something Evil
  • schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    mrrobsworld wrote: »
    I've put you on my quest to-do list. Please do the same for me.
    Descendant of Simon Part 1 -- NW-DDMY3WOTA --
    Thanks. I look forward to playing and reviewing your quest.

    Gave yours a go, cheers :)
  • schlaftenschlaften Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    H9ey thanks to all the people that have been reviewing, getting some good scores....but still looking for more reviewers to give pointer and tips on how to improve general structure so i can go on to making more
  • darriot777darriot777 Member Posts: 33
    edited June 2013
    I'll gladly trade reviews with you. This is my first rodeo too.
    I'll hit yours when I get home tonight. Thanks!
    NW-DP6JVC2WO
  • darriot777darriot777 Member Posts: 33
    edited June 2013
    Nice job! Just played it and accidentally messed up my chance to rate it. Oh well, no matter.
    The Good:
    1) I loved the shout out to Evil Dead and this adventure was full of them.
    2) I really liked the atmosphere that you created heading up to the house!
    3) I liked the "Basement" dungeon that became a portal into hell. The further you traveled, the worse it got. Nice touch.
    The Bad:
    1) There were a couple of grammar errors that I caught - a) at the very beginning, you called the "witch" a "with" and b) When reading the book of the dead you wrote "of,what" without any spaces.
    2) The "green portal" didn't look quite green.
    3) The encounter grouping became thick near the middle. It's harder for higher level players to take on encounters like that.
    4) Why kobolds? You had the evil and undead theme going on, the switch to kobolds felt out of place.
    5 Lastly, your treasure chest could be placed farther back into the witches house, maybe? i didn't like where it was.
    All in all, I thought it was awesome. Keep up the good work!
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