I just finished your quest. I think the best part of it is the decorations. Some of those maps are really nice. This quest is very hard. I think people will be more apt to play if you can get the star trails to show them the correct places to go. It's a long adventure as it is, and I don't think the wondering around trying…
Hi. Me again. I ran through your second dungeon, the Rothe one. This one had some problems with it. I have a screenshot, but I can't put it up without shoving it on a website, it seems. Anyway, at the very end, a bunch of people come out of a cave, and then I guess the cave closes over. The zombie rotter got stuck when the…
Hi. Good job. I did the Blackdagger dungeon. I like the minor challenges of finding the objects. It's good for when you don't want to tear your hair out in frustration. I did die once, but I think that's cause I'm headache-y and not on top of my game. Still, you got one kill out of it. No real suggestions. Good job. If you…
I ran your quest. Good dialogue, and some interesting techniques used . . . like dropping animals and falling off bridges. I would say the transition into and out of ominous forest could be tweaked. It's a bit hard to find the ground to click on. It would help if you put an invisible wall to block us from going forward…
I was not able to complete your quest. I could not find Olar Goldenhair and so after running around the whole map in black and white for 5 minutes I gave up. Please find a way to get the star trail to show up. Also, there are a few spelling errors. At one point I clicked on the answer "Yes I'm" ... not sure what that was.…
Thanks. This was a good quest. Very clear. Good for daily foundry. I gave it a good review in-game. One of the nagging flaws I have seen in other quests is the first time you search for an npc in the enclave, the blue square isn't over their head but in their chest. Not sure what to do about that, if anything. Also, I…
Hi. I wrote a review for your quest in game. Here are comments not included in game: I like short quests, though it needs to be a bit longer if you want to qualify for the daily foundry. The first mob I saw looked like it spawned on top of the table . . . though I'm not sure if that quite happened or if it is what you want…
Hi crowthorn, I reviewed your quest in game. The only things I have to add is that I don't get the "nature" part -- well, whatever the joke of it is. Also when you transport into the outside map, it drops the player like 20 feet on entering. Adjust the Y value of the screen entrance point. Not sure if anyone caught that…
Great job on the quest. I saw the pictures for this one in the foundry picture page and thought it was a really good use of objects to make a face. There was a lot of really great things in this. Loved the ice pick puzzle. I did get very frustrated when I was trying to get to the library though. Also, the trolls were…
I reviewed your quest. Straightforward and clear to follow objectives. Good job. The only thing I didn't say is one weird bug you might not be able to fix. When I first talk to Cleric Freemore, the blue box was hidden inside his chest, so I couldn't find it well. After I talked to him though, the blue box was up where it…
You did an amazing job on this one. The visuals are the best ones I've seen so far. How did you get everything to turn to black and white? As I player, I was a bit confused when I first dropped through the floor at the black and white section. I wasn't sure if it was a mistake. But, I figured by the end that you planned to…