CH. 1: Don't "Count" on it

vaelic · May 2013

Campaign Name: CH. 1 - Don't "Count" on it by @vaelic76

Short Code:NW-DQ3H4MXKG
Mission Type: Story/Mystery/Combat
Average Duration:15-20 minutes
Amount of Combat: Average
Starts at: Protector's Enclave
Mission Summary: A mysterious figure called "The Count" is rumored to dwell within the city of Protector's Enclave. Does this mysterious figure exist? Embark on an adventure where nothing is as it seems and the mystery unravels!

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vaelic · May 2013

Are we allowed to bump? looking for some feedback

lots of new updates

vaelic · May 2013

argh.. if you just ran it, try again. Apparently my last publish didnt save for some reason. It saved now and has all the updates. sorry and thanks!

vaelic · June 2013

58 views. gimme some feedback peeps! hehehe

lisaxreinke · June 2013

I enjoyed your quest. Good job.

labmouse42 · June 2013

I played the adventure again. These are my thoughts after playing after your revisions.

SPOILER ALERT

I like how the nobleman is close to the tavern. I've played a lot of adventures where they have me running around Protector's enclave for no good reason.

Did you mean to put that many banners in the inn? They look out of place. Its like you wanted to hang them high but they got placed to low.

I walked into the bar and talked to Layne. The camera is putting him behind the wall so I cant see him. That's odd

I like the NPCs by the bar -- the elf and the dwarf. Are they new?

I wish I could interact with the Mysterious Traveller. She says 'psst over here but i can't talk to her'

The bugs in the sewer are a nice touch

What was the point of the high priestess Falcona? She seemed just a bonus NPC

I liked the map on the pillar. I missed that last time.

I liked the named NPC (lockjaw?) Adding things like that makes the fights feel more epic.

I like the walkway of boards over the sewer water. Its a nice touch.

I like the cat whiskers.

Heh. You destroyed the lock on the chest. Cool.

It was just as much fun the second time through as it was the first.

vaelic · June 2013

thanks for your notes! my comments are inline in red

labmouse42 wrote: »

I played the adventure again. These are my thoughts after playing after your revisions.
SPOILER ALERT
I like how the nobleman is close to the tavern. I've played a lot of adventures where they have me running around Protector's enclave for no good reason. my thoughts going in to this

Did you mean to put that many banners in the inn? They look out of place. Its like you wanted to hang them high but they got placed to low.no, I was experimenting with them and apparently my save never saved properly so they got left in. I just republished again so hopefully they're now gone. feel like testing again?

I walked into the bar and talked to Layne. The camera is putting him behind the wall so I cant see him. That's odd i'll take a peek

I like the NPCs by the bar -- the elf and the dwarf. Are they new? yep

I wish I could interact with the Mysterious Traveller. She says 'psst over here but i can't talk to her' just wait

The bugs in the sewer are a nice touch

What was the point of the high priestess Falcona? She seemed just a bonus NPC just added flavor

I liked the map on the pillar. I missed that last time. it's new

I liked the named NPC (lockjaw?) Adding things like that makes the fights feel more epic.

I like the walkway of boards over the sewer water. Its a nice touch.

I like the cat whiskers.

Heh. You destroyed the lock on the chest. Cool.

It was just as much fun the second time through as it was the first.

thanks so much!

CH. 1: Don't "Count" on it

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