Rate a Character thread. Hot or Not.

Lurani - Raging Tide

Susylu - Heavens Tear wrote: »

I was really inspired by no. 8 in Korren's new post so i gave veno a makeover b:laugh
It's not as small and petite as in her preset but think I got pretty close to it with the expression

here's before and after - rate which you like better pleasee

God i am in LOVE with the after of your veno. b:dirty
I been trying to get mine to look relevantly close to that but keep failing. b:cry
One day hopefully i will make my veno look as pretty.

Cocobelle - Sanctuary

Ao - 3/5
I don't find anything wrong with her except that her eyes are too far apart and her eye and lip colour looks too light for her skin tone. I bet it would look cute after that fix. b:cute

Ziraia - 1/5
I don't know if it's just me but it looks like a preset. TB characters are hard to look different from each other, though. b:surrender

Narevi - 2/5
Her lip colour looks off compared to the rest of her face and it makes her look sick, imo. b:surrender I think a little thicker on the bottom lip wouldn't hurt as well. A bit longer eyebrows would also work as well. I like how you designed her eyes, though.

Ziraia - Raging Tide

Ziraia - 1/5
I don't know if it's just me but it looks like a preset. TB characters are hard to look different from each other, though. b:surrender

Narevi - 2/5
Her lip colour looks off compared to the rest of her face and it makes her look sick, imo. b:surrender I think a little thicker on the bottom lip wouldn't hurt as well. A bit longer eyebrows would also work as well. I like how you designed her eyes, though.

Thanks for feedback.
I know Ziraia looks close to a preset. It's been a long time since I started her, and I don't remember what I changed and stuff.. lol

Yea, Narevi's lips is one thing I _know_ I will change. ^^

CuteKitti - Lost City

This is my Veno b:victory




please rate b:laugh
Btw i love bittersweet's second char

Kateh - Dreamweaver

I love how you made your char look like CuteKitti, its just a shame you picked such awful different colors, nothing matches, nothing looks natural. Green/yellowish hair..gray eyebrows..blue lips. She could look so much better imo b:surrender but if you like her then who am I to judge b:pleased

Staere - Dreamweaver

CuteKitti, I like the way your character looks, but im not a fan on the colors. If you count out the colors I'd give her a 4/5 ^^.

elinurel

Indeed, the character would look great over-all if only it was balanced in colors. Assuming it was your personal preference though b:cute If you ever DO decide to change, I would also suggest a slight decrease in boobage size, since I see quite a fashion in generous characters all over PWI. That is only my opinion though b:laugh All in all... 3/5

Now, my turn! I would not mind a Rate on my own character. I will use the same Pic I used in a few Threads by now since it happens to be my favorite... And if no one got anything against~

CuteKitti - Lost City

You people are so hard to please b:cry Lolz
This time i went with a more natural look. Black hair/eyebrows/pink lips etc. Didnt want to make the lips too red. Took ur advice and lowered
bust size was planning to do that anyway.



I guess she has a more serious look now? b:laugh

Kk please rate thank yous xD

Phyrilla - Heavens Tear

CuteKitti - Lost City wrote: »

You people are so hard to please b:cry Lolz
This time i went with a more natural look. Black hair/eyebrows/pink lips etc. Didnt want to make the lips too red. Took ur advice and lowered
bust size was planning to do that anyway.



I guess she has a more serious look now? b:laugh

Kk please rate thank yous xD

She Looks Much better Now (: 4/5

Llux - Sanctuary

@elinurel - I gave you my comments on how she looked in your own thread, but really I love her SO much! 5/5

@CuteKitti - Much better! I also think it's the moon lighting you took your first shots in that made the colors so...ew. b:surrender I love those larger eyes. The only thing I would mess with are the lips. They seem too thin and short, maybe make them a bit longer and/or larger someway. (Maybe just make one lip larger? Hmm~) 4/5!

Estiah - Dreamweaver

CuteKitti: i give ur char a 3.5/5, i like the overall look, just that the lips are a little small and change the eyebrows to a different shape?

mine:

Estiah

Llux - Sanctuary

I'm getting all 404 errors on your pictures Estiah. The links you posted aren't complete.

Edit: Ninja'd! Hee, *gets to rating them now*



Estiah - 3.5/5 Pretty cute, but I feel like you can push her overall look a little bit more. She seems very standard to what I see cute TB looking like. Maybe make her skin or hair color more vibrant and mess with her expression/facial features to add some emotional depth?

Estiah - Dreamweaver

Llux - Sanctuary wrote: »

I'm getting all 404 errors on your pictures Estiah. The links you posted aren't complete.

Edit: Ninja'd! Hee, *gets to rating them now*

oops, fixed. b:chuckle

Evict - Heavens Tear

Estiah - Dreamweaver wrote: »

I'd hit that/5. Ijs.

amberis

<33333333 luws my veno

Susylu - Heavens Tear

amberis wrote: »

<33333333 luws my veno

I understand why. She's berri pretty

Svedra - Archosaur

4/5 amberis she's very cute

I used a makeover scroll on my sin
before:

and after:


what do you think?

crystalynnex

@amberis 5/5 she's pretty! and so natural looking

@svedra im personally not a fan of unnatural hair colour >.< im also not very good at providing constructive criticism like coco, susy and llux, but something is throwing me off about the lips... i think it's a little too thick? also it might be because of the angle you took the shot at, but the head seems a bit small for the body...

just my 2 cents tho b:surrender 2/5 from me...

Ao - Raging Tide

Ohh Amberis is beautiful

Here is my psy. He has even lighter eye colour now but I love these two images a lot. I wanted him to look teenish, not sure to what extent I have succeeded. >.>

Ziraia - Raging Tide

amberis
Veno looks like many other venos i've seen, but she's still soo cute 5/5

Sveda
Your sin have very wide eyes, it makes her look.. scary o_O but thats just me. You should make her lower lip smaller. 2.5/5

Ao
He looks very teenish to me He should maybe have brow eyes (to look more natural) ? 4/5

Riverwell - Archosaur

aberis: 5/5. I think she has a very pretty natural look to her, and her face is proportioned very nicely. Not a fan of the fash she's wearing, but eh, that's just a personal preference.

Svedra: 4/5. The lips are definitely throwing me off. 5/5 on the eyes though, there's something very unique (besides the color!) about them that I'm absolutely loving, and despite what other people say about the green, I think it's very interesting and cool.
The lips are too big for me though, they look too wide or sloppy or something...

Ao: 4.5/5. Tideborn male is a tideborn male to me really. I think you succeed in making him look like a teenager, but he kind of has man-****. o.o I don't know if that can be helped or not, but he just looks a bit oddly proportioned in the screen shots you have.

Dorset - Heavens Tear

@Estiah cant see the face real good but ill give ya 5/5 for what i can see and screenshot composition xd

@Amberis 4.5/5 she ver pretty but i am not sure about the eyes which are straight across at the bottom (dunno if i explained that right)

@Svendra 2/5 b4 and 4/5 now the changes you made to her lips made ALL the difference. her eyes are a lil oddli proportinoed but overall i like her

@Ao 4/5 he looks ver teenish i just have two comments. i think he would look a lot better with brown eyes...and i think his waist is waaay too skinny to support his shoulders and chest

ReIay - Archosaur

Since no one rated my Cleric last time
There ya go




@ Ao: 4/5 Your psy's look is unique, I like that

Amourie - Heavens Tear

So, I have discovered the reference picture.. finally.. b:avoid

I changed my cleric last night. I decided I wanted to make her look 10x different than everyone else and so I made her *bigger* because I've never seen a curvy character on my server.





I'm not so sure about her face still, nice critique would be appreciated b:cute

ReIay - Archosaur

@Amourie: 7.5/10 Her nose and lip color are bugging me but I do love her eyes. Overall, she's a beauty.

CuteKitti - Lost City

Well guys im back again b:victory



Took your advice and increased the size of her lips. I changed the hair to pink to match the Dress. Eyebrow colour is different cause i forgot to change it but will change after next makeover =.=''. So, any comments? Would appreciate feedback XD like what colour to change her eyebrows to
(Does this colour work?), what colour hair matches well with pink etc. xD b:thanks

Ao: Your Psys face is awesome but i would prefer skin colour to be normal tideborn colour...just my preference xD 4.5/5

ReIay: I like ur cleric Though i feel the eyes could be a little bigger? 4/5

Amourie: I like your new concept and yea i agree havent seen many curvy characters on pwi xD. The lower lip is a bit too big but still love
the char 4/5

Dorset - Heavens Tear

@Reiay i like her colouring a lot on her although i am not usualy a fan of blond chars however i dont like her eyes too much they make her look a little mean? maybe its the colour or could be the makeup. 4/5

@Amourie i love love LOVE the colour of her eyes! but they do clash a lil with her lips i think a natural colour could suit her lips better. liek teh fact she is curvier 4.5/5

@CuteKitti...3.5/5 OK i have a couple of comments abotu her. She is pretty but i HATE The hair texture. the orange streaks just dont add to the pink hair (which matches the fash and i love when fash matches with hair). Personally also i woulda liked to see you thicken out her bottom lip a tiny bit which would suit the cute look you are going for. The eye makeup i never like on chars but i can see why you used it

Graviora - Dreamweaver

CuteKitti - I actually like your character a lot. I'm not fond of the hairstyle or the orange streaks though. Her lips would also look much better in a paler color with the bottom lip enlarged a little.

And I gave in to all my hubby's begging - I started a blademaster. b:surrender So here is my Xiasia (Zi-ash-ia) She's blonde too like my Grav but a different shade (I like blondes QQ)

Evict - Heavens Tear

Graviora - Dreamweaver wrote: »

CuteKitti - I actually like your character a lot. I'm not fond of the hairstyle or the orange streaks though. Her lips would also look much better in a paler color with the bottom lip enlarged a little.

And I gave in to all my hubby's begging - I started a blademaster. b:surrender So here is my Xiasia (Zi-ash-ia) She's blonde too like my Grav but a different shade (I like blondes QQ)

I think the eyebrows are a tad too high, but otherwise, she's a babe. 4.5/5.

Ziraia - Raging Tide

Here's my male sin and my psy hope you like them...

Ziraio

full body here

NARl

full body here

Thanks :>
(oh, and i know she looks close to a preset o.O)