PWI Fanfiction Story (Manga/Video?)

jokerxdude

I didn't finish 22, but it will be right.... now.

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

Woot! Oh and I haven't gotten a chance to draw the things yet. I did draw Kotob:cute

jokerxdude

Xaldian
Current Age: 18
Both parents are deceased.His father died in war at the Swamp of Wraiths. His mother died shortly after peacefully. He tried to get along with the other Winged Elves when he was considered a loner. He is one of the Choosen of Pan Gu.

Serenity Helm
Current Age: 18
She is the princess of the Winged Elves due to her father being the Elder of Plume.

Maria Cunning
Current Age: 17

Hojo V Blaze
Current Age: 19

Stripes Dover
Current Age: 18

Luna Rain
Current Age: 18

Red Reaper
Current Age: ~10,000

Harpy Wraith
Current Age: Unknown

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Xin Clad
Current Age: 18

Harmony Sii (Sea)
Current Age: 18

Aqua Black
Current Age: 17

Hojo O'Ryan
Current Age: 19

Fang Strong
Current Age: 18

Foxy Laize (Lays)
Current Age: 18

Harpy Wraith
Current Age: Unknown

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

I redid Stripes. He looked quite off the first time.

jokerxdude

Yes, that's it! b:thanksVery good Stripes appearance.

I hope you don't mind me using your character in the story, Kitten. Just for the episode 23 . I'm thinking of doing that for others as well in the anime.

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

jokerxdude wrote: »

Yes, that's it! b:thanksVery good Stripes appearance.

I hope you don't mind me using your character in the story, Kitten. Just for the episode 23 . I'm thinking of doing that for others as well in the anime.

Ooooo O.o I don't mind at all.

jokerxdude

Where is eveyone? =O

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

hrmm no idea but look who I gotz...



Big **** and all >.< ROFL! I don't know about the coloring though so I left it b&w.

Vixe - Heavens Tear

I--I don't know....they're just.....how do you IGNORE something like that? Now I see how Stripe's family was killed -- just coming near those things, the gravitational pull would suck them in. They never had a chance.

jokerxdude

Kittennice - Heavens Tear wrote: »

hrmm no idea but look who I gotz...



Big **** and all >.< ROFL! I don't know about the coloring though so I left it b&w.

Holy-b:dirty

Ahem... um... em...

Now that that's out of my system, I have to announce a few changes. I hope no one started on the project. Well, actually that's still good if you started and we can use those for later.

I mapped out how I want the scene to actually look like. Positionings will be changed just about. There will be two clifs. One higher than the other on opposite sides of the battlefield. The battlefield will scroll to the left and end up at the small cliff plateform that holds the six. The other cliff would be where the wraiths are. There will also be a leader, a woman, of the wraiths covered by a black robe like Pan gu's.

The drawing of the six is about the same, but only have the archer in front. I was thinking of a close-up on his right eye then zooming out to show the whole group.

I want the woman centered in the middle of the wraiths and the wraiths could just move about inplace. They don't have to run or anything.

Everything else stays the same.

jokerxdude

Episode 1: The Beginning

[Snow is all over the field and a single person is walking through the blizzard]

-Snow crunches and whistles-

[Winged Elf boy, Xaldain, walks through the snow with blood dripping down his left arm]

Father…, I failed you. -Mind echo-

I will never be….

I will never be…

An Archer… [collapses in snow]

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First Season Introduction

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-Sanctuary music plays-

[Elf Village proceeds to inside a home]

-[url=]Woman sings to music[/url]-

[The woman holds a baby wrapped in white cloth. Swirls around then looks down upon the baby. The baby has green lunar moons under his green eyes. The woman smiles and then a man comes in the house.]

Father: Let’s see him. [Man with short black hair and beard and mustache grins at the baby] Ah, a beautiful boy. He has your hair.

Mother: And your eyes. [She holds the baby up before cradling him again] Though he doesn’t have a hint of magic…

Father: Not a cleric?

Mother: No. [She traces his markings under his eyes gently] But he is surely blessed.

Father: An archer like his dad. [He takes the baby from her and looks in the infants eyes.] He’ll be the best!

[As he raises him up the scene fades into a more grown-up version of the child. About the age of six.]

Young Xaldain: Hey, dad, look, I’m flying! [Flying in the air]

Father: -Chuckles- You’ve shown me already.

Young Xaldain: But, look, look. This is new!

Father: Alright. [Looks up to see Xaldain doing flips in the air] Ah, aerial flips. [Motions him over. Xaldain flies down] -Says in a low voice- If you time it right, you can strike good with the girls.

Young Xaldain: Girls? Ewww. [Shows a disgusted look with his tongue out]

Mother: What’s this about girls? [Holding laundry]
Father: Oh noth-

Young Xaldain: Dad wants me to “strike good with the girls”

Mother: [Places her hand on her hip and gives a playful glare to the father] Erin.

Father: What? It’s father son bonding.

Mother: Mmm - hmm. Behave yourselves. [Walks away]

Young Xaldain: So you going to teach me arching now? You said when I fly. That was so long ago.

Father: I am. I just want you to be ready, that’s all. Besides… [Messes with Xaldain’s hair] You already have what it takes. The natural gift.

Young Xaldain: Gift?

Father: You‘ll understand some day. [Glances around then points] What about that one?

Young Xaldain: Too girly. [Looks at the little elf girl]

Father: Would you rather a man?

Young Xaldain: What?

Father: -Laughs hard-

-Horn blows-

[Everyone looks up to the west]

Woman: Oh no. [Takes her two children and runs with them to their house]

[Other Winged Elves run into their houses.]

Young Xaldain: What’s going on? [Watches his father stand up]

Father: Nothing good, son.

-Drums are being played-

[Scene switches]

[Door swings open]

Winged Soldier: [Walks in with two others behind him.] By order of the Elder, all men of age in the household must attend war.

Mother: No! You can’t he just-

Father: Scarlet. [He held his hand up then nodded] Tell him I will be there when ready.

Winged Soldier: We depart tonight at midnight. [He saluted before the soldiers left out]

[Xaldain peeked from another room and eavesdropped on them]
-Sad music-

Mother: You can’t. You can’t go. Tell the Elder that you already went. You just can’t go again. -snobs-

Father: Shhh… [He hugs her] It’s going to be ok.

Mother: Be ok?! You left me for two years to go to the War on Heavens Tear. And ten years in the thousand. You are lucky to be living for twelve years of service.[ Tears stream down her eyes]

Father: One more year or more… [He caressed her cheek]

Mother: [She pulled away] And what of Xaldian?

Father: It is to protect you and Xaldain from those monsters in the dark. Things that should not have survived Pangu’s rapids.

Mother: No, Erin. How can Xaldain grow up without a father? What good are you if you are dead?!

Father: … [He could not answer her. His eyes looked at her sadly with compressed tears.] Xaldain will do good. If I am alive or dead, he will be strong and brave. He will be a hero. [He swallowed hard before kissing her on the lips] I must go. [He grabbed his crossbow before heading towards the door]

Young Xaldain: Dad. [He came from out his hiding place]

Father: [He turned] Xaldain, you’re… awake.

Young Xaldain: [He ran and hugged him] Don’t go.

Father: [He crouched down and meet Xaldain eye to eye] Xaldain, I have to go away for a while. [He frowned and placed his hands on Xaldain’s shoulders] I want you to stay strong for me, ok? [Xaldain nodded] And don’t ever give up. [He took his hands away to take a necklace with a ring on it off.] I want you to have this. A fine lass gave it to me and said I should give it to my son. Now it was odd that not even I knew you were a boy until I came back. But he seemed to know. Could be Pan Gu in disguise. I never did catch his name. Anyways, here. [He placed it around Xaldain’s neck. He hugged him tightly and silent tears went down his face] I love you, son. Look after your mother. Protect her from harm. [He stood up and then opened the door]Be a fine archer for me.

Mother: The only thing that will come to harm would be my heart.

Father: …. [He then closed the door behind him]

[Xaldain (as a teenager) was sitting down on a rock waiting. Clouds, sun and moon passed by quickly in the background]

Narrator: It’s been eight years since my father left. There was no word on his death nor a word of him alive. I guess I held onto something that could not be possible. I just didn’t want to let go.

[Xaldain’s mother fell to her knees in heart-felt snobs with Xaldain trying to comfort her]
My mother… She knew it when she knew it..

My father said protect her from harm
Well…
I ask you.
How could I guard a person’s heart?

[Xaldain stared at a grave with after placing flowers on it]

She died a peaceful death. If you could call it that, I guess. Crying yourself to sleep with a broken heart. Like you’re drowning in a river that only suffocates your soul and not your body.

[He walks along a trail casually]

Though she knew of his death. I still didn’t want to believe it. He was a great warrior. And he promised me he would teach me arching. I haven’t picked up a bow since. But then I got it…

[He stopped and read the letter that stated his father’s death]

That was my wake-up call…

Xaldain: -Shout- Noooo!!

[Scene fades]

Narrator: And from there, I fell.

[Xaldain still lays in the snow]

Archer: Ha! You're such a fail archer. -laughed along with other archers- You can't even hold your bow right. Let alone shoot.

Archer: [The boy stepped on a bow and it broke.] Opps. I accidentally mistakened your level one bow for a stick. -laughed with the others- Oh well, you're a loser anyway. You can always find a bow like that around. It's not like you're going to become any good in the army. [He turned around and started walking away with the others following] Do everyone a favor and just die.

Narrator: I should have died actually. Right then and there, but I didn't.

-gentle song-

[Xaldain heard beautiful humming. Soon he started to stir in his sleep]

Cleric Girl: Hey, don't move so much. You're still badly injured.

[Slowly Xaldain opened his green eyes to look upon the owner of that heavenly voice.] Am I dead? [He thought to himself once he saw her. She was breathtaking. Her eyes were a soft blue and her hair was golden like the sun on a sunset. A gentle peach tone touched her skin to make it shimmer like gold]

Cleric Girl: Is something wrong? [She saw that he was staring at her for awfully a long time]

Xaldian: Guess not. [He shook his head] No. Nothing, just...

Cleric Girl: Hmm?

Xaldain: Why did you save me? [He frowned] You shouldn't waste your powers on me.

Cleric Girl: Silly archer boy, I couldn't just leave you in the snow to freeze to death. That wouldn't be right at all. [She smiled] Besides I can't help myself when someone is in need of help.

Xaldain: Oh.. [He grimaced as he sat up]

Serenity: Hey, don't sit now. Your wounds haven't healed yet.

Xaldain: Thank you. What is your name...? [He smiled back to her]

Serenity: Serenity. Your's?

Xaldain: Serenity -echoed in his mind- Xaldain. You have a nice name.

Serenity: You too...

Narrator: Who knew. From this, my ending gave me a new beginning.

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

Awww poor Xaldian. b:sadWhy you always have to make things sad?

jokerxdude

I know I haven't posted in a while. That doesn't mean I bailed though. Blank got some time on his hands so the animation should be up and running with his help. He is almost finished with making Serenity. He just needs to work on the dress and her wings more. So without further adue I give you a peek at her.

b:dirtyHot ain't she? No wonder Xaldain is head over heels.

jokerxdude

Special Bump for oooh say.. this.

Just need the rest and then we shall have our ANIME teaser.b:thanks

Kyna - Lost City

Hey, sorry for backing out on the backgrounds so abruptly on you guys. Real life caught up b:surrender and sucked really badly. Still does but I dropped in to say hello as well as this

I did see that you seem to have gone to some sort of 3D animation program for your scenery. Please do try to keep your animation up to par with the background, otherwise it will look kinda tacky. I do like what you've done with it so far. ^^ keep up the good work, I'm sure it'll be amazing.

Limeball - Heavens Tear

I've been following the developments of this thread for a while. The video is awesome but is there anyway to make it a little smoother?

SerenityMare - Dreamweaver

Kinda off-topic but jokerxdude, is that Luke in your siggy? :O

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

jokerxdude wrote: »

Special Bump for oooh say.. this.

Just need the rest and then we shall have our ANIME teaser.b:thanks

Wow background is way better than the blur. =^.^= I like it. Agree with Limeball on the speed. It kinda lags, but not bad bad. Oh and you missed a "t" in international at the ending >.>

MagicHamsta - Lost City

jokerxdude wrote: »

-snobs-

O.o'
b:puzzled

Vixe - Heavens Tear wrote: »

I--I don't know....they're just.....how do you IGNORE something like that? Now I see how Stripe's family was killed -- just coming near those things, the gravitational pull would suck them in. They never had a chance.

agreed.
b:sad

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

O.o What? It's not my fault he said give her huge ****. I was just drawing what the customer wanted... >.>

jokerxdude

Kyna - Lost City wrote: »

Hey, sorry for backing out on the backgrounds so abruptly on you guys. Real life caught up b:surrender and sucked really badly. Still does but I dropped in to say hello as well as this

I did see that you seem to have gone to some sort of 3D animation program for your scenery. Please do try to keep your animation up to par with the background, otherwise it will look kinda tacky. I do like what you've done with it so far. ^^ keep up the good work, I'm sure it'll be amazing.

It's alright, Kyna. That's understandable.
I hope things are going better for you now.

Thank you.
I'll try as best I can.

Limeball - Heavens Tear wrote: »

I've been following the developments of this thread for a while. The video is awesome but is there anyway to make it a little smoother?

Thank you.
Alas, I'm not the animator. I'm going to work with him to get the fraps working at proper speed.

SerenityMare - Dreamweaver wrote: »

Kinda off-topic but jokerxdude, is that Luke in your siggy? :O

Nope, it's Asch.


Kitten: I missed a... -Looks at video- Damn it!b:cry
I'll get that fixed.

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

Harpy and Stripes I redid

jokerxdude

Awesome.
Thanks, Kitten

To those who want to hear the music and the script go here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vI6hXzaT_jM

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

jokerxdude wrote: »

Awesome.
Thanks, Kitten

To those who want to hear the music and the script go here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vI6hXzaT_jM

Oi! Sweet.
Cry Cry. Music got to me and now I haz tearzb:cry
What's the beginning music. the theme songs. both of em? I want them on my ipodb:dirty

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

x.X Having trouble with horses. I'll get the evil horses eventually. Other people fighting I'm drawing now

Kittennice - Heavens Tear

Almost done!

jokerxdude

Great to hear.