Anybody need play through's?

eldarth · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

That said I love a good "save the village" quest...

If that's the case maybe you can add one of my other quests to the bottom of your list somewhere.
[NW-DCGHLSKBT] "Invasion!" - Defend a small lakeside village from 4 attack waves by Fire Gnolls. Meant to be a short 15 min romp.

keiran25 · August 2013

beeblebrox69 wrote: »

A thousand thanks, and I'm glad you had fun! Congrats on finding all but one of the Polyhedrons... which one did ya miss?

Yellow! But I think I know where it was though, unless it was behind a skill check I couldn't pass

eldarth wrote: »

If that's the case maybe you can add one of my other quests to the bottom of your list somewhere.
[NW-DCGHLSKBT] "Invasion!" - Defend a small lakeside village from 4 attack waves by Fire Gnolls. Meant to be a short 15 min romp.

When I play one I usually play them all, but I'll add it so I remember anyway!

hercooles130uscg · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

I am SO glad act II is only just around the corner! I am in awe of your story telling skills! I have not a single thing to nitpick here, wow! Recommended to my guild and SUBSCRIBED!

Thanks for the review. Act II is taking longer then expected as I just keep building maps, but I assure everyone, half the dialogue is done, the maps are all but wrapped up, and I have still to do the encounters, which, well, is something I am scarred about. I have seen so many great ways encounters have been done but that is one thing that is not really up my alley so it will be a new experience.

keiran25 · August 2013

hercooles130uscg wrote: »

Thanks for the review. Act II is taking longer then expected as I just keep building maps, but I assure everyone, half the dialogue is done, the maps are all but wrapped up, and I have still to do the encounters, which, well, is something I am scarred about. I have seen so many great ways encounters have been done but that is one thing that is not really up my alley so it will be a new experience.

I know the feels, I'm at the same sorta stage with my two
....just not happy with them yet

alymed · August 2013

My first quest could use some playthroughs/reviews...the short code is NW-DULEQZ9KY (Intro To An End). Appreciate any constructive criticism, as I already have plans for at least one more quest in this series.

keiran25 · August 2013

neverwinter1776 wrote: »

You ever get a chance?

Made it! Here's my notes;

Olivandir(Start)
-manner
-foretold
-be so helpful as to
Ice wall - "enough"

-"Oh!?!" intones an exclaiming question, which doesn't really fit the sentance.
-I rubbed out any notes of default, difficulty, or current state (blessing, cured etc) mobs and items, it is a beta afterall!
-In a lot of dialogue instead of ' coming up in words like "I'm", it's displaying I"m
-With the toolbox...You've probably already tried this but first thing that jumped to my mind was how clunky the moving box looked, and I tried to imagine another way, if maybe you had a non-intractable version of it in the exact same spot, that de-spawns in favor of the intractable version, triggered by the dialogue of returning the wood, would that work? (Far be it from me to tell you how to build your quest, just had similar things in mine that I'm never happy with)
-Also, I was never tasked to actually return the souls to the ferryman....will he send debt collectors after me?

-Bravo on the difficulty slider! Very original

-Oh yes! The improved imp barrier is MUCH better!
-After that it was just a few typo's
Fiona
"Indeed"
"I last"
"Yes!"
Fiona Final
-"You"
-"Ruler"
Oli return
-"as it should
-"mind you not"

Spectacular work, I adored the map, and the quest itself. I just had two points of nitpick that your probably already working on anyway towards getting out of beta, but just thought I'd mention;

First was I kept finding myself asking a lot of "who what where and why" questions, why am I here? where *is* here? Who are the monks, and what's their story?, Why is there a ferry of the dead? Where did all the villagers come from? Where were they before? Why am *I* even here? (Besides playing an awesome MYST like quest) Just little things like that *shrug* (once more I don't want to tell you how to build your story! Only what I felt as a player)

Getting into the house on the hill;
Seeing as it's featured in your banner and as it seemed to be the big thing I was doing all the running about to get too, the time I was actually in there and how much there was to see felt a little anti-climactic. But before anybody jumps on me for that one, I realize custom map zone ins/outs within custom maps is a pain in the HAMSTER to pull off, I'm just putting it out there!

neverwinter1776 · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

Made it! Here's my notes;

Olivandir(Start)
-manner
-foretold
-be so helpful as to
Ice wall - "enough"

-"Oh!?!" intones an exclaiming question, which doesn't really fit the sentance.
-I rubbed out any notes of default, difficulty, or current state (blessing, cured etc) mobs and items, it is a beta afterall!
-In a lot of dialogue instead of ' coming up in words like "I'm", it's displaying I"m
-With the toolbox...You've probably already tried this but first thing that jumped to my mind was how clunky the moving box looked, and I tried to imagine another way, if maybe you had a non-intractable version of it in the exact same spot, that de-spawns in favor of the intractable version, triggered by the dialogue of returning the wood, would that work? (Far be it from me to tell you how to build your quest, just had similar things in mine that I'm never happy with)
-Also, I was never tasked to actually return the souls to the ferryman....will he send debt collectors after me?
-Bravo on the difficulty slider! Very original
-Oh yes! The improved imp barrier is MUCH better!
-After that it was just a few typo's
Fiona
"Indeed"
"I last"
"Yes!"
Fiona Final
-"You"
-"Ruler"
Oli return
-"as it should
-"mind you not"

Spectacular work, I adored the map, and the quest itself. I just had two points of nitpick that your probably already working on anyway towards getting out of beta, but just thought I'd mention;

First was I kept finding myself asking a lot of "who what where and why" questions, why am I here? where *is* here? Who are the monks, and what's their story?, Why is there a ferry of the dead? Where did all the villagers come from? Where were they before? Why am *I* even here? (Besides playing an awesome MYST like quest) Just little things like that *shrug* (once more I don't want to tell you how to build your story! Only what I felt as a player)

Getting into the house on the hill;
Seeing as it's featured in your banner and as it seemed to be the big thing I was doing all the running about to get too, the time I was actually in there and how much there was to see felt a little anti-climactic. But before anybody jumps on me for that one, I realize custom map zone ins/outs within custom maps is a pain in the HAMSTER to pull off, I'm just putting it out there!

Thank you so much, all noted!! And appreciated!
Will try to get to the "Fixes" ASAP.
I hope to turn out far better things and welcome all the help I can get.
Not too shabby for my first Foundry ;-)
Again... Thx!!

NW1776

sarlacc1979 · August 2013

I just completed my first Foundry quest and I'd love to hear what you think.
The Hidden Unseen
NW-DLW8SB9CN

Straight forward combat quest for 1 player and a bit of plot to keep it together. Hope you like it.

keiran25 · August 2013

neverwinter1776 wrote: »

Not too shabby for my first Foundry ;-)

Dang right!

andrew12s · August 2013

Hi! I could use some help getting my first quest out of the basement also. It will probably work best in a group. Else take plenty of healing potions with you.

campaign: Drakemore's Secret; NWS-DTNY8A53M
quest: An Urgent Request; NW-DNXLIDSL3

Thanks a lot!

keiran25 · August 2013

Hey Everybody,

Sorry for being slack as hell of late, I've come down with a nasty cold (least I hope that's what it is! :cool:)
Gonna take a day of rest (a.k.a. being unplugged against my will so I *do*), and tackle the to-do list when I'm a little more focused.
I'm really really sorry for the delay and I swear by Tymora's left mammary I *will* get to everyone!!

lolsorhand · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

Hey Everybody,

Sorry for being slack as hell of late, I've come down with a nasty cold (least I hope that's what it is! :cool:)
Gonna take a day of rest, and tackle the to-do list when I'm a little more focused.
I'm really really sorry for the delay and I swear by Tymora's left mammary I *will* get to everyone!!

Worry not, get well and don't rush it!

keiran25 · August 2013

lolsorhand wrote: »

Worry not, get well and don't rush it!

I'm halfway through your campaign, loving it so far! Boyfriends back from the store anytime better flee before I get busted out of bed :cool:

Expeditious Retreat!

lolsorhand · August 2013

Run Forest, Run!

cipher9nemo · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

Sorry for being slack as hell of late, I've come down with a nasty cold (least I hope that's what it is! :cool:)

I hope you feel better soon! And no need to apologize. It's your time and your efforts that have benefited everyone here. The community owes you some thanks.

lightbringer1102 · August 2013

I definetely need plays

keiran25 · August 2013

Thanks so much for understanding everyone, you're all great

Oh and Lightbringer1102, I ran yours a few days ago, check out page 7, I left you some feedback :cool:

alymed · August 2013

All,

I just finished adding several new details and some extra exploration features to my quest. I still need playthroughs and reviews to pull it out of "review" status, so please help me out if you get a chance. The only way it can be searched for now is by short code (and only after clicking "More" in the Foundry section of the main page).

Thanks in advance!

(wish you well soon, keiran!)

keiran25 · August 2013

alymed wrote: »

All,

I just finished adding several new details and some extra exploration features to my quest. I still need playthroughs and reviews to pull it out of "review" status, so please help me out if you get a chance. The only way it can be searched for now is by short code (and only after clicking "More" in the Foundry section of the main page).

Thanks in advance!

(wish you well soon, keiran!)

I'd be happy to add you to the to-do list...if you'd given me the name or short code hehe

Guess who's back Foundry boys and girls!

Pardon the delay. I *may* have cracked a rib slightly trying to clear my lungs over the weekend..I admit nothing >_>;

ONWARD, to the QUESTS!

lolsorhand · August 2013

Welcome back!

And I hope your ribs are okay!

alymed · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

I'd be happy to add you to the to-do list...if you'd given me the name or short code hehe

Oops lol...my bad. It's NW-DULEQZ9KY (Intro To An End). Version 1.7 is the most recent, as of tonight. Let me know if I can help you out with anything, and I'm glad you're back!

vephid · August 2013

Hello keiran

Was great to find this post!

Would you like to play my quest? Takes only 20 minutes and i think you will like it.

The name is "A Time of need" and the code: NW-DTNQ57N4B

Vephid

eldarth · August 2013

Welcome back - take it sloow, don't make yourself sick on our account.
It did give me a chance (w/RedneckRonin's critiques) to do some serious polishing to [NW-DGBLCWRFP] Old Magic (on your todo list) :-)

keiran25 · August 2013

eldarth wrote: »

Welcome back - take it sloow, don't make yourself sick on our account.
It did give me a chance (w/RedneckRonin's critiques) to do some serious polishing to [NW-DGBLCWRFP] Old Magic (on your todo list) :-)

Does fracturing a rib count? ^_^;

I'm so very sorry to all of you I have left hanging like this, believe me when I say your not forgotten! (Hell @happynightmare1 would probably slap Besheba herself on the HAMSTER if it got me to shut up about it!)

I've trial run myself getting my own quest up before the Module and not even a twinge yet!

Once I'm done drooling over Freecam and Search tags...and puuuurty fey items...and...um...oh you all know the list surely, I will get my slack HAMSTER back to the Foundry!
Also, as an apology for the delay, your all getting tips.

keiran25 · August 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

slap Besheba herself on the HAMSTER

Once I'm done drooling over Freecam and Search tags...and puuuurty fey items

I jinxed it!

Anybody need play through's?

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