Anybody need play through's?

keiran25 · July 2013

Like the title suggests I'm itching to get my foundry on and always like helping people out of the void, so, lay em on me! :cool:

I'll play any kind of quest or campaign, and if you need multiple play throughs or a specific class to test it, let me know in your post, I have one of everything

Also after reading the new sticky, if anybody needs an adventuring buddy after finding, and needing to get through and report, an exploit/TOS violating quest (and another voice for the other methods advised), let me know via PM!! (Seeing as we apparently can't name and shame in the open forum, yes?) I'm on Dragon but I'll roll a toon anywhere I'm needed to help wipe out these kerjiggers!

Also my campaign is not currently published, so I don't need or want anything in return, I just want to play Foundries!

List of who I've played and who's on the to do list, and what page of the thread my response is;
(If anybody knows a way to repair the spacing below, I'd be most grateful, it's been a while since I've spent this long in a forum!)

Played and Reviewed:

p. 2

p. 3

The mines of Gubasso

Wizard of OG

Rise of the Elements

The Ruined Temple

The Water World

A Dwarven Rebellion

Into the Underworld
A Magical Mystery Tour

p.5

p.6

Whispers in the Forest

The Gold Medallion

A Salty Sailor's Brew

A Day in the Life of a Ranger

Bonds of a Brother

All's Fair in Love and War - WFx1 DCx1

Into the Forest
Defend Castle Ryback

p.7

Where Has Justice Gone?

Draconian Ways

The Sound of Justice.

Part#1 Lord's Bounty*

Anomalous readings

Part#2 The Lead

The Banished Realm
Drow Family Ties
The Bank Heist

p.8

p.9

422 - Yeenoghu's Bride

Zombie Infestation

The Cursed Armor of Steele

The Medic Where?

Bardstown vs The Nashers

A Birthday Affair

NW-DCOBVJAO4

NW-DTAK6CXZ2
THE FLAME KEEPER

p.10

p.11

It's a dirty job

The Stench

mad wizards folly- Possibly broken

p.12

rising dead- Possibly bugged

The Battle Arena

City in Conflict

Misty Hollow

p.13
NW-DFMZGSWU8

To be played
Brethren of the Five, Campaign - In progress
Trials of the Viscount
Pylons of Aqathon
Asmadai Invasion
The Devil's Playthings - NW-DG6DZO4ZB
The Three Sisters NW-DUFO3G89P
NW-DL6ZVSISW
NW-DKH3UKB4Q - Kobold Crusher
NW-DGBLCWRFP
The Guvnor; DNWS-DDHW52TJY
[NW-DCGHLSKBT] Invasion!
[NW-DBK3YOVJB] Trouble in Conyberry
[NW-DJNGFHRYY] Tendrils of the Underdark
NW-DULEQZ9KY
NW-DLW8SB9CN

TOS Violating Quests Reported to Mods:
0
TOS Violating Quests To be reported:
0

antonkyle · July 2013

I need plays, Cheers!

lorgrius · July 2013

I am still looking for my 5th review!

The mines of Gubasso
NW-DN7Z5LHAR
20ish minutes of goblin bashen fun - Light dungeon crawl action adventure

Always willing to trade a review

Best

jedite2012 · July 2013

Hope you can review

Rise of the Elements Short Code: NW-DEEPA2HLP need 1 more reviewer so i will get 5 reviews
The Water World Short Code: NW-DC7LHALZT

keiran25 · July 2013

jedite2012 wrote: »

Hope you can review

Rise of the Elements Short Code: NW-DEEPA2HLP need 1 more reviewer so i will get 5 reviews
The Water World Short Code: NW-DC7LHALZT

I think I was your 2nd or so reviewer for Rise of the Elements

Ooooo you started with my favorite classic element...muuust plaaaaay

jintortle · July 2013

Yes please. My Wizard of OG one - need like 3 more for daily status (hopefully)!!!

If need any plays in return please tell!

yipykaye · July 2013

I'm short a few plays on my second and third quests

Second can be played alone. The third closely follows the story of the first and really should be played after to understand the storyline.

keiran25 · July 2013

Wizard of OG is already in my journal funnily enough, and I always play in order yipykaye

Thanks for all the offers for reviews in return, as soon as I'm actually happy with my current quest I'll be sure to post xD

theninja0 · July 2013

My quests could use some plays.

karitr · July 2013

I've just played through DeeSauter's Drow Family Ties (thanks Saerrael for giving this a mention on the 'what are you playing thread'). The quest is a perfect all-rounder; well written, stunning to look at, great combat and a ton of polish...no way should it be lingering in limbo. It was published 5 weeks ago and has only had 11 plays!

This is the kind of travesty too many author's are suffering and exemplifies why the catalogue is in dire need of an overhaul...more tag buttons are not going to solve the problem unless they allow us to view the whole catalogue :mad:

/rant off

Anyway, if you're interested in playing, the short code is NW-DC95ROS61

I'll keep an eye on this thread to grab those I haven't played yet too.

keiran25 · July 2013

jedite2012 wrote: »

The Water World Short Code: NW-DC7LHALZT

Ok some things I've observed so far;
Your map icon is labeled simply "ocean"
A few of the cliffs need to be shifted down a fraction, like the one near the ramp up to the ship. (a nitpick I know but if your as OCD about gaps as I am...)
The Ice Cave is so nice...and the golems are a nice challange, but its becoming hard even on my fighter to get them down in groups before he goes hurtling off an edge to his dooooooom!

Gonna grab a coffee and a smoke and give it another crack once my poor arm bones knit

Now I don't know why, but Aqua's guards seem to like getting up and stuck in that ice formation behind the throne, off the platform. made the boss fight a bit tricky, took a few respawns.

Other than that fantastic quest, you have no idea how long I've waited for an ice/water themed quest

jintortle · July 2013

1 thing Keiran25. Delete current Wizard of Og and grab the new version - I have had a major update in the last day and some minor ones today - If you can

casekuk · July 2013

Keiran, you are a star! If only there were 4000 others like you! :P

I would be very grateful if you would pop over to my foundry spotlight and take a look at the quests there.

Just click on my Signature picture to go straight there,

Thank you

Art (aka Casek)

keiran25 · July 2013

casekuk wrote: »

Keiran, you are a star! If only there were 4000 others like you! :P

I would be very grateful if you would pop over to my foundry spotlight and take a look at the quests there.

Just click on my Signature picture to go straight there,

Thank you

Art (aka Casek)

You were one of my first forum found quests casekuk, you bet I'll run em!

jintortle wrote: »

1 thing Keiran25. Delete current Wizard of Og and grab the new version - I have had a major update in the last day and some minor ones today - If you can

Good thing I hadn't gotten to it yet, quest re-accepted

imperialmen · July 2013

Here's my first foundry. Feedback needed

"The Bank Heist" NW-DFF41RK2X

15ish minutes of fast-paced adventure! 1-2 players.

keiran25 · July 2013

lorgrius wrote: »

I am still looking for my 5th review!

The mines of Gubasso
NW-DN7Z5LHAR
20ish minutes of goblin bashen fun - Light dungeon crawl action adventure

Always willing to trade a review

Best

Not quite my style, but fun none the less! Also well balanced combat, difficult without being a cake walk either. Mines did feel a bit bare between combats I'll admit. Just a few minor dialogue bugs also at the start I noticed if you haven't already (or a grammer HAMSTER poked you haha);

-Sargent
-Knox is written Nox
-Not sure it should be Thier.

Good job

frankish · July 2013

I've got a few reviews already Castle Ryback, and i've just republished an updated version this morning! Have a swing at it if you like!

keiran25 · July 2013

Alright guys gotta call it a night it's almost 3am here, all the multi-quest stories as well as the ones on this page will be attacked with vigor over my coffee and cereal! TTFN!

boomba66 · July 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

Alright guys gotta call it a night it's almost 3am here, all the multi-quest stories as well as the ones on this page will be attacked with vigor over my coffee and cereal! TTFN!

Mine are below. Part three "Northern Justice." is coming soon. Hopefully I get through a few more before summer is over! Could use some feed back. They are story/lore heavy about an hour to play both parts so far.

lorgrius · July 2013

A Day in the Life of a Ranger
By @Lorgrius
NW-DKCE6OZVH
30 Minutes or so
Solo: Challenging
Duo: Just Right
Group: Cake
Combat/Dungeon/Exploration

Looking for any and all feed back!

In Game discription- After Finding a book entitiled "A Day in the Life of a Ranger" you sit down by the campfire to read. Sucked into the book you find yourself reliving her adventures for a day. Chapter 1: Trail of Gnolls

Action/Adventure with light dungeon crawling.

Best and thanks in advance to all the awesome reviewers out there!

thalazar1 · July 2013

the ruined temple in my sig has meet its 20 plays, but if your still looking for quests to run, more plays won't hurt.

keiran25 · July 2013

And I'm back! Ooooo more quests! Ruined Temple I played yesterday, I loved it

Never seen a map even a little like yours!

oortexplorer · July 2013

My quest is no longer in the review pit, but the average play time is down to 14 minutes so I could use some plays to get it back up to over 15. If you're interested, it's a dialogue-driven comedy, info in sig.

keiran25 · July 2013

jintortle wrote: »

1 thing Keiran25. Delete current Wizard of Og and grab the new version - I have had a major update in the last day and some minor ones today - If you can

BWAHAHAHAHAHA Oh I am so glad I left that for this morning I wouldn't of appreciated it half as much tired. Adored it! Just some things I noticed, basically all cosmetic;

Quest text could use some polish, leaving the halfling town it just stated "Go to intelligent zombie" etc.
Few spelling mistakes: Freed elf dialogue, Goddess only has one D and the sentence seems cut off, metaphysical is typed with an extra I instead of Y, I think the word scheme was jumbled somewhere too.

Other than that, the zone lines were a bit hard to see and use, especially once a few companions are trailing along

Regardless that was great fun! The after work cast party, priceless!

sourcreamking · July 2013

Draconian Ways sure could use some more plays... Who knows, you might even like it...

lightbringer1102 · July 2013

Ya my signature sais it all, please play mine as I play yours!

jintortle · July 2013

Thanks for the play through - Oh man what I would not give for a Spellchecker in the Beast!

Very Happy you liked I :cool:

keiran25 · July 2013

Yay! back in action! Starting my to-do list now

keiran25 · July 2013

antonkyle wrote: »

I need plays, Cheers!

Here's what I spotted, if they have been already noted I apologize

A Dwarven Rebellion:
Oh this was fantastic! Ambiance, story, combat, These are the kinds of quests that I play the Foundry for! Two things stuck out to me though, again cosmetic;

In the kings final dialogue, Diamond is misspelt Diomond, and speaking of which, the capital A in Diamondaxe really glares at me (I'm an English graduate so sue me), maybe spilt it with a hyphen? Just a thought!

Into the Underworld:
Another gorgeous set of maps! Story was great, you couldn't of said it better, simple but effective, which leads me to mention;

-Effect, Effective Affective is not a word *eyetwitch*
-At the start the dialogue tasked with getting Ice, Water and Earth elements, but in reality it was Earth, Fire and Ice.
-Your Fire golems seem to be pyrophobic...seeing as the fire that results from the lava they are born from causes them to run around flailing >_>;
-Shadow of the Domon Lord?
-Got a dash of clipping under the Brazers in the final room

A Magical Mystery Tour:
Playing now!

antonkyle · July 2013

keiran25 wrote: »

A Dwarven Rebellion:
Oh this was fantastic! Ambiance, story, combat, These are the kinds of quests that I play the Foundry for! Two things stuck out to me though, again cosmetic;

In the kings final dialogue, Diamond is misspelt Diomond, and speaking of which, the capital A in Diamondaxe really glares at me (I'm an English graduate so sue me), maybe spilt it with a hyphen? Just a thought!

Into the Underworld:
Playing now
Effect, Effective Affective is not a word *eyetwitch*

A Magical Mystery Tour:
Next on the list

Thanks for the feedback. I will warn you with A Magical Mystery tour, it was when I first started with foundry, I'm considering pulling it and starting it again. I didn't even use a spell check, I had plans for a four part campaign but I knocked that on the head. May still do the two parts.

Anyway thanks for playing them.

Edit: I've added the changes you suggested in A Dwarven Rebellion, thanks.

keiran25 · July 2013

Hey no stress! I'm enjoying it, I love the subtlety done references and the step to find Frank, that was flawless!

Anybody need play through's?

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