Have just reviewed "A Family Affair NW-DH7J6B8V2" by @mezrella.
Feedback in "Feedback Form".
Nice basis for a quest, nice story, felt the caves were a bit long, a bit sparsely detailed and a bit too much "same again" combat. Would've liked more intermediary story elements to help feel like things were moving along.
@redneckronin you don't need to post on here, its all done though Google docs. so as long as you do what the first post says, it will go though.
I know that.
But currently the Forum doesn't let you know when you have new PM's, so I post here to let the Author know I have PM'd them more detailed feedback. @delrachnid, sent you a PM with feedback on Revenge Of The Fallen
@ash4ll - Been trying to reach you. Sent (and resent) you a forum private message. I can see you've been busy, but would like to hear back from you when you get a chance.
Oh, I registered there. Although I use nick "Ash4ll" here I registered there as "Ashall".
And if you wish, link it. Although I plan to build the site myself without using google forms.
If you want me to link it, will do so too.
And yeah, I don't usually check PMs on forum, I'm used to model where I'm attacked with popups when message arrives on forum :P
Oh, I registered there. Although I use nick "Ash4ll" here I registered there as "Ashall".
And if you wish, link it. Although I plan to build the site myself without using google forms.
If you want me to link it, will do so too.
And yeah, I don't usually check PMs on forum, I'm used to model where I'm attacked with popups when message arrives on forum :P
I can't find an app from you.
I was hoping you could link your site, so you can explain it better (better than me, i mean).
I found courage to clean up the list from quests that expired.
Also - a quick note. I'll be preparing the external site for our review system. Currently I'm in the moment of thinking about it But once I start working on it I might stop updating the list for a while, however once it's up, I'll update it with all the data from here.
For those who have attempted to play my quest and found it too hard, well I had finally the time to tone down the combat a bit and re-publish it. Thanks, I continue to review your quests.
My husband and I typically duo together. I've noticed that many of the quests are listed for Duos. Would it be possible for me to get credit for my husbands review as well as my own? Given his explicit permission of course. I expect the answer to be no, but thought it couldn't hurt to ask.
Also, if playing in a party and one person in the party leaves at the end it will kick everyone in the party out of the foundry possibly preventing them from submitting the review. Will I get in trouble when this happens if I submit it as one reviewed in Ashally's spreadsheet? I will defiantly list the player's names who where in my party and make sure that it is a 'new' review for the foundry. Its my husband and brother, neither of which will play unreviewed foundries unless I pull them in, and neither of which want to make their own. I don't want to have to play long foundry twice just because one of them forgot to wait. I figure its hard to get reviews from party groups.
I was going down the list to try to find the next one to review. And all the ones I haven't reviewed already qualify as daily foundries in game.
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What do you mean by expired? I read the OP and couldn't find anything related to that.
Well, if one wants to keep up their quests on the list, he must review others. If someone stops doing it, I remove their quests from the list. That's all.
Time when quests are expelled from the list is calculated by number of quests author has reviewed times 2 (number of days).
Currently I'm more liberal to this rule since I don't check the list so often so I let people have their quests stay on the list longer. Bah, I even missed someone when he applied (because he used slightly different nick).
It's been a month ive been reviewing others and yet no one has reviewed mine? If I dont get feedback I can't update it to make it better????
I started to last night, but it says Duo and the description even says that if I solo I'm likely to die. I'm willing to give it a try right now, but I don't have someone handy to run it with, so if I start dying I'll probably have to abort.
[Edit]
Ok, I tried it but I couldn't complete the quest. Apparently I missed picking up an item somewhere, and the only way to advance the conversation with Frinko back in PE is to have that item. I'll leave you a PM with more details about the bits I was able to finish.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Felling the Forgemaster: NW-DOHCJ5VE3(Elligible for Foundry Daily) Fleshrend's Big Adventure: NW-DBWJJYFDK (Elligible for Foundry Daily)
Well, if one wants to keep up their quests on the list, he must review others. If someone stops doing it, I remove their quests from the list. That's all.
Time when quests are expelled from the list is calculated by number of quests author has reviewed times 2 (number of days).
Currently I'm more liberal to this rule since I don't check the list so often so I let people have their quests stay on the list longer. Bah, I even missed someone when he applied (because he used slightly different nick).
I don't think this system works for me, sorry. First, my quest is a niche market, so it's not going to be played very often, and when it is played it's by a select few. So with your system I could easily see myself playing and reviewing many, many quests here and never getting mine reviewed even once. In other words your system hurts my kind of quest, which is why I haven't bothered.
Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the effort you put forth in doing this for the community though.
I don't think this system works for me, sorry. First, my quest is a niche market, so it's not going to be played very often, and when it is played it's by a select few. So with your system I could easily see myself playing and reviewing many, many quests here and never getting mine reviewed even once. In other words your system hurts my kind of quest, which is why I haven't bothered.
Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the effort you put forth in doing this for the community though.
I appreciate your feedback. Although there is not much I can do about it.
In such situations ignoring my thread and making your own is generally a better idea.
Just as an experiment I'll put your quest on top of the list, just to check if absolutely no one will play your quest. I saw you didn't review anything so let's strike a deal - if anyone reviews your quest, you'll start reviewing others. Agree?
PS. Oh my. Someone has changed title of my thread. I suppose it's for the better.
Not to say I panicked a little when I didn't see my thread.
PS2. Seems you were right.
Don't think that so quickly. As a writer and reviewer/critiquer of beta projects for years, I know for a fact that this quest got zero reviews because he gave zero reviews. Add that to the fact that it was estimated at 4 hours, which is wtf territory for any single quest, the outcome was exactly as it should have been based on the facts. I despise jumping quests and anything longer than 30 because it's hard to hold a storyline in this format that long of a time, but a reviews would have been returned if given. Yes, it would have took some fishing, but yes, he would have got them. That's just how it is for people who really are looking for the reviews.
Don't think that so quickly. As a writer and reviewer/critiquer of beta projects for years, I know for a fact that this quest got zero reviews because he gave zero reviews. Add that to the fact that it was estimated at 4 hours, which is wtf territory for any single quest, the outcome was exactly as it should have been based on the facts. I despise jumping quests and anything longer than 30 because it's hard to hold a storyline in this format that long of a time, but a reviews would have been returned if given. Yes, it would have took some fishing, but yes, he would have got them. That's just how it is for people who really are looking for the reviews.
It's a bit insulting to say "Hey, look, I want you guys to put the effort in to review and test my 4 hour quest, but I don't want to spend a single hour reviewing 2-3 quests to get into the queue."
Foundry Quest: Breaking the Chain NW-DELOGH4IH
(Daily eligible! Could use more reviews. Largely complete.)
It's a bit insulting to say "Hey, look, I want you guys to put the effort in to review and test my 4 hour quest, but I don't want to spend a single hour reviewing 2-3 quests to get into the queue."
Well, people tend to be selfish (or mercenary - i dont know if it's correct context*) when it comes to their quests. I don't blame them, I simply don't put them on list. His case was exceptional so that's why I did it.
Anyways, due to recent changes in foundry I put another field in "review me" list, just as in according form - tags. If you want yor quest to be updated, simply re-apply with updates you want your quest to have.
* - english is not my first language
PS. Obviously since there are issues I'm not deleting anything from the list.
Do you want the @ in front of our handles for the review feedback? I noticed I was listed twice on the feedback SS. One as @karranor and the other as just karranor. Thanks!
Comments
Feedback in "Feedback Form".
Nice basis for a quest, nice story, felt the caves were a bit long, a bit sparsely detailed and a bit too much "same again" combat. Would've liked more intermediary story elements to help feel like things were moving along.
All The Best
Looking For Reviews For Your Foundry Quest?
Drop By Scribe's Enclave & Meet Up With Volunteer Reviewers.
And Sacred Heart Short Code: NW-DECMTQMEA
A video Review from visigoth18 you can watch it HERE Of Pt1: The Wishing Ceremony.
Pt1: The Wishing Ceremony is eligible for the Daily Foundry, Avg 27 mins.
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Sacred Heart is eligible for the Daily Foundry, Avg 16mins.
I know that.
But currently the Forum doesn't let you know when you have new PM's, so I post here to let the Author know I have PM'd them more detailed feedback.
@delrachnid, sent you a PM with feedback on Revenge Of The Fallen
All The Best
Looking For Reviews For Your Foundry Quest?
Drop By Scribe's Enclave & Meet Up With Volunteer Reviewers.
I think they know how to use CTRL+F.
Siegebreaker - NW-DGDPWV2U5 - story about the ambush, escape and great rescue of the city.
I'm a streamer and I know it!
The Planar Rescue
The Hands of Jorath
Short Code: NW-DIQ4VNRDU
Short Code: NW-DSJ437GPU
[UGC] Kolde Acres (Discontinued)
And if you wish, link it. Although I plan to build the site myself without using google forms.
If you want me to link it, will do so too.
And yeah, I don't usually check PMs on forum, I'm used to model where I'm attacked with popups when message arrives on forum :P
Siegebreaker - NW-DGDPWV2U5 - story about the ambush, escape and great rescue of the city.
I'm a streamer and I know it!
I can't find an app from you.
I was hoping you could link your site, so you can explain it better (better than me, i mean).
[UGC] Kolde Acres (Discontinued)
ID:NWS-DBA4ECLWG
Author: Lightbringer1102
Guys I need plays and reviews please, I have re-edited the quests so don't play this solo, it's at your own risk.
Easier if played with a friend
Campaign
Q1: Lord's bounty
ID: NW-DJJ5YG3H2
Q2: The Lead
ID: NW-DCJ5NKNIJ
Q3 , Q4 ..etc : Coming Soon
Tag: #Balanced#Story #Combat#Hard
And Sacred Heart Short Code: NW-DECMTQMEA
A video Review from visigoth18 you can watch it HERE Of Pt1: The Wishing Ceremony.
Pt1: The Wishing Ceremony is eligible for the Daily Foundry, Avg 27 mins.
-=-
Sacred Heart is eligible for the Daily Foundry, Avg 16mins.
okay I will, i read the instructions and i will review others.
Hammerfist Clan. Jump into the Night: NW-DMXWRYTAD
I found courage to clean up the list from quests that expired.
Also - a quick note. I'll be preparing the external site for our review system. Currently I'm in the moment of thinking about it
Best wishes.
Siegebreaker - NW-DGDPWV2U5 - story about the ambush, escape and great rescue of the city.
I'm a streamer and I know it!
NW-DN7Z5LHAR
20ish minutes of goblin bashen fun - Light dungeon crawl action adventure
Always willing to trade a review
Best
Lorgrius
A Day in the Life of a Ranger
NW-DKCE6OZVH
The Mines of Gubasso Daily!
NW-DN7Z5LHAR
The Vault of Hargon Daily!
NW-DP4X6HAEP
Also, if playing in a party and one person in the party leaves at the end it will kick everyone in the party out of the foundry possibly preventing them from submitting the review. Will I get in trouble when this happens if I submit it as one reviewed in Ashally's spreadsheet? I will defiantly list the player's names who where in my party and make sure that it is a 'new' review for the foundry. Its my husband and brother, neither of which will play unreviewed foundries unless I pull them in, and neither of which want to make their own. I don't want to have to play long foundry twice just because one of them forgot to wait. I figure its hard to get reviews from party groups.
I was going down the list to try to find the next one to review. And all the ones I haven't reviewed already qualify as daily foundries in game.
What do you mean by expired? I read the OP and couldn't find anything related to that.
Hammerfist Clan. Jump into the Night: NW-DMXWRYTAD
Time when quests are expelled from the list is calculated by number of quests author has reviewed times 2 (number of days).
Currently I'm more liberal to this rule since I don't check the list so often so I let people have their quests stay on the list longer. Bah, I even missed someone when he applied (because he used slightly different nick).
Siegebreaker - NW-DGDPWV2U5 - story about the ambush, escape and great rescue of the city.
I'm a streamer and I know it!
I started to last night, but it says Duo and the description even says that if I solo I'm likely to die. I'm willing to give it a try right now, but I don't have someone handy to run it with, so if I start dying I'll probably have to abort.
[Edit]
Ok, I tried it but I couldn't complete the quest. Apparently I missed picking up an item somewhere, and the only way to advance the conversation with Frinko back in PE is to have that item. I'll leave you a PM with more details about the bits I was able to finish.
Felling the Forgemaster: NW-DOHCJ5VE3 (Elligible for Foundry Daily)
Fleshrend's Big Adventure: NW-DBWJJYFDK
(Elligible for Foundry Daily)
First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA
If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it
I don't think this system works for me, sorry. First, my quest is a niche market, so it's not going to be played very often, and when it is played it's by a select few. So with your system I could easily see myself playing and reviewing many, many quests here and never getting mine reviewed even once. In other words your system hurts my kind of quest, which is why I haven't bothered.
Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the effort you put forth in doing this for the community though.
Hammerfist Clan. Jump into the Night: NW-DMXWRYTAD
I appreciate your feedback. Although there is not much I can do about it.
In such situations ignoring my thread and making your own is generally a better idea.
Just as an experiment I'll put your quest on top of the list, just to check if absolutely no one will play your quest. I saw you didn't review anything so let's strike a deal - if anyone reviews your quest, you'll start reviewing others. Agree?
PS. Oh my. Someone has changed title of my thread. I suppose it's for the better.
Not to say I panicked a little when I didn't see my thread.
PS2. Seems you were right.
Siegebreaker - NW-DGDPWV2U5 - story about the ambush, escape and great rescue of the city.
I'm a streamer and I know it!
Don't think that so quickly. As a writer and reviewer/critiquer of beta projects for years, I know for a fact that this quest got zero reviews because he gave zero reviews. Add that to the fact that it was estimated at 4 hours, which is wtf territory for any single quest, the outcome was exactly as it should have been based on the facts. I despise jumping quests and anything longer than 30 because it's hard to hold a storyline in this format that long of a time, but a reviews would have been returned if given. Yes, it would have took some fishing, but yes, he would have got them. That's just how it is for people who really are looking for the reviews.
Jeremiah Donaldson
www.ephiroll.com
(Daily eligible! Could use more reviews. Largely complete.)
Anyways, due to recent changes in foundry I put another field in "review me" list, just as in according form - tags. If you want yor quest to be updated, simply re-apply with updates you want your quest to have.
* - english is not my first language
PS. Obviously since there are issues I'm not deleting anything from the list.
Siegebreaker - NW-DGDPWV2U5 - story about the ambush, escape and great rescue of the city.
I'm a streamer and I know it!
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