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I'll echo what dtz said - this is a solid quest with unique portions I haven't seen anywhere else (the magic swirlies platforming was interesting, even if I did die) I'll also echo what he said about proofreading. I tried to make note of any typos or strange usage in my notes below, which I took as I was playing: Cinematic…
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I took notes as I was playing: The courtyard area with open sky really brought back some old-school D&D game memories (even if there is a roof later)... opening a door to find myself face-to-face with a giant spider also felt appropriately old-school :) I like the Nasher tie-in - they just kind of vanish after the early…
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Server died before I could finish, but I got most of the way through. I hadn't played the other installments, but it was fairly easy to follow regardless. Plotwise it seems fine, mechanics-wise it's mostly good, but it needs a good editing pass. Most of the errors I found were of the "wrong apostrophe" variety, and a few…
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About to run this myself! If we're review trading, here's the one I just published: Nerisatis the Cold ID: NW-DNIEWE95D Author: @atiaxi It's the second in a series, but there's a recap at the beginning. I'll reply again with my review in a bit :)
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It's rare for a dungeon crawl to have backstory like this, so that was a pleasant change. Overall, an enjoyable quest! My notes as I played: - All the guards in the entrance room is a nice touch - I like that the difficulty can scale, but "anger the spirits" doesn't tell me much - Door's labeled "universal - wood 01".…
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Thought I'd give this a run. Pretty straightforward dungeon crawl; here's my specific notes: - Outdoor location is right above the compass rose on the map - hard to spot - Bonedude's wandering around for no reason. Makes it hard to talk to him - Doors have default 'press f to interact' text - The terrorchicken is funny,…
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The quest in my sig just became eligible for daily foundry rewards, so feel free!
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My quest is in my signature :) This is a very well written work. I liked reading it and playing it. I made a lot of notes, but really most of them are just minor spelling/grammar nits: - A suspicious letter: Signed "You're loving Aunt" -> "Your loving Aunt" -- I'm not used to seeing OOC text in first person, e.g. "I knew…
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I figured I'd give yours a play - you said you'd updated it and so I figured a once-over from someone who never played it before might be helpful. My quest's in my signature if you're still trading :) Here are my notes: - I like all the chatter in the bar - Bookshelf has default "Press F to interact" - Bookshelf: Has a lot…
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Quest done! The plot was interesting, the combat was good - more specific notes follow: - Text is all over the place as far as text coloring goes - some is yellow, other is OOC text, but it should all be speech - Monsters don't seem to fit a theme - mindflayers, wererats, undead? - The nonlinear quest was kinda neat, but…
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Regular Quest Very interesting! I like the ability to choose my and my enemy's armies. As a foundry author myself, I can tell that there was a lot of work put in here to enable this sort of thing :) The Catacombs of Dread This quest I wasn't as bit a fan of. For one, it's huge. The foundry window said the average…
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My quest is in my signature :) I enjoyed your quest! It feels like a good lead-in to whatever's coming next. I rated 4/5 but it could easily be 5/5 with a little polish. Here's the notes I made as I went along: - Liana has a few of the default "Continue"s as responses to her dialog - Little confused by Liana. She says a…
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"Steve, I'm done here." Frank said. "What?" Steve replied. Frank had been in a despondent mood recently, certainly, but nothing like his current state. "I'm done. With Cryptic, with Perfect World, with this game, with everything." Frank said, hands idly by his keyboard. Steve frowned. Both of them had started working for…
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My quest is in my signature - it's about a half hour and should be soloable (definitely let me know if it isn't!) Overall, this was a nice quest. The plot is good, the combat fun, and I can easily tell how it'll hook into potential sequels. More specific notes / bugs: - Initial task to find the job board has no trail or…
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My quest is in my sig :) This quest was, in my opinion, great. I didn't really think something like what you did would even work, much less be entertaining and have a plot. Even little touches like "Insert coin", the disappearing pellets, and the high score bit were spot on. Some of my notes: - Very nice costume for the…
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My quest is in my signature :) Yours was good! I've been doing a lot of very combat heavy scenarios lately so it was nice to have something more relaxed. The plot is good, but the writing itself needs work. By that I mean some things are awkwardly stated or strange to read. I've made more specific notes below: -…
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This is a very well written quest, especially for something billed as hack-and-slash. I'm not big on the latter but enjoy the former, so this was still entertaining. As promised, the combat was hard (managed to solo it on my low-level rogue, however). Some notes: - response to Commander Yates: "Is that suppose to impress…
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I also gave this a play - it's pretty straightforward and entertaining :) - Might want to block off the stairs down in the first chamber, they're somewhat pointless with the portal there - Scout "You will see by yourself" -> "you will see for yourself" - Cult leader is kinda hamming it up, isn't he? (HAHAHAHA - it's a bit…
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Feast of the Moon I actually managed to duo this one (my wife wanted to play too) so you got two ratings out of it :) Overall, I liked it. The setup is a bit dry (I mention specifics in my notes) but the combat's good, the maze is a really neat idea, and the ending is nice. My specific notes: - What does 'pick a selune's…
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An interesting twist; I'm always game for feedbacking some foundries! My quest is in my sig - should be soloable. To whoever comes next: I won't have Neverwinter access until I get off work in a few hours. Also I roll solo. That said, I'm currently low level on my foundry-only character, so a lot of situations that aren't…
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I'm not at a foundry right now so I can't check, but IIRC there are 'guard' encounters in the Encounter tab. If there's one with just one guard, you can re-skin it to look like Helrazor. I don't know if you can do something like have them follow you around, though, so you may only be able to use it for individual scenes:…
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You know, I thought this was one of those 'trade reviews' threads, but upon further inspection it's not. Oh well, since I've already played your mission I might as well share my notes: - Kinda strange to make me walk through all that empty hallspace - Millan: "they have sense a new portal emerged somewhere in a arctic…
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I'm also doing as many of the review trades as I can to get plays :) (Mine's in my signature) Very fun mission - you definitely nailed the 'dungeon' theme, it's nicely atmospheric. Fairly challenging combat. My notes I made as I played: - Priestess Alsatia: "Bless these souls with all you're conviction" -> "All your…
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My quest is in my sig :) I liked this one! I mean, I knew something would be up at the brothel, just didn't know what it would be. I figured some evil puppetmaster enslaving the help, so I was surprised to find it was the help doing the enslaving :) Other notes: - Journeying across town to get from the contact to the door…
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My quest is in my sig should you feel like reciprocation :) I really enjoyed this. I saw the initial description of it being an arena quest and groaned, because I'm not a huge fan of just straight-up arena style matches. But this one's different! The humor was good (unlike many a quest that bills itself as humorous, I…
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I didn't see my name on your to-do list; I was the second person to review you :) My quest is in my signature.
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I ran both, here's my thoughts: Blood Soaked Silver * The pretext seems somewhat flimsy - why are the guards having me stop something so ostensibly peaceful? Especially when there are snake-eye bandits around who are demonstrably doing worse stuff * The blood-soaked-silver ritual is cool - nice descriptions there too. *…
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I reviewed this last time you posted it, actually - I see you've already changed the description from my feedback :) Hoping to see your review for mine!
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Not what I was hoping for, but thanks all the same :)
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Similarly, is there an easy way to get the code from the foundry to anything outside? I can't seem to copy-paste it from in-game (the one in my sig here was carefully typed by hand with much alt-tabbing).