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[UGC] The Shrouded Grotto review/trades

darkstalker311darkstalker311 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
edited May 2013 in The Foundry
Hello,

Made a dungeon themed map and published it last week. Didn’t realize how hard it was to get some plays and reviews. So here I am on the forums asking for feedback and possible review trading as seen on other posts.

code - NW-DCH5GA2JU

Quest is fully playable to completion, there are a few “boss” fights and a challenge that is optional and not recommended for solo play.

Here is a screenshot and thanks for reading.

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  • atiaxiatiaxi Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 36
    edited May 2013
    I'm also doing as many of the review trades as I can to get plays :) (Mine's in my signature)

    Very fun mission - you definitely nailed the 'dungeon' theme, it's nicely atmospheric. Fairly challenging combat.

    My notes I made as I played:

    - Priestess Alsatia: "Bless these souls with all you're conviction" -> "All your conviction"

    - I'm no cleric, I'm a rogue with dirty hands and a stained soul. I don't think praying over the skeletons is a good angle. Maybe have Alsatia give you some holy water or a blessing or something? (Doesn't have to be an actual inventory item, just something she says she's doing)

    - Why are they "persecuted" souls? It seems like strange wording; "trapped" is just as accurate.

    - The liberated spirits having actual stories to tell was a really cool touch

    - One of the persecuted souls appears to be directly under a pile of rocks in the initial big room. This isn't the case, but it looks like that on the map. People might quit early and assume it's a bug. (Same with one of the souls by the cavern transition - the one that ends up being last)

    - Giant cavern room seems unnecessarily giant (unless that's wher the challenge part is)

    I didn't try to find the challenge area because I was solo :)
    --
    My foundry campaign "In Thrall to the God of Rage":
    Crumorn the Spiked: NW-DCDX6KMED
    Nerisatis the Cold: NW-DNIEWE95D
  • darkstalker311darkstalker311 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Thanks for the input! Somehow I knew there would be some errors just needed someone else’s eyes! I will fix those up and in the mean time I played your adventure and left you a review, great job and thanks again! If anyone else would like to trade reviews give me a holler.
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