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Vira's Childhood (My Sun elf Hunter/Ranger) :)

rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
edited November 2014 in Art and Fiction
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"A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    ulvielulviel Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 741 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    So.. what shortcommings and weaknesses does she have?
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    beckylunaticbeckylunatic Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 14,231 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    Knox and Zoey are obviously all about the genocide. It fits with their characterization so well.
    Guild Leader - The Lords of Light

    Neverwinter Census 2017

    All posts pending disapproval by Cecilia
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    sockmunkeysockmunkey Member Posts: 4,622 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    Super young yet super talented. Check
    One of a kind/ Last of her tribe, race, group. Check
    Improbable mix of races. Check
    Power over men/all men want her (inate seduction). Check
    Rebeling against the grain, just for the sake of extra drama. Check

    This scores a solid 11 out of 10 on the Mary-sue meter.
    I'd also like to add that a 15 year old seductive succubus is more then just a little creepy.
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    ulvielulviel Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 741 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    sockmunkey wrote: »
    Super young yet super talented. Check
    One of a kind/ Last of her tribe, race, group. Check
    Improbable mix of races. Check
    Power over men/all men want her (inate seduction). Check
    Rebeling against the grain, just for the sake of extra drama. Check

    This scores a solid 11 out of 10 on the Mary-sue meter.
    I'd also like to add that a 15 year old seductive succubus is more then just a little creepy.

    Which is why I asked about shortcommings. If she has some really good ones, she doesn't count as Mary Sue.
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    pindaoppindaop Member Posts: 117 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    ulviel wrote: »
    Which is why I asked about shortcommings. If she has some really good ones, she doesn't count as Mary Sue.

    only weakness is
    she gets pounded by perma stealth trs in mod 5
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    notsheriffsrsnotsheriffsrs Banned Users Posts: 396 Bounty Hunter
    edited November 2014
    SGT Knox will spank you little girl.

    Don't mess with the most Alpha/Manly/Testosterone-filled NPC in the entire game.

    You gun get ravaged by his BBC.
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    pindaoppindaop Member Posts: 117 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    notsheriffsrs wrote: »
    SGT Knox will spank you little girl.

    Don't mess with the most Alpha/Manly/Testosterone-filled NPC in the entire game.

    You gun get ravaged by his BBC.


    we was having fun until you came
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    notsheriffsrsnotsheriffsrs Banned Users Posts: 396 Bounty Hunter
    edited November 2014
    pindaop wrote: »
    we was having fun until you came

    No I don't want your oranges mate.
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    Her main weakness is the fact she doesnt see the Truth, she is so blinded by anger she doesnt see that Knox him slef was decived. Zoey is just following orders. Vira's other weakness are minor such as Arrogance, Not very subtle :)
    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
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    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    ulvielulviel Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 741 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    I know well what a succubus is, but do *you* know what a Mary-Sue is? I strongly recommend you to check those links (and even browse a little more after you do):

    http://www.springhole.net/writing/whatisamarysue.htm
    http://www.gotoquiz.com/is_your_character_a_mary_sue_2
    http://www.wikihow.com/Avoid-Making-a-Mary-Sue
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    ulvielulviel Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 741 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    rockshi30 wrote: »
    Her main weakness is the fact she doesnt see the Truth, she is so blinded by anger she doesnt see that Knox him slef was decived. Zoey is just following orders. Vira's other weakness are minor such as Arrogance, Not very subtle :)

    Weakness that doesn't influence her, hm... performance, doesn't count.
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    Oh i do know, The point of this was to be Fun i am a Role player and i love Neverwinter! i see though that this was a mistake i should have never made this in the first place :(
    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    ulvielulviel Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 741 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    Oh the idea itself was good, really. The problem is you turned our favorite tavern into a shrine, where all NPCs whorship your char (who, btw screams "look how beautiful and overall awesome I am!"). You can't be surprized people don't want to participate.
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    oh what i thought id close this. and that was on purpose, besides the character in game no longer exsists.
    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    destinyknightdestinyknight Member Posts: 962 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    I'm a full time Rper as well. But Sockmonkey and Ulviel do have a point. the character is very mary sue like.
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    SHE is gone this thread is old... Vira is gone so please stop commenting here :)
    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    OH yeah i revised my rp thread you should check that out. :) plus how do you delete a reply if thats possible. :)
    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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    destinyknightdestinyknight Member Posts: 962 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    I think mods do that.

    And I dont really do forum Rp anymore. I do my Rps ingame.
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    rockshi30rockshi30 Member Posts: 37 Arc User
    edited November 2014
    I PERFER it also in game it was just an experiment
    "A true leader is not judged by his/her victories but by his/her ability to overcome defeat"
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