Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the mission and I appreciate all your feedback. I do plan on overhauling the dialogue for both episodes. I've been out of the game during the holidays. Hopefully I can get back in soon to do that... and work on the next installment... Thanks again!
Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the mission and I appreciate all your feedback. I do plan on overhauling the dialogue for both episodes. I've been out of the game during the holidays. Hopefully I can get back in soon to do that... and work on the next installment... Thanks again!
stolu, Thank you very much for the review. One of my primary goals in this mission was to get the player invested in the success Durken's mission. I was wondering how well that came across to another player. I did build the Durken Interior from scratch. It's funny you mention the Bedrolls. The map was so close to the…
I would love for you to take a look at my two-parter... Whenever the missions get re-published, that is... Mission Name: Contact Squared Part 1 Author: eldil Minimum Level: 41+ Allegiance: Federation Project ID: ST-HDKD38CDP Estimated Mission Length: 1hour 30minutes Mission Name: Contact Squared Part 2 Author: eldil…
Thanks Zorbane... If anyone decides to play "Contact Squared part 1", I need a little help: I've gotten a couple reports of an untargetable enemy in the mission. The players who reported it didn't give me enough information to find the problem. The best info points to a commando on the second map. I've done several…
A question for anyone who has played this mission: I've gotten a couple reports of an untargetable enemy in the mission. The players who reported it didn't give me enough information to find the problem. The best info points to a commando on the second map. I've done several playthroughs (on the live version) and have not…
"Bait and Switch" by starswordc reviewed by eldil So, this won't be a "fine toothed comb" review because I really can't think of much to say about it except that it's awesome. I loved the narrative style, it added an extra dimension to the experience. The whole thing was very immersive. There are a couple map changes that…
"Orders Form the Top" by @Duncan-Idaho Review by eldil The "String of Gags as a plotline" concept has a been around for a while. It apparently works great for movies like "Naked Gun" and "Scary Movie". A lot of people find it extremely entertaining, I don't happen to be a fan of the genre. With that being said, a lot of…
So, I was hoping to become a little more involved in the foundry community, and this thread looks like a good place to start. Do I just pick a mission from the list and review it? or is there a system I'm supposed to follow? Also, here are my first two (and only) published missions: Mission Name: Contact Squared Author:…
Catstar, I really enjoy your reviews. I would like to submit a two-part mission for you to look at. "Contact Squared Part 1" "Contact Squared Part 2" Thanks in advance...
Hey Stoutes, Are you taking requests for Mission reviews? If so, I just finished the second half of my two-parter and I was wondering if you could check it out... "Contact Squared Part 1" "Contact Squared Part 2" Thanks in advance.
Hey there Evil, I'll start off by thanking you for all the time you spend on these mission reports. They are a big help. With that said, I'd like to add another mission to your queue. I've finally finished "Contact Squared Part 2" and I would really appreciate your feedback. I've made a few adjustments in Part 1 (and Part…
Thanks for the review evil70th, I appreciate the feedback. And thanks to anyone else who played the mission. I know I have a tendency to randomly capitalize words... You should have seen it before I proofread... I discovered some of the tips you mentioned when I was working on Part 2, I planned on applying some of that…
Just finished your mission. It was a cool concept: I really liked the appearance and speach patterns of the Cyiis. I was initially confused by your choice to invent some crewmembers, but it paid off in the end. (I won't spoil it...) I appreciate the attempt to give some personality to a Bridge Officer, It just didn't…
I took a different approach: I used an Interact with the "Point Pistol" animation to trigger an explosion... In the case of my mission: The player is destroying a device in the middle of an action sequence. They already have their weapon drawn, so it adds to the illusion. Of course, it's my first mission, so I don't really…
I've just posted my first mission, and I would greatly appreciate some feedback. I like the in-depth information you provide, so I was hoping you could take a look at mine... Here is my Forum thread Mission Name: Contact Squared Author: eldil1 Minimum Level: 41+ Allegiance: Federation Project ID: ST-HDKD38CDP Estimated…
Re-published and was put in the queue at #76. After about 15 - 20min, I'm at #62... Of course, I don't know if the queue is Actually Moving, or if everyone is dropping out and getting back in... Has anyone been able to publish successfully?