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  • leviathan99#2867 leviathan99 Member Posts: 7,747 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    I can't figure out why anyone would try to insist what MUST happen to the new universe or people based in it based on probability of the same events unfolding. They don't have to be probable. The writers just have to decide to make them happen.

    When has probability EVER been right in Star Trek?

    I can think of dozens of times where someone stated that the probability of an event was low or high. And they were never right. Because what happened was what the writer wanted to happen. To get the events the writers needed or arrive at the point that the story was supposed to make.

    Probability is a red herring.

    If the writers want Tuvok or Picard or Guinan or the Borg, they'll make it happen.

    And I'm going to advance predict that they'll setup the introduction of the Borg in this one, with the Borg as the next villains. Missing colonies, maybe. A Borg after the end credits.

    And people may complain and say they should do Klingons -- and I'm burned out on the Borg a bit as well. But if I were putting a teaser into the end of the movie to get audiences buzzing for the next one? I'd probably go with the Borg.

    Maybe have the next film be about Klingons and Kirk putting aside differences to fight the Borg. Because it would fill seats in a theater.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    I can't figure out why anyone would try to insist what MUST happen to the new universe or people based in it based on probability of the same events unfolding. They don't have to be probable. The writers just have to decide to make them happen
    .

    Even writers can't fight the curve
    When has probability EVER been right in Star Trek?

    All the time ??
    Data and Spock Jadzia and Tuvok (later corpse girl as well) always giving probablities
    I can think of dozens of times where someone stated that the probability of an event was low or high. And they were never right. Because what happened was what the writer wanted to happen. To get the events the writers needed or arrive at the point that the story was supposed to make.
    and hundreds of times it was right

    Example
    butter a piece of toast
    spread it nice and thick
    holding it vertically by the corner over your most expensive carpet drop it

    the probability of it landing butter side down is considerably higher than 50%
    indeed butter and drop 100 pieces of toast and about 70% will land butter side down (more if the bread is curved , the toast is particularly crispy or the carpet is hard to clean)
    this is due to probability And the law of bloody mindedness
    Probability is a red herring.

    that would be PLOT
    If the writers want Tuvok or Picard or Guinan or the Borg, they'll make it happen.
    only if they send back another time traveller to save the timeline from kirk

    And I'm going to advance predict that they'll setup the introduction of the Borg in this one, with the Borg as the next villains. Missing colonies, maybe. A Borg after the end credits.

    And kill the franchise ENTIRELY
    Trek fans are totally sick of the Borg
    And people may complain and say they should do Klingons -- and I'm burned out on the Borg a bit as well. But if I were putting a teaser into the end of the movie to get audiences buzzing for the next one? I'd probably go with the Borg.

    Id go with Spock standing over the body of Kirk with a phaser in his hand firing into the body over and over again

    OR the Enterprise being scanned and displayed on a view screen by a Grinning (orignal series ) Gorn

    Maybe have the next film be about Klingons and Kirk putting aside differences to fight the Borg. Because it would fill seats in a theater.

    Or the Borg and Klingons putting aside their differences to fight Kirk
    Live long and Prosper
  • herbie1966herbie1966 Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    How can Guinan (or anybody for that matter) die in the Ribbon if Picard was able to bring Kirk back???

    She's not dead.

    I understand you want to make up stuff to ease your conflict with JJ Trek, but come on, at least make it reasonable.

    If you really want to be clever, you should have said that Kirk is still alive...

    If somebody else goes into the Ribbon and finds him then brings him back again.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    She died in it the FIRST time as the younger dumber kirk in the less advanced enterprise blows the hell out of it
    Live long and Prosper
  • herbie1966herbie1966 Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    She died in it the FIRST time as the younger dumber kirk in the less advanced enterprise blows the hell out of it

    :rolleyes:

    Now you're really being silly.
  • born2bwild1born2bwild1 Member Posts: 1,329 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    I have heard semi - credible reports that Starfleet headquaters and Starfleet Acedemy are completely destroyed.

    In the end Starfleet is disbanded and kirk and crew are 1 of the few earth starships that remain.

    The Federation breaks apart and Kirk goes it alone.

    until perhaps movie 3
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    "Fleeing from the (insert baddy here) Tyranny the last Starship Enterprise leads a rag tag fleet on a lonely Quest a shining planet known as Romulus"


    JJ is making battlestar Galactica He always was

    the phaser has Recoil??
    the ships weapons are DHC?
    The crew is made up of over sexed teens
    Live long and Prosper
  • centersolacecentersolace Member Posts: 11,178 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    "Fleeing from the (insert baddy here) Tyranny the last Starship Enterprise leads a rag tag fleet on a lonely Quest a shining planet known as Romulus"


    JJ is making battlestar Galactica He always was

    the phaser has Recoil??
    the ships weapons are DHC?
    The crew is made up of over sexed teens

    Though, let us honest with ourselves, that started with Brannon Braga and Ronald D. Moore.
  • leviathan99#2867 leviathan99 Member Posts: 7,747 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    .

    Even writers can't fight the curve

    Er. They can and do. That's what makes writing EFFORT and not simply REPORTING. And even good journalism has this tension to it.

    Writing is where you take something, you establish it as improbable, and then you make it happen. How successfully you accomplish that is one measure of how well your writing gets judged.

    In ST 2009, they made the original series crew winding up on their familiar places on the Enterprise improbable. Then they made it happen. And maybe didn't do the best job on every technical detail but made it emotionally believable if you turn your brain off.

    Writing, narrative, storytelling... All are about taking an event or an outcome, establishing it as improbable, then doing the work to get to that improbable outcome.

    A story with a probable outcome isn't a story. It's an anecdote.

    For example:

    - I went to the supermarket and bought peas. Not a story. There is no incident. Nothing improbable happens. Believable. No work required to convince people.

    - I went to the supermarket and bought peas and a shopping cart dented my car on the way out. Story potential. Doesn't require much work. There is an incident. How improbable the chain of events are needs to be played up. Believable but little work required to convince people.

    - I went to the supermarket and bought peas and aliens stole them as soon as I left the grocery store. Definitely a story. Requires a lot more work to sell because of its improbability. There is an incident. Something improbable happens. Unbelievable and requires a lot of work.

    No work to tell the story = no story.

    Storytelling IS the act of fighting the curve.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    Er. They can and do. That's what makes writing EFFORT and not simply REPORTING. And even good journalism has this tension to it.

    good journalism is 100% factual DEEPLY researched and entirely dull
    you can spot a Good news report
    the reporter is sitting down , indoors ,infront of a WALL , he speaks plainly and without accent
    he does not pretend to interview someone , He does not cut away to an idiot stood in the way of a storm or hiding behind a burning car.
    He speaks only proven fact and he does not show emotion
    Writing is where you take something, you establish it as improbable, and then you make it happen. How successfully you accomplish that is one measure of how well your writing gets judged.
    "you canna change the laws of physics"
    and you also can't change the curve

    Man climbs tree
    Man falls out of tree
    Man hits ground

    Story

    Man climbs tree
    Tree explodes
    Elephants rain down

    Junk

    In ST 2009, they made the original series crew winding up on their familiar places on the Enterprise improbable. Then they made it happen. And maybe didn't do the best job on every technical detail but made it emotionally believable if you turn your brain off.

    The USS enterprise contains a brewery
    one of the consoles is a supermarket check out on its side
    theres a photocopier
    the computer can't recognise a russian accent

    and no they do not wind up in the right places
    where is nurse chapel?
    Where is Janice rand
    Why is spock a perv??
    Why is chekov suddenly "transporter chief"
    why is sulu portrayed as incompetent merely to let spock play big boy??
    Why is uhura a TART?
    Writing, narrative, storytelling... All are about taking an event or an outcome, establishing it as improbable, then doing the work to get to that improbable outcome.

    Actually its "the art of the possible"
    A story with a probable outcome isn't a story. It's an anecdote.

    For example:

    - I went to the supermarket and bought peas. Not a story. There is no incident. Nothing improbable happens. Believable. No work required to convince people.

    Hmm drama
    were they TINNED? Frozen? Fresh? were they on special?
    did you have a coupon ??
    - I went to the supermarket and bought peas and a shopping cart dented my car on the way out. Story potential. Doesn't require much work. There is an incident. How improbable the chain of events are needs to be played up. Believable but little work required to convince people.
    -

    sounds like a job for a claims firm
    I went to the supermarket and bought peas and aliens stole them as soon as I left the grocery store. Definitely a story. Requires a lot more work to sell because of its improbability. There is an incident. Something improbable happens. Unbelievable and requires a lot of work.

    And number one would make a good movie
    Number two a reasonable episode of CSI new york
    And Number three a very bad 30 second cartoon
    No work to tell the story = no story.

    Storytelling IS the act of fighting the curve.

    Storytelling is following the curve in an interesting way
    Live long and Prosper
  • cptjhuntercptjhunter Member Posts: 2,288 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    SNIP

    Argue all you want about what should be what.At the end of the day, it will be in in JJ's image. That means it will make no sense, and suck.....with explosions, and lens flare.
    Just bring sunglasses to the theatre, and turn off your brain.I don't do drugs, but I bet if I smoked a ton of pot, and watch Abrams Trek, I would like it.
  • allmyteeallmytee Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    Our clones have mistakes, however there was an episode of tng, "up the long ladder" which consisted of just 5 people having servived, as clones, for over 200 years before signs of replicative fading were taking place.

    Pon Farr is Vulcan "mating season," it has nothing at all to do with the planet Vulcan.
    Pon farr can happen, and be resolved, anywhere.

    And just because the vulcans are few in numbers, does not mean they no longer have a voice.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    But he can't go home to his familys land
    also his "betrothed" died

    Clones never work out
    and never will

    And look at any federation of states

    Does the USA give equal weight to the state of California and Silver lake Nevada??
    of course it doesn't

    (if anyone here lives in or near silver lake Nevada please let me know I went there once 20 years ago)
    Live long and Prosper
  • aeolusdallasaeolusdallas Member Posts: 143 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    Gary Mitchell died before birth (his fathers life was not saved by Kirks father)

    Garth likewise never lived

    its complicated but due to the destruction in the first film almost no one exists from the real universe (for example there has never been a savik a sanik a Tuvok etc)

    the destiny of entire planets was erased.

    Kirk has no brother (destroyed before birth) thus the intergalactic parasite destroyed countless worlds.

    Spocks family is dead Vulcan no longer exists there is no Babel conference and thus the Orions are much much more powerful

    the Borg probably win the battle of wolf 359 (because the federation is weaker) etc


    Kirk's brother was in the movie...... Where did you get the idea that Mitchell's dad was saved by Kirks? Garth was around before the Kelvin was destroyed so once again you are incorrect. Basically nothing you just posted is true.
  • allmyteeallmytee Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    A single clone from a single dna sorce can indeed work

    Spocks "betrothed" in this time line is Uhura so he'll be fine, even though you did say he wasn't Vulcan.

    And the vulcans will always have a voice they are a founding member of the Federation. Trying to compare Trek to real world is fail.

    Now heres some more food for you nice troll :)
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    Uhura is NOT his betrothed she is someone he is harrassing

    Spock is Half vulcan

    and JJ is the Troll not those who oppose the attrocity
    Live long and Prosper
  • aeolusdallasaeolusdallas Member Posts: 143 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    He died before his second son was born
    he died before he met Gary mitchells DAD and saved him
    He died before he met Garth (thus garth also dies)

    Garth was a captain while kirk was a cadet (so not much older ) actually the actors were even closer in age

    Being slain out of time changed everything

    actually somehow Kirk became 20 years younger and went a bit strange as well

    William Shatner was only like 3 or 4 years older than Chris Pine when he started on Star Trek and the characters went to the Academy only a few years apart.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    Shatner was late thirties

    the new boy is still in short pants

    Chekov is supposed to be "like a son" to Kirk
    not like an older smarter brother
    Live long and Prosper
  • aeolusdallasaeolusdallas Member Posts: 143 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    Kirk is now the ONLY son

    Kirk SENIOR not junior knew and interacted with both men mentioned

    Its in the "treatment" not the screened episode

    anyway
    without vulcan im afraid our own era never happens
    and the universe will probably end WAY before Picard is born

    Now you are just deliberately lying. Kirk's dad never interacted (as far as we know) with Garth or with Mitchell's father. Kirk was the junior son and his brother was shown briefly in the 2009 movie.
  • allmyteeallmytee Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    Ha we finally worked it out of you! All your arguements, as incorrect as they are, are fueled form your dislike of abramsverse. :)

    But you can take solace in knowing that this timeline exsist congruently with the timeline which we have already witnessed.

    You, and I, or anyone else does not have to like it. But he's bringing the dough to paramount so he gets to make whatever story he wants to in the Star Trek universe.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    No he was not (some people claim he is the boy in the other car he is not credited)

    and yes kirks father was a "legend" in starfleet

    but hey the NEXT film kills everyone else probably

    I Could write a better Trek film than this
    indeed so could almost anyone
    Live long and Prosper
  • artan42artan42 Member Posts: 10,450 Bug Hunter
    edited December 2012
    Wasn't Kirks brother in the film? He drives bast him in the car in the beginning.
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  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    uncredited so we don't know

    if kirk had a living brother he would not be a suicidal jerk would he
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  • aeolusdallasaeolusdallas Member Posts: 143 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    Shatner was late thirties

    the new boy is still in short pants

    Chekov is supposed to be "like a son" to Kirk
    not like an older smarter brother

    Shatner was in his early 30's and Pine his late 20's. It's pretty obvious now that you are a troll.
  • sollvaxsollvax Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    And its clear that you don't go to conventions

    Kirk was mid-late thirties when chekov was introduced
    Chekov (according to SHATNER) was added so that Kirk could be a "father figure" to an Ensign

    Do not call people trolls its impolite and makes you look needy

    and if you think 37 is "early thirties " you have a poor grasp of maths
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  • leviathan99#2867 leviathan99 Member Posts: 7,747 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    sollvax wrote: »
    And its clear that you don't go to conventions

    Kirk was mid-late thirties when chekov was introduced
    Chekov (according to SHATNER) was added so that Kirk could be a "father figure" to an Ensign

    Do not call people trolls its impolite and makes you look needy

    and if you think 37 is "early thirties " you have a poor grasp of maths

    And J.J. Trek is set years before that. This is a new Chekov and he's ten years younger than Kirk.

    J.J.-verse Kirk is 25 at the end of the film and, I think, a pretty realistic depiction of what a modern 25 year old is like, particularly one who had a hard life.
  • leviathan99#2867 leviathan99 Member Posts: 7,747 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    And this Chekov is four years older than classic Chekov, whereas Kirk is a couple of months older than classic Kirk.

    The film is set contemporary with when Prime Kirk would have been a Lt. on the Farragut.
  • weylandjuarezweylandjuarez Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    Guys... this script was co-written by - y'know - the Prometheus guy... Lindelof is a hack of the highest order - don't look for any meaning in anything the guys writes because it's all complete b***ocks and really - he doesn't give a s**t about the Trek fans.

    Deep breaths :) either it'll be fun or it'll suck - but it'll never make any kind of sense.
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  • marcusdkanemarcusdkane Member Posts: 7,439 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    maxvitor wrote: »
    ...time travel, which in my opinion, sucks.
    Only because you have a very linear view of time... Effect does not necessarily follow cause when time travel is involved...
    maxvitor wrote: »
    The only reason the Borg became aware of humanity was due to Q's meddling, avoid Q, avoid the Borg.
    Wrong.
    When the Enterprise-D first encountered the Borg (as a result of Q's meddling), the Borg cube (wait for it...) was already en-route for Earth... They were already coming. Q accelerated the 'First Contact' between the Federation and the Borg to allow the Federation time to prepare (which wasn't used effectively, hence the whooping at Wolf 359). So why were the Borg already en-route for Earth?
    maxvitor wrote: »
    the NX01.
    The message the drones sent from the NX 01 was what notified the Borg of the era of the existence of the Federation (as the drones had 24th Century knowledge) and that is why a Borg Cube was then en-route for Earth, which Q then flung the Enterprise-D in front of (because he didn't want to lose his pets...)
  • cormorancormoran Member Posts: 440 Arc User
    edited December 2012
    LOL Wow that reads like a parody of late 80's/early 90's action movie trailers.


    *starts with an explosion along with orchestral music*

    "An epic chess game of life and death"
    *insert a scene or two of the antagonist doing or saying something antagonistic*

    "Love will be challenged"
    *insert scene of the love interest in danger*

    "friendships will be torn apart"
    *insert scene of two protagonists arguing or fighting with each other*

    "and sacrifices must be made"
    *insert fake-out death scene*

    "an explosive action thriller that takes Star Trek..."
    *insert more explosions with the title card flying at the screen*

    "... Into Darkness!"

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