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A man in combat armor peered through smoke and sparks into the wreckage as one of his comrades shined a bright light on the subject in question -

A pale-skinned, hairless man in some sort of flight suit, golden blood trickling from several recent wounds.

~Morrigan "LaughingTrendy"
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  • tymerstotymersto Member Posts: 433 Arc User
    This one, I'll admit, is the most interesting of the Incursion stories.


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  • galattgalatt Member Posts: 709 Arc User
    Whatever you pay Mr. Reed for his work, it's not enough. Seriously great story. Will there be a part 2?
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  • rosetyler51rosetyler51 Member Posts: 1,631 Arc User
    I want to hope this leads into a temporal mission.
  • thay8472thay8472 Member Posts: 6,165 Arc User
    another cool blog.
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  • legendarylycan#5411 legendarylycan Member Posts: 37,284 Arc User
    Day 8

    Vrell opened his remaining eye slowly and found himself back in his cell once more.

    “The man from the stars returns,” said Ajai from his cell. “Worse for wear, sadly.”

    The Na’kuhl forced himself to sit, despite the sharp pains that wracked his body, and regarded his fellow prisoner. “They took your beard. Why did they take your beard?”

    “They didn’t like my answers to their latest questions,” said Ajai. “I think I might have touched a nerve in the little one… Cooley? Cooper. I can’t tell the two of them apart.”

    “Cooley is the one with the growth on the end of his nose. Cooper is the dullard with one eyebrow.”

    “So you say,” replied Ajai with a grin. “Then it was Cooper who took offense and relieved me of my luxurious beard. A crime I hope to avenge one day.”

    “The list of crimes in need of vengeance grows quite long,” said Vrell. “I propose a joint venture on our parts when it comes to meting out this justice. Otherwise, we might fall to old age before we finish.”

    Ajai blinked, and then let his booming laugh fill the air.

    “Agreed! An eminently sound plan, sir. And which one of them shall we deal with first?”

    “I plan on starting with Cooley. He owes me an eye.”

    an eye, you say...i think i may have seen this particular na'kuhl ingame​​
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  • keletteskelettes Member Posts: 488 Arc User
    Ooh so they got involved with the eugenics war too, huh. :smile:

    About the continuation: in-game episode or next lore blog? :3
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  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2016
    I thought this said at first. A man in combat armor peed through smoke and sparks into the wreckage.
  • captaind3captaind3 Member Posts: 2,449 Arc User
    This one was super super cool.

    This Na'khul said DAMN the temporal war, I want Colonel Green. It just became personal. I dig that.
    galatt wrote: »
    Whatever you pay Mr. Reed for his work, it's not enough. Seriously great story. Will there be a part 2?

    Amen. Give that man a raise.
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  • askrayaskray Member Posts: 3,329 Arc User
    This was a great read while on lunch!!
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  • k20vteck20vtec Member Posts: 535 Arc User
    NICE READ!
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  • forthegamerforthegamer Member Posts: 177 Arc User
    Get these blogs into the game somehow and pay Mr. Reed a ton of money to craft an entire arc story line and stuff. Because the man certainly earns his keep.
  • sheldonlcoopersheldonlcooper Member Posts: 4,042 Arc User
    kudos to the writer on this one. Gets Sheldon's seal of approval.
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  • leemwatsonleemwatson Member Posts: 5,519 Arc User
    *Generous Applause*
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  • crm14916crm14916 Member Posts: 1,536 Arc User
    Excellent... ;)

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  • angrybobhangrybobh Member Posts: 420 Arc User
    I found myself looking for the next page button after reading the first part. I'd really like to keep reading this story.

    Well done Mr. Reed
  • breadandcircusesbreadandcircuses Member Posts: 2,355 Arc User
    edited May 2016
    I want to hope this leads into a temporal mission.

    Yeah, both the subject matter and possibilities are good for this one. :smile:


    Day 8

    Vrell opened his remaining eye slowly and found himself back in his cell once more.

    “The man from the stars returns,” said Ajai from his cell. “Worse for wear, sadly.”

    The Na’kuhl forced himself to sit, despite the sharp pains that wracked his body, and regarded his fellow prisoner. “They took your beard. Why did they take your beard?”

    “They didn’t like my answers to their latest questions,” said Ajai. “I think I might have touched a nerve in the little one… Cooley? Cooper. I can’t tell the two of them apart.”

    “Cooley is the one with the growth on the end of his nose. Cooper is the dullard with one eyebrow.”

    “So you say,” replied Ajai with a grin. “Then it was Cooper who took offense and relieved me of my luxurious beard. A crime I hope to avenge one day.”

    “The list of crimes in need of vengeance grows quite long,” said Vrell. “I propose a joint venture on our parts when it comes to meting out this justice. Otherwise, we might fall to old age before we finish.”

    Ajai blinked, and then let his booming laugh fill the air.

    “Agreed! An eminently sound plan, sir. And which one of them shall we deal with first?”

    “I plan on starting with Cooley. He owes me an eye.”

    an eye, you say...i think i may have seen this particular na'kuhl ingame​​

    I dunno about that...
    Day 21

    Vrell opened his eyes – one for the first time.

    “It’s the same lovely shade of red,” said a grinning Ajai. “I was quite specific with the cyberneticist about that. I trust you approve?”
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  • dalolorndalolorn Member Posts: 3,655 Arc User
    Fascinating... and a good read. :grin:

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  • tousseautousseau Member Posts: 1,484 Arc User
    I see what you did there...

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  • zedbrightlander1zedbrightlander1 Member Posts: 14,782 Arc User
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  • nikolunusnikolunus Member Posts: 162 Arc User
    Your writer deserves more pay for his work.
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  • materwindumaterwindu Member Posts: 117 Arc User
    If they hadn't of gotten there timelines messed up, it might have been an interesting read. The Eugenics Wars ended before 2000, and Colonel Green and his men were from WW3 which happened sometime after the Bell Riots in the late 2020s.
  • aeolusdallasaeolusdallas Member Posts: 143 Arc User
    materwindu wrote: »
    If they hadn't of gotten there timelines messed up, it might have been an interesting read. The Eugenics Wars ended before 2000, and Colonel Green and his men were from WW3 which happened sometime after the Bell Riots in the late 2020s.

    It's called a retcon. And putting the Eugenics wars and Greene together makes a lot more sense than having it in the 90's
  • tinyfistedtinyfisted Member Posts: 193 Arc User
    tousseau wrote: »
    I see what you did there...

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    And Khan, with his superior intellect, reads Punjabi very well... in ssssspaaaaaaace...
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  • saurializardsaurializard Member Posts: 4,404 Arc User
    edited May 2016
    tinyfisted wrote: »
    tousseau wrote: »
    I see what you did there...

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    And Khan, with his superior intellect, reads Punjabi very well... in ssssspaaaaaaace...
    Just like Shakespeare in the original Klingon,
    here comes Moby TRIBBLE in the original Punjabi.

    That was a great read, indeed. Tipped hat to the writer.
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  • questeriusquesterius Member Posts: 8,509 Arc User
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  • megawolf0megawolf0 Member Posts: 114 Arc User
    Good read. Wondering if this will lad to an episode and wonder if in some other alternate universe if by chance the augmented humans are ruling Earth and have their own Empire. Guessing the Klingnons in that universe will have a worthy opponent.
  • lorne12lorne12 Member Posts: 90 Arc User
    I'm a little bit confused: Khan was in the 1990s where the Eugenic Wars took place but Green was something arround 2040-2060 (WW3), so this situation with the Na'kul either takes place in the Eugenic Wars which would make Green very old in the 2040s (and from what we've seen from him in TOS and ENT he wasn't hat old then) or it takes place in WW3 but that would make me ask why are there any augments then.

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  • djf021djf021 Member Posts: 1,382 Arc User
    Yeah, this story is awesome, well written and VERY interesting. But that timing issue is kind of an awkward faux pas. Someone mentioned retconning, but that doesn't dismiss established canon.

    That being said, again, it was a great story. Thanks!
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  • sistericsisteric Member Posts: 768 Arc User
    Are we sure it's the same Green and not an ancestor of the WW3 Green?
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  • legendarylycan#5411 legendarylycan Member Posts: 37,284 Arc User
    an ancestor ALSO named phillip green and who just so happens to be a colonel spouting about 'genetic purity'? possible, but unlikely​​
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    An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
    A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
    A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"


    "It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
    "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
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    I gain power by understanding both.
    In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
    I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
    The Force is united within me.
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