A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
maybe i was...so many things happen during puppyhood that it's hard to keep track of it all - although i do kinda look rather big for a puppy there, so perhaps that's an adolescent shot and i'm drunk
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
maybe i was...so many things happen during puppyhood that it's hard to keep track of it all - although i do kinda look rather big for a puppy there, so perhaps that's an adolescent shot and i'm drunk
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
Time for my weekly wall of text. I finished playing through "Shadows Rising," by Sithscourge. The list of the total grammar list was too long for in game mail, so I have no choice but to put it here. Here are the errors that need to be corrected.
On the hail mission page, there is no space between Vice AdmiralWinston Purrchill. You also need a comma in Several ships have been lost, and theyve asked us to investigate. Stargazer is one word, and investigate is spelled incorrectly. And you are missing commas in Admiral ShRikes flagship, the USS Catastrophe, will be joining us there.Catastrophe and joining are also misspelled. In the line stating where the mission begins, mission and transporter are both misspelled.
When talking to the Catastrophe, you need the word at in the phrase, Weve detected the wreckage of the USS Stargazer at bearing 175.4. In addition, bearing indicated the compass bearing, while mark indicates up or down, like turning a compass onto its side. So that phrase should be bearing 174, mark 4.
And you have more missing commas in Federation Starship, you have encroached on Ferasan sovereign territory. Surrender now, and your deaths will be swift. And then again in NX-909090-X, we will send you to whatever gods you pray to. All fighter wings, attack. And then for proper grammar, it is to whatever gods to which you pray.
There are more missing commas and misspellings after destroying the Ferasan fighters, Excellent work, Vice Admiral. Theres an asteroid ahead that seems to be the launch point for the fighters. Ill take the Catastrophe, and scout ahead, while you and the ISS Queen Elizabeth clear a path.Very well, Admiral. Well rendezvous there.Lets see who gets there first.
You forgot the period when stating the Catastrophe is taking fire from Ferasan ships. And the button needs to be Helm, full impulse.Really, Vice Admiral? Thats the best you can come up with?No one appreciates my humour.
Cat Boarded: Winston Purrchill, the Ferasans have disabled my ship, and commenced boarding.Lets go help them out.Cant she do anything without my help?Vice Admiral, we are ready to render assistance to the Catastrophe.This is almost ironic, isnt it?
You need a period on I thought you had 9 lives.
A pack is a group of dogs, not cats. Vice Admiral, theyve taken several of my Pridemates, including Admiral Sh'rike, to that asteroid we passed earlier.Don't worry there, Kitty. I'll save your Pride.
During the Life Signs stage: Winston, I'm detecting several Caitian life signs nearby.Lead on, then.Winston, it looks like they're being experimented on....Winston, this equipment....But when we find out, we'll be .Dammit, Jim! Im an engineer, not a doctor.Vice Admiral, now that weve freed the Caitians, its time .
With Doctor M'alv, capitalize Do in "Do you think you'll.... And you need a comma in You're quite mad, you know. And you need to change the spelling to Geneticist.Too bad you won't live to tell the tale. And then you need to separate the sentences in need a little something more. Wouldnt you say?Ouch! Ouch! It hurts!
When talking to the General Shadowmancer: Surely, General, you realize....For your sake, the next batch . The semicolon in Do not fail me again needs to be a comma. As for you, Vice Admiral.a grenade in your direction, and beams .
You need to capitalize It seems they were gene splicing.Until next time, let the blood on the ground be your enemy's, and not your own.
But on and all, the mission was quite well made, and the story was well written. The only problem is the plethora (Understatement?) of grammar errors.
So, a Canelow was able to find me on Steam.....-stares at Suroo-
[06/16 11:51] [Combat (Self)] Your Advanced Dual Heavy Radiant Antiproton Cannons - Hypercharge deals 237970 (113626) Antiproton Damage(Critical) to Tactical Cube.
AHAHAHA! Eat it Borg!
[09/15 11:01] [Combat (Self)] You lose 12187085 Cold Damage from Death.
Death is OP, please nerf. I BLAME KURLAND FOR THIS!
Beech King 250, designation Sierra Tango Oscar Uniform Tango Echo Sierra requests Taxi clearance. I repeat, Beech King 250, designation Sierra Tango Oscar Uniform Tango Echo Sierra requests Taxi clearance.
That's quite the paradox, how could you nerf nerf when the nerf is nerfed. But how would the nerf be nerfed when the nerf is nerfed? This allows the nerf not to be nerfed since the nerf is nerfed? But if the nerf isn't nerfed, it could still nerf nerfs. But as soon as the nerf is nerfed, the nerf power is lost. So paradoxally it the nerf nerf lost its nerf, while it's still nerfed, which cannot be because the nerf was unable to nerf.
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
That's quite the paradox, how could you nerf nerf when the nerf is nerfed. But how would the nerf be nerfed when the nerf is nerfed? This allows the nerf not to be nerfed since the nerf is nerfed? But if the nerf isn't nerfed, it could still nerf nerfs. But as soon as the nerf is nerfed, the nerf power is lost. So paradoxally it the nerf nerf lost its nerf, while it's still nerfed, which cannot be because the nerf was unable to nerf.
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
That's quite the paradox, how could you nerf nerf when the nerf is nerfed. But how would the nerf be nerfed when the nerf is nerfed? This allows the nerf not to be nerfed since the nerf is nerfed? But if the nerf isn't nerfed, it could still nerf nerfs. But as soon as the nerf is nerfed, the nerf power is lost. So paradoxally it the nerf nerf lost its nerf, while it's still nerfed, which cannot be because the nerf was unable to nerf.
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
That's quite the paradox, how could you nerf nerf when the nerf is nerfed. But how would the nerf be nerfed when the nerf is nerfed? This allows the nerf not to be nerfed since the nerf is nerfed? But if the nerf isn't nerfed, it could still nerf nerfs. But as soon as the nerf is nerfed, the nerf power is lost. So paradoxally it the nerf nerf lost its nerf, while it's still nerfed, which cannot be because the nerf was unable to nerf.
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
That's quite the paradox, how could you nerf nerf when the nerf is nerfed. But how would the nerf be nerfed when the nerf is nerfed? This allows the nerf not to be nerfed since the nerf is nerfed? But if the nerf isn't nerfed, it could still nerf nerfs. But as soon as the nerf is nerfed, the nerf power is lost. So paradoxally it the nerf nerf lost its nerf, while it's still nerfed, which cannot be because the nerf was unable to nerf.
[Combat (Self)] Your Thalaron Pulse deals 94440 (51408) Radiation Damage to I.S.S. Sisko.
Non-crit in Normal Mirror.
[06/16 11:51] [Combat (Self)] Your Advanced Dual Heavy Radiant Antiproton Cannons - Hypercharge deals 237970 (113626) Antiproton Damage(Critical) to Tactical Cube.
AHAHAHA! Eat it Borg!
[09/15 11:01] [Combat (Self)] You lose 12187085 Cold Damage from Death.
Death is OP, please nerf. I BLAME KURLAND FOR THIS!
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
Suroo, first off, thank you for the two VRare Hanger Bay Cooldown Doffs. Secondly, M'ren is KDF so she cannot use one of the two. Third, with the VRare Doff, my Elite Drone Ships have a cd of ~20 seconds as opposed to ~30-36s.
[06/16 11:51] [Combat (Self)] Your Advanced Dual Heavy Radiant Antiproton Cannons - Hypercharge deals 237970 (113626) Antiproton Damage(Critical) to Tactical Cube.
AHAHAHA! Eat it Borg!
[09/15 11:01] [Combat (Self)] You lose 12187085 Cold Damage from Death.
Death is OP, please nerf. I BLAME KURLAND FOR THIS!
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch." "We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Passion and Serenity are one.
I gain power by understanding both.
In the chaos of their battle, I bring order.
I am a shadow, darkness born from light.
The Force is united within me.
That's quite the paradox, how could you nerf nerf when the nerf is nerfed. But how would the nerf be nerfed when the nerf is nerfed? This allows the nerf not to be nerfed since the nerf is nerfed? But if the nerf isn't nerfed, it could still nerf nerfs. But as soon as the nerf is nerfed, the nerf power is lost. So paradoxally it the nerf nerf lost its nerf, while it's still nerfed, which cannot be because the nerf was unable to nerf.
Comments
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
:P I t looks like you're singing...
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
Just what we need... A drunk werewolf... lol
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
On the hail mission page, there is no space between Vice AdmiralWinston Purrchill. You also need a comma in Several ships have been lost, and theyve asked us to investigate. Stargazer is one word, and investigate is spelled incorrectly. And you are missing commas in Admiral ShRikes flagship, the USS Catastrophe, will be joining us there. Catastrophe and joining are also misspelled. In the line stating where the mission begins, mission and transporter are both misspelled.
When talking to the Catastrophe, you need the word at in the phrase, Weve detected the wreckage of the USS Stargazer at bearing 175.4. In addition, bearing indicated the compass bearing, while mark indicates up or down, like turning a compass onto its side. So that phrase should be bearing 174, mark 4.
And you have more missing commas in Federation Starship, you have encroached on Ferasan sovereign territory. Surrender now, and your deaths will be swift. And then again in NX-909090-X, we will send you to whatever gods you pray to. All fighter wings, attack. And then for proper grammar, it is to whatever gods to which you pray.
There are more missing commas and misspellings after destroying the Ferasan fighters, Excellent work, Vice Admiral. Theres an asteroid ahead that seems to be the launch point for the fighters. Ill take the Catastrophe, and scout ahead, while you and the ISS Queen Elizabeth clear a path. Very well, Admiral. Well rendezvous there. Lets see who gets there first.
You forgot the period when stating the Catastrophe is taking fire from Ferasan ships. And the button needs to be Helm, full impulse. Really, Vice Admiral? Thats the best you can come up with? No one appreciates my humour.
Cat Boarded: Winston Purrchill, the Ferasans have disabled my ship, and commenced boarding. Lets go help them out. Cant she do anything without my help? Vice Admiral, we are ready to render assistance to the Catastrophe. This is almost ironic, isnt it?
You need a period on I thought you had 9 lives.
A pack is a group of dogs, not cats. Vice Admiral, theyve taken several of my Pridemates, including Admiral Sh'rike, to that asteroid we passed earlier. Don't worry there, Kitty. I'll save your Pride.
During the Life Signs stage: Winston, I'm detecting several Caitian life signs nearby. Lead on, then. Winston, it looks like they're being experimented on.... Winston, this equipment.... But when we find out, we'll be . Dammit, Jim! Im an engineer, not a doctor. Vice Admiral, now that weve freed the Caitians, its time .
With Doctor M'alv, capitalize Do in "Do you think you'll.... And you need a comma in You're quite mad, you know. And you need to change the spelling to Geneticist. Too bad you won't live to tell the tale. And then you need to separate the sentences in need a little something more. Wouldnt you say? Ouch! Ouch! It hurts!
When talking to the General Shadowmancer: Surely, General, you realize.... For your sake, the next batch . The semicolon in Do not fail me again needs to be a comma. As for you, Vice Admiral. a grenade in your direction, and beams .
You need to capitalize It seems they were gene splicing. Until next time, let the blood on the ground be your enemy's, and not your own.
But on and all, the mission was quite well made, and the story was well written. The only problem is the plethora (Understatement?) of grammar errors.
My Ship Builds: USS Conqueror, HMS Victorious, HMS Concord, ISS Queen Elizabeth, Black Widow III
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[06/16 11:51] [Combat (Self)] Your Advanced Dual Heavy Radiant Antiproton Cannons - Hypercharge deals 237970 (113626) Antiproton Damage(Critical) to Tactical Cube.
AHAHAHA! Eat it Borg!
[09/15 11:01] [Combat (Self)] You lose 12187085 Cold Damage from Death.
Death is OP, please nerf. I BLAME KURLAND FOR THIS!
My Ship Builds: USS Conqueror, HMS Victorious, HMS Concord, ISS Queen Elizabeth, Black Widow III
Click here to view my DeviantArt.
Please advice runway for takeoff.
I call it, the Stoutes paradox.
also, *digs up new wolf pup picture* just a profile shot this time
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/88/Sora_Concept_KH1.jpg
What have you been smoking?
I call it, the Stoutes paradox.
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
I call it, the Stoutes paradox.
now, this picture on the other paw...i could be stoned here
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlM2CWNTQ84
I call it, the Stoutes paradox.
next up; i look kinda mean in that one...or ticked off at something, maybe
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
I call it, the Stoutes paradox.
Non-crit in Normal Mirror.
[06/16 11:51] [Combat (Self)] Your Advanced Dual Heavy Radiant Antiproton Cannons - Hypercharge deals 237970 (113626) Antiproton Damage(Critical) to Tactical Cube.
AHAHAHA! Eat it Borg!
[09/15 11:01] [Combat (Self)] You lose 12187085 Cold Damage from Death.
Death is OP, please nerf. I BLAME KURLAND FOR THIS!
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
[06/16 11:51] [Combat (Self)] Your Advanced Dual Heavy Radiant Antiproton Cannons - Hypercharge deals 237970 (113626) Antiproton Damage(Critical) to Tactical Cube.
AHAHAHA! Eat it Borg!
[09/15 11:01] [Combat (Self)] You lose 12187085 Cold Damage from Death.
Death is OP, please nerf. I BLAME KURLAND FOR THIS!
#LegalizeAwoo
A normie goes "Oh, what's this?"
An otaku goes "UwU, what's this?"
A furry goes "OwO, what's this?"
A werewolf goes "Awoo, what's this?"
"It's nothing personal, I just don't feel like I've gotten to know a person until I've sniffed their crotch."
"We said 'no' to Mr. Curiosity. We're not home. Curiosity is not welcome, it is not to be invited in. Curiosity...is bad. It gets you in trouble, it gets you killed, and more importantly...it makes you poor!"
I call it, the Stoutes paradox.