I liked your quest, the puzzles were cool with nice negative results if you get them wrong, and the dialog flowed well. The fights were a little to easy for my taste but all in all it was good.
Ya the maze might be a bit too complex, if you leave at the same mirror you entered in (where the skeleton is) you exit the maze, maybe I'll throw something there to make it more obvious. Its only a 3x3 room set and the entrence mirror is the biggest clue on how to get out. I put that long tp run only for people who wanted…
I wasn't, I just didn't really have an idea of how long it would take to complete them. I have a good sense of length now so the next ones will be longer.