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  • pilatorpilator Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Campaign Name - Halfling to the Arcane Summit by @skylia120410
    Short Code: NW-DLKN9SL3U
    Mission Type: Story Escort Quest
    Average Duration: about 30minutes
    Amount of Combat: 3 different maps of monsters
    Starts at: in Blacklake to zone
    Mission Summary: Help the Halfing reach the Arcane Summit while fending off mystical invasions. Nola Ann wants to train to be a cleric or a wizard so she can travel to Neverwinter like so many of her friends, but she needs help to get to the training grounds known as the Arcane Summit to choose her calling and train to be a great wizard or healer.

    Author tips/hints: Part 1 of newest campaign: Halflings to the Summits (there are going to be 2 more quests TR Summit and GWF/GF Summit. Recommend 2-3 friends, mission is soloable but will be long and a challenge in some spots

    Campaign: Helping the Battlefate family
    Code: NWS-DQFRCWW9

    leave your info and i'll review you as well, would like some honest feedback on this campaign and the Halfling quest (as it part 1 of my newest campaign)

    I just went through your map.
    Okay not a difficult story with a lot of fight. The enemies are diverse and have different costumes.
    Unfortunately, the map was missing, me all the decorations. For example, in the hall magicians add some torches with lights, books, etc. that could be seen, that is an old and powerful advice.
    At the beginning of the conversation with Nola, a small mistake, it says "Mission Information". The dialogues are not too long, so I focused my attention the most fighting.

    Adds the decoration, perhaps more dialogue and should be great.
    "Return to Neverwinter"

    (ID: NW-DPZS2MN86)

    Role novel about a former hero of Neverwinter, who returns ...
  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    pilator wrote: »
    I just went through your map.
    Okay not a difficult story with a lot of fight. The enemies are diverse and have different costumes.
    Unfortunately, the map was missing, me all the decorations. For example, in the hall magicians add some torches with lights, books, etc. that could be seen, that is an old and powerful advice.
    At the beginning of the conversation with Nola, a small mistake, it says "Mission Information". The dialogues are not too long, so I focused my attention the most fighting.

    Adds the decoration, perhaps more dialogue and should be great.

    Ok thank you I am working on the details and dialogue addition what map though was the dialogue missing completely? so I can correct ASAP
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  • pilatorpilator Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Absolutely first conversation when you select the second part of the answer is at the end of the command "Mission Info", probably mistakenly put
    "Return to Neverwinter"

    (ID: NW-DPZS2MN86)

    Role novel about a former hero of Neverwinter, who returns ...
  • jintortlejintortle Member Posts: 655 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Great post for the Foundry

    I'll do yours soon and others here.

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  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    jintortle wrote: »
    Great post for the Foundry

    I'll do yours soon and others here.

    NW-DM9UDUMUK

    I will add yours to my list today as well
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    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
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  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    Thanks for all the replies I made some tweaks like fog/mist in village and pathway added detail to cave changed Rebel mobs to undead and the other type I have in there....still considering the other mob suggestions......pathway is blocked now.....added some more dialogue stuff although it is late for me so it might be bad.....get6ting ready to play in game on my actual toon with my husband's toon.....if anyone wouldn't mind checking out again letting me know what you think it would be great want to get this one as set as possible with making only minor updates down the road and moving on to second quest in campaign
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    Character handle:@skylia120410
    (www.gwfnw.weebly.com)
    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
    Divine Misfits (one of the Guild Leaders)(Guild Site Manager)
    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
  • eulerdmoogleeulerdmoogle Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    I was unable to finish your mission. I was on the step "reach the arcane summit", but it didn't recognize me as being there. Are all your markers placed correctly?
    Try my missions:
    A Small Dwarvish Grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    The Brink of Disaster: NW-DFDJKW9QF (Still in beta)

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  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    I was unable to finish your mission. I was on the step "reach the arcane summit", but it didn't recognize me as being there. Are all your markers placed correctly?

    when did you run it? I ran it with my husband the other night and all was fine but I will check in the morning to make sure nothing got messed up when I was making changes?

    Yours and 2 others I am running tomorrow I have been busy so I have been just questing normally to wind down
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    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
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    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    @eulerdmoogle......I checked it everything looks in place I republished it just in case.....let me know if you have anymore problems as I will repot it as a bug to cryptic. Thanks for the information....did you actually go into the room?
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    Character handle:@skylia120410
    (www.gwfnw.weebly.com)
    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
    Divine Misfits (one of the Guild Leaders)(Guild Site Manager)
    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
  • eulerdmoogleeulerdmoogle Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    @eulerdmoogle......I checked it everything looks in place I republished it just in case.....let me know if you have anymore problems as I will repot it as a bug to cryptic. Thanks for the information....did you actually go into the room?

    Yep, with the chest and rock etc.
    Try my missions:
    A Small Dwarvish Grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    The Brink of Disaster: NW-DFDJKW9QF (Still in beta)

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  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    that isn't the arcane summit room
    the arcane summit room is before that off in a little room

    you fight the wizard trainee and talk to npcs then fight a whole bunch of mobs to get to the room with the chest and Nola Ann will spawn for you to fight her
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    Character handle:@skylia120410
    (www.gwfnw.weebly.com)
    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
    Divine Misfits (one of the Guild Leaders)(Guild Site Manager)
    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    Ok reviewed 2 tonight before I was falling asleep at computer.....Jintortie first thing tomorrow I am reviewing yours

    @adkkar Is you map meant to be soloed, after four deaths I had to abandon in the first area....the quest seems to have potential but since it doesn't state that is a solo or group mission (at least when I looked it up) you might get people like me who just go in with their companions and get demolished and just leave never actually playing through. if you meant for it to be 2-3 ppl or more I would state that so ppl know what they are getting into and can prepare properly....let me know for sure and I will grab some guildies and get it fully reviewed

    @eulerdmoogle first I hope you were able to find the actual arcane summit on my map......now to yours it was great loved the story got a little turned around in cave which happens to me on my cave map all the time so no worries there. Wish the mobs were more customized and not standard game mob costumes but that is my only complaint, some mobs were challenging solo but not unreasonable overall great job 4 stars.

    How did you get the NPCs to fight and play instruments though I am clearly missing something? if you don't mind sharing
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    Character handle:@skylia120410
    (www.gwfnw.weebly.com)
    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
    Divine Misfits (one of the Guild Leaders)(Guild Site Manager)
    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
  • eulerdmoogleeulerdmoogle Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013



    How did you get the NPCs to fight and play instruments though I am clearly missing something? if you don't mind sharing

    For the bards, it's a looping emote. Use the contact menu to customize their animations. As for the NPCs, guard encounters are friendly, not enemies. So, I just dressed up guards in different costumes, or not when I actually wanted the standard costume.
    Try my missions:
    A Small Dwarvish Grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    The Brink of Disaster: NW-DFDJKW9QF (Still in beta)

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  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    interesting did you ever find the arcane summit in mine it is after the first chunk of mobs on the left....there is a room you can enter with about 6 NPCs
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    Character handle:@skylia120410
    (www.gwfnw.weebly.com)
    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
    Divine Misfits (one of the Guild Leaders)(Guild Site Manager)
    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
  • eulerdmoogleeulerdmoogle Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    I got to play it again, and I figure out what happened last time. Because the tunnel to the arcane summit has no lights, and because for whatever reason the sparkly trail wasn't working, I completely missed the turn. You really need to light that tunnel better.

    Also you really need more story, a better excuse for why the wizards are in a cave of monsters and why she's going there. You've kinda, sorta, got that, but not really. Plus I found the fight with the last mob, which I will not name to avoid spoilers, to be awfuly anticlimactic. Also, the enlarged trolls really look silly.

    Still, a great first effort. I look forward to seeing what you do next.
    Try my missions:
    A Small Dwarvish Grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    The Brink of Disaster: NW-DFDJKW9QF (Still in beta)

    thorlief_banner_1.png
  • skylia120410skylia120410 Member Posts: 123 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    I got to play it again, and I figure out what happened last time. Because the tunnel to the arcane summit has no lights, and because for whatever reason the sparkly trail wasn't working, I completely missed the turn. You really need to light that tunnel better.

    Also you really need more story, a better excuse for why the wizards are in a cave of monsters and why she's going there. You've kinda, sorta, got that, but not really. Plus I found the fight with the last mob, which I will not name to avoid spoilers, to be awfuly anticlimactic. Also, the enlarged trolls really look silly.

    Still, a great first effort. I look forward to seeing what you do next.

    Weird that the lights aren't effective I added a whole bunch of lights to the place will have to look again and tweak some more. I made the last battle and elite hard mob if I could make it a boss fight I would LOL but maybe there is a different mob type I can use.

    I almost want to shelf this campaign for a bit delete it and the part 2 portion of the quest work on my pirate quest and then write a story I can use for the summit quests. thanks for the input though I will look at the concerns and see if it can be tweaked
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    Character handle:@skylia120410
    (www.gwfnw.weebly.com)
    GWF GUIDE SITE: Still being worked on not 60 yet
    Divine Misfits (one of the Guild Leaders)(Guild Site Manager)
    www.divinemisfits.guildlaunch.com
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