A day of leisure in Bloomville? For review

lillibp

So I just posted my first foundry quest. I was just going to make a beautifull quest/place for myself, that I could kill easy monsters in for events. I was tighered of generic monster killing maps. But this project kind of took on a life off its own and before I knew it I had added hidden encounters, optional side quests, a drunken story teller and so much more.

I would really appriciate some reviews and feedback as this is my first real quest.

A Day Of Leisure In Bloomville?

Quest Name: A Day Of Leisure In Bloomville?
Author: @lillibp
Short Code: NW-DM2BD7Y62
Quest Type: #Story, #Short, #Easy, #RP
Average Duration: 10-20 min
Combat: Solo friendly, hidden encounters
Starts at: Enywhere
Mission Summary:
Bloomville is a small idyllic village laying on the outskirtd off Neverwinter Woods, but all is not totally calm even in the countryside.
You deside to go there for an afternoon off from adventuring. Will you relax and enjoy the town or create some mischief.
Help the lovely little village have a wonderful day or add to its troubles.


Author tips/hints: There are some side quests not part off the main quest line and different dialog options can give slightly different outcomes. So feel free to explore.

Screenshots/attachments:

colonelwing

lillibp wrote: »

So I just posted my first foundry quest. I was just going to make a beautifull map for myself, that I could kill easy monsters in for events. I was tighered of generic monster killing maps. But this project kind of took on a life off its own and before I knew it I had added hidden encounters, optional side quests, a drunken story teller and so much more.

I would really appriciate some reviews and feedback as this is my first real quest.

A Day Of Leisure In Bloomville?

Quest Name: A Day Of Leisure In Bloomville?
Author: @lillibp
Short Code: NW-DM2BD7Y62
Quest Type: #Story, #Short, #Easy, #RP
Average Duration: 10-20 min
Combat: Solo friendly, hidden encounters
Starts at: Enywhere
Mission Summary:
Bloomville is a small idyllic village laying on the outskirtd off Neverwinter Woods, but all is not totally calm even in the countryside.
You deside to go there for an afternoon off from adventuring. Will you relax and enjoy the town or create some mischief.
Help the lovely little village have a wonderful day or add to its troubles.


Author tips/hints: There are some side quests not part off the main quest line and different dialog options can give slightly different outcomes. So feel free to explore.

Screenshots/attachments:

Isn't that a pre- generated map?

reiwulf

It seems to be the summer festival map, indeed.

beckylunatic

I don't think the OP's phrasing was meant to indicate "design a custom map from scratch", so much as "put together a nice place to my liking".

Which means that using the beautifulest of basic available maps as a launch point is not inappropriate, but the sentence is a bit clumsy as it does seem to imply a custom map to more experienced Foundry users. I don't think it's any sort of intent to mislead potential players though.

lillibp

I can see I will have to phrase it differently and use the word 'place' instead of map. I have not made the map, it is indeed the premade map from the summer festival. I just wanted a nice place to kill monsters where everyone else didn't run around to, so that I wouldn't take quest mobs from others (because I do like just running around in Sharandar).

But as I said this is not just an hack'n'slash quest/map. It is a real quest with optional nice and evil patch.

celticgamer0

The quest was fun and different. I knew pigeons were a pain, but these topped it Love the good/evil dialogs as well.