Experienced authors' thoughts and comments.

tirianganimir

This is the first quest I have created on the foundry and would like some experienced authors' advice and comments. If you have a moment, please let me know what you think.

I tried to set up a further quest in the campaign, and would love comments on story as well as mechanics and setting.

Name: From the Shadows
Author: Ganimir
NW-DTEPFDJJ3

zebular

. . . . . Just a fly-by tip as I noticed you're making a Campaign. Don't add unpublished missions to the Campaign list until you've published them. For if you do, your whole Campaign will become unavailable on the live server until you publish the "missing" missions.