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How Jean-Claude and Slique first met.

ricktacularricktacular Member Posts: 349 Arc User
edited March 2013 in Art and Fiction
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  • ricktacularricktacular Member Posts: 349 Arc User
    edited March 2013
    Um, is the link working? The last time I tried doing internets I did it wrong, so I just wanted to be sure. Thanks! :)
  • deohnoehdeohnoeh Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited March 2013
    Working just fine! Reading right now... :D
  • ricktacularricktacular Member Posts: 349 Arc User
    edited March 2013
    So, ah, how'd y'all like it? Any criticisms? Praise? I'm looking for praise, mostly. ;)
  • deohnoehdeohnoeh Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited March 2013
    I really liked it! The descriptions of the setting are really vivid.. I really liked the build up it isnt too soon or too late... The action is very good... I did feel that you could have a bit of description of the camp just before the paladin enters but thats just me... I really like the characters both of Jean Claude and Alphonsine! They are really fun together... You might want to clean up part about her parents I cant point out exactly what it is maybe just a rephrase would do... The end has me wanting more!
    All in all a good read!
    b^.^d

    P.S. Alphonsine is Slique right?
  • ricktacularricktacular Member Posts: 349 Arc User
    edited March 2013
    Yes, Alphonsine is Slique. :)

    There is more to come. These one-shots are more character background than any real story. I really don't have much to say in terms of a "story", only little snippets like this.

    Thanks! :)
  • deohnoehdeohnoeh Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited March 2013
    I think its really nice to have snippets they grab the attention far better for a shorter period of time... Cant wait for more! :D
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