This is for [name removed] and People who feel like [name removed]

rayray718

Hi I am a veteran pvper now [name removed] this is to address what you said about those people and their guild this is slander I hope you know that I watch their streams and I am Joji u can complain that's understandable u don't like to lose but to just utterly blame us for your lack of skill or teamwork or gear that's not fair 1st of all mace windu and mr tony are monster gf's and ur a combat hunter like me and should know that a gf is our weakness 1bull charge can almost 1 shot u because of how much power and armor pen they stack up hence y because of babies like you they are making the changes to pvp now [name removed] when mod 12 drops and your wondering y your combat is so weak blame your self and ppl like u because instead of just getting better and make some friends or ask other ppl for help you decided to cry and slander people's names and guild their is nothing wrong with what we do we do everything within the power and rules of the game and we have ready good team work so maybe instead of crying u should go get your guild or your friends work on your teamwork or just your pvp skills in general you are 15k act like it just because you are a high gear score does not make you good I have a gf to and I have been beating up 4k's since I was 2800(old gear score) u can't buy skill [name removed] remember that and if ur by yourself in a match against us most likely u getting debuffed and we since we have good teamwork we buff each other and debuff you but I have been playing this game since it dropped on PS4 and deal with pvp when all the Xbox and pc players came here and was 4k and knew all the in's and out's of the game and only shared the secret with a few and they control our trade house now but do you know what I did because I Didn't CRY I just sucked it up and got BETTER and I killed all the ones that didn't leave the game by time I got stronger and I learned that I also need teammates to help me what I am strong at will cover my teammates weakness but don't worry lil [name removed] you wish is coming true look at what they are doing to pvp for mod 12 and 12b so stop slandering people's guild and thier names honestly I don't care what you say about Joji because 99.9% of the combats including you are garbage and call everyone pay to win but my friends don't deserve for you to slander thier names because you aren't that good at pvp mr 15k combat

mightyeriksson

On Paragraphs
Summary:
The purpose of this handout is to give some basic instruction and advice regarding the creation of understandable and coherent paragraphs.
Contributors:Dana Lynn Driscoll, Allen Brizee
Last Edited: 2013-03-01 09:14:48
What is a paragraph?

A paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. Learning to write good paragraphs will help you as a writer stay on track during your drafting and revision stages. Good paragraphing also greatly assists your readers in following a piece of writing. You can have fantastic ideas, but if those ideas aren't presented in an organized fashion, you will lose your readers (and fail to achieve your goals in writing).

The Basic Rule: Keep one idea to one paragraph

The basic rule of thumb with paragraphing is to keep one idea to one paragraph. If you begin to transition into a new idea, it belongs in a new paragraph. There are some simple ways to tell if you are on the same topic or a new one. You can have one idea and several bits of supporting evidence within a single paragraph. You can also have several points in a single paragraph as long as they relate to the overall topic of the paragraph. If the single points start to get long, then perhaps elaborating on each of them and placing them in their own paragraphs is the route to go.

Elements of a paragraph

To be as effective as possible, a paragraph should contain each of the following: Unity, Coherence, A Topic Sentence, and Adequate Development. As you will see, all of these traits overlap. Using and adapting them to your individual purposes will help you construct effective paragraphs.

Unity

The entire paragraph should concern itself with a single focus. If it begins with one focus or major point of discussion, it should not end with another or wander within different ideas.

Coherence

Coherence is the trait that makes the paragraph easily understandable to a reader. You can help create coherence in your paragraphs by creating logical bridges and verbal bridges.

Logical bridges

The same idea of a topic is carried over from sentence to sentence
Successive sentences can be constructed in parallel form
Verbal bridges

Key words can be repeated in several sentences
Synonymous words can be repeated in several sentences
Pronouns can refer to nouns in previous sentences
Transition words can be used to link ideas from different sentences
A topic sentence

A topic sentence is a sentence that indicates in a general way what idea or thesis the paragraph is going to deal with. Although not all paragraphs have clear-cut topic sentences, and despite the fact that topic sentences can occur anywhere in the paragraph (as the first sentence, the last sentence, or somewhere in the middle), an easy way to make sure your reader understands the topic of the paragraph is to put your topic sentence near the beginning of the paragraph. (This is a good general rule for less experienced writers, although it is not the only way to do it). Regardless of whether you include an explicit topic sentence or not, you should be able to easily summarize what the paragraph is about.

Adequate development

The topic (which is introduced by the topic sentence) should be discussed fully and adequately. Again, this varies from paragraph to paragraph, depending on the author's purpose, but writers should be wary of paragraphs that only have two or three sentences. It's a pretty good bet that the paragraph is not fully developed if it is that short.

Some methods to make sure your paragraph is well-developed:

Use examples and illustrations
Cite data (facts, statistics, evidence, details, and others)
Examine testimony (what other people say such as quotes and paraphrases)
Use an anecdote or story
Define terms in the paragraph
Compare and contrast
Evaluate causes and reasons
Examine effects and consequences
Analyze the topic
Describe the topic
Offer a chronology of an event (time segments)
How do I know when to start a new paragraph?

You should start a new paragraph when:

When you begin a new idea or point. New ideas should always start in new paragraphs. If you have an extended idea that spans multiple paragraphs, each new point within that idea should have its own paragraph.
To contrast information or ideas. Separate paragraphs can serve to contrast sides in a debate, different points in an argument, or any other difference.
When your readers need a pause. Breaks between paragraphs function as a short "break" for your readers—adding these in will help your writing more readable. You would create a break if the paragraph becomes too long or the material is complex.
When you are ending your introduction or starting your conclusion. Your introductory and concluding material should always be in a new paragraph. Many introductions and conclusions have multiple paragraphs depending on their content, length, and the writer's purpose.
Transitions and signposts

Two very important elements of paragraphing are signposts and transitions. Signposts are internal aids to assist readers; they usually consist of several sentences or a paragraph outlining what the article has covered and where the article will be going.

Transitions are usually one or several sentences that "transition" from one idea to the next. Transitions can be used at the end of most paragraphs to help the paragraphs flow one into the next.

masticore

If not paragraphs then punctuation...

zebular

Closing this up as this surmounts to a wall of text with no proper grammar and punctuation. Such makes things illegible. As well, please do not post on behalf of others nor post their handles or forum names. Thanks!