Just finished Act 1: On The High Sea, and thought it was really well done. I liked how the quest took me from the city, to the ocean, and then the caves. The Cavern was especially well built. Here are a few impressions I had while playing: 1.) Getting the map on the ship, and grabbing weapons caches/supplies seemed like…
1.) Yeah, I think I'll need to add some dialogue in the previous quests that gives a better indication of her age. I didn't think about it at the time when I made the first quest, because she wasn't intended to be a major character or anything. She just sort of grew into the role in quest 3. She's taken on more of a life…
1.) Yeah, there isn't much I can do to make her look older without suddenly being an adult. It was supposed to be 2 years from quest 3, and I should probably add some dialogue in the previous quests to stress how much time has passed between each, because by my reckoning, she's about 13 or 14 in the 1st quest, and by this…
Thanks! I'm glad to hear he's still going, it's good to hear success stories like that, especially since if you go looking for stuff like that on the internet, overwhelmingly all you find are the negative stories. All I can do is hope that things turn out like that for her as well.
I've been away from the game and foundry for over 3 months now because my wife was diagnosed with brain cancer and I haven't had time for games with all the hospital stays and surgery. Now that she's on radiation and chemo, I finally have game time again, just in time for the new expansion. I was so excited to get back to…
Thanks for letting me know about the issues. It turns out the point that you have to reach in the cemetery had someone moved about 200 feet above the ground. Fixed that, and fixed a couple of the issues you mentioned. If you get another chance to run through and let me know what you think, that would be great! If not, I…
My wife and I just ran through The Grey Society Introduction. Here are my thoughts. There were a lot of NPCs that basically seemd to just say they didn't feel like talking to us, not in those words. Seemed pointless to have so many NPCs that had nothing to add. In the sewers, there were 2 spiketraps right next to each…
Steve, I'll play yours sometime this week. Adding both of them to the list of foundry quests I have to play. Also, they haven't left the Review tab yet, because you have to get 5 reviews for them to move to the New tab.
Just ran through Supply and Demand with my wife. On the whole, I thought it was a good quest, with a nice mix of enemy types, so it didn't get boring. I really liked the Dragon Whisperer's costume. Nicely done! In Raiders Camp, the first camp had a wagon with some crates of watermelons. You'll want to change the angle of…
I think that would be amazing! I don't know if you want to go this route, and I hesitate to suggest it because it's overdone, but what about time travel? I usually think that should be avoided because most times it's done horribly, but I think if anyone is going to write a good time travel quest that makes sense, and it…
Just finished Tower of the Lost Wizards. Seeing as I'm late to this party, I didn't notice any glaring issues or anything. Seemed pretty well constructed to me, and everything worked just fine. The fights were challenging for my level 47 HR, but it was still manageable solo. My wife warned me on accepting this quest that…
Hi Lady Kathleen, I just did a run through of "Find Lady Kathleen." Overall, I thought it was a good start. There are some things that need to be polished, but otherwise a nice, straightforward quest. I liked all of the effort put into the village. Here are a few of the things I noticed: 1.) The words "It seems the Lady…
I made some changes to all three quests in the campaign per your feedback. I really appreciate everything you guys have told me. The Lost Children: Added the warehouse at the beginning before leaving for Creekside. Added a few more mobs in some areas to ease up on the "running around, not fight" bits of the adventure.…
Thanks everyone for the input! I've been working hard for the last 7 1/2 hours to make the changes you've suggested. I still have a lot more to do, like adding more detail to some of the areas that are lacking, and changing the blood splats to something else.(I used those ones because to me, they look brown, so it was…
My wife and played through The Demonweb Game tonight. Overall, I think it is a great idea and I like the direction you're going with it, but I feel this one needs some work to bring it up to the high quality of the first adventure. 1.) Brizax's House - The quest tells us to look around, but there isn't really much to look…
Just finished A Construct's Prison with my wife. We were both really impressed with it. The amount of work that went into the area designs was very evident. My wife really loved the corridor with the notes. She said it looked pretty cool when you got to the end and looked back. As was said above, some of the fights were…
I just finished The Crimson Descent, and wow, I was super impressed! The dialogue was very well done and clever in several instances. You did a great job of fleshing out individual personalities for the mercenaries. I was also heavily impressed with the design of the areas. There were many times when I looked at something…
Thanks for reviews, everyone! I'll be making a list of the critiques and hopefully this weekend I'll have the time to sit down and implement everything. I agree, there are a lot of areas that need to be spiced up some with details, and what not. And several enemy groups need to be customized. Now that the story is done,…
I just did a run through of The Shadowfell Disciples. I played it as a level 48 GWF and my wife was playing a level 48 HR. The combat was nicely done, not too hard and not too easy. I imagine that if it were just my GWF going through, it would've been a little harder, but still fairly manageable. Overall, I liked the…
Thanks, Orangefiree! The bandits used Nasher Rebels, Duergar, and Frost Goblins. But I need to go back and create individual costumes for them. And yeah, that was Grace Rathburn. I plan to go back and make costumes pretty soon. Thanks for the feedback! I'll be playing The Planar Conflict with my wife tonight. Thanks again!
I can't speak for anyone else, but I really hope that its not doomed. I'd like to play it, as it sounds challenging and fun. That being said, I honestly don't know what the average player will think. Try to make it very clear in the description your intentions and that it will need specific classes and team work, I guess.…