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• Three words "Captain's Log Supplemental". ;) J.

  in Literary Challenge #53 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk November 2013
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  in Literary Challenge #53 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk November 2013
• Yeah, I figured it must have needed some tuning when you didn't mention Aliena. ;) J.

  in Literary Challenge #53 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk November 2013
• Cool, how does it work now? J. PS: Tavia as a nickname is so going to stick.

  in Literary Challenge #53 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk November 2013
• Thanks for the Feedback, Which characters, how, why and maybe even in what way? ;) J.

  in Literary Challenge #53 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk November 2013
• Thanks, Octavia has featured in a previous challenge. I'm hoping to respond to more of these but not all really lend themselves to the players. J.

  in Literary Challenge #53 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk November 2013
• The first thing he was aware of was the glow, his vision coloured in the familiar blue green illumination of his cabin lights even before he'd opened his eyes. Still coming fully into consciousness he looked at the clock on his side table. *I still have time* His shift started in about 30 minutes, but he knew Octavia would…

  in Literary Challenge #53 : The Gateway Comment by jaelk November 2013
• The scene is a variation on the prologue that I wrote for the story. All the original elements are in there but with the addition of the crew and the Traveler as the reference character. Originally the scene was set in an expensive restaurant in the same complex as the Federation president in Paris. The Q were in…

  in Literary Challenge #50 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk October 2013
• Sorry for the delay in getting back to you, was on leave and out of contact. Generally I have been criticized for stilted dialogue so being picked for being too fluid is a change. ;) I'll rework that scene if I get a sec, otherwise I'll pay more attention next time. One thing to mention is that there are two characters…

  in Literary Challenge #50 Discussion Thread Comment by jaelk October 2013
• Literary Challenge #49 : The Return of The Traveler The cool metal of the phaser rifle pressed comfortably against her cheek; through the sight Octavia carefully scanned the corridor. Two strips ran down either side of the corridor slowly pulsing a deep red. "Clear", the voice of Lt Hernandez whispered from the com unit…

  in Literary Challenge #50 : Redux 2.0 Comment by jaelk September 2013
• I am a 1000+ day Lifetime member (since Beta) and I can't even create a thread! How does that work? Hope you can update accordingly but it doesn't even seem that people with the Lifetime Memberships have all the requisite access. Go Figure. J.

  in Subscription upgraded after 1000 days to LTS? Comment by jaelk October 2012