Feel free to give my two missions a run (the second is a continuation of the first) "Just Another Day' and "A Trip Down Memory Lane".
I'll give yours a run tonight or tomorrow...
Just finished playing "Just another Day." Gave it 3 stars. Good first time mission...Directions to certain areas can be worked on some or more clearer directions. But you did good.
So far I have played and rated:
Close Friends, Closer Enemies *****
Omega Directive Revisited ***
Just Another Day ***
* Very well written story line and the plot keeps your interest.
* Even though I am not fond of long-ish missions, this one made up for it by having a good plot to keep you interested.
* Good work on the sets - I understand the limited interiors of the Foundry and the market was wll put together.
* I like the "Yahoo Shake it" lol
* Good use of various capabilities of Captains allowed by the Foundry.
Suggestions:
Not many things I could nitpick out apart from the following:
* perhaps a bit of an explaination why the markertplace door is locked, it is a public market.
* I would suggest moving the attackers slightly closer to the station to increase the idea of imminent attack and urgency.
I was unable to leave a review as the mission did not progess for me past speaking with Lias on the station. This may be on my end I am not sure.
What I gathered up to that point:
Nice sets and believable when entering the system.
Some suggestions:
* I understand that some of our authors may not be native english speakers. It may be a good idea to do your dialogues in MS Word for example and grammar / spell check them before adding them to dialogue boxes.
* The Romulans on the station seem to be the same NPC and has "UCG contact" as their names. I suggest you change them up a little ( unless it has something to do with the story that I was unable to complete).
* Does what it says on the tin. No combat and investigation only.
* Sets are well designed within the limits of the foundry ( liked the hospital)
* Good platform to expand on the plot
Suggestions:
* Prehaps use "airborne" rather than "Aerosol"
* When reaching the system, perhaps add something to identify your mission rather than the current "continue".
Overall a nice relaxing mission : 4 stars from me.
Thanks for the try run on my mission. I will look over the grammar and more. The mission level is 31+. Are you Rear Admiral rank or lower? If lower, that may be reason you couldnt advance.
I was unable to leave a review as the mission did not progess for me past speaking with Lias on the station. This may be on my end I am not sure.
What I gathered up to that point:
Nice sets and believable when entering the system.
Some suggestions:
* I understand that some of our authors may not be native english speakers. It may be a good idea to do your dialogues in MS Word for example and grammar / spell check them before adding them to dialogue boxes.
* The Romulans on the station seem to be the same NPC and has "UCG contact" as their names. I suggest you change them up a little ( unless it has something to do with the story that I was unable to complete).
Thanks for the try run on my mission. I will look over the grammar and more. The mission level is 31+. Are you Rear Admiral rank or lower? If lower, that may be reason you couldnt advance.
I am excited to announce I released my first part of my new series on Saturday. It has an all
new enemy and unlikely allies. It is a good lead in to the series, which I hope to have in 4 parts.
After the Omega Directive Revisited series, I have successfully slimmed down the play time and
cut about 30 miniutes from the missions in that series. It is available to all level players and the
puzzles are simple Trek trivia based to accomodate any new players that may attempt the mission.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
I have updated my list on missions I will be playing next as well:
Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain) My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
Hope you can give them a go!
Thanks for the reviews and feedback so far as well folks.
My reviews are in game and if I have suggestions/nitpicks, I will send a PM in game)
I have enjoyed all the missions I have played so far.
Keep up the good work everyone.
I am excited to announce I released my first part of my new series on Saturday. It has an all
new enemy and unlikely allies. It is a good lead in to the series, which I hope to have in 4 parts.
After the Omega Directive Revisited series, I have successfully slimmed down the play time and
cut about 30 miniutes from the missions in that series. It is available to all level players and the
puzzles are simple Trek trivia based to accomodate any new players that may attempt the mission.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
I have updated my list on missions I will be playing next as well:
Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain) My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
Hope you can give them a go!
Thanks for the reviews and feedback so far as well folks.
My reviews are in game and if I have suggestions/nitpicks, I will send a PM in game)
I have enjoyed all the missions I have played so far.
Keep up the good work everyone.
Thanks for the good suggestions Duke. I will check out your new ones asap!
I have created a new banner for my new mission, but can't figure out how to put it in my message.
Does anyone have an "easy" explanation how to do it.
I would greatly appreciate it.
Thanks.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
I have updated my list on missions I will be playing next as well:
Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain) My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
I would greatly appreciate ratings and reviews on my mission,
Shadow War - Mist in the Night
There have only been three reviews so far, and I feel I need more feedback before I continue the series. If you rate and review my mission, I will do the same for your mission(s) as time allows me. Thank you.
I am going to start reviweing the missions listed in this thread. Thought I would throw my new one intor the pot.
Mission: Sorti Rising
Author: Commodre_Stipe
Level and Faction: Fed 31+
Brief synopsis: You are semt tp Sorti Prime to perfrom the final evaluatiion needed for its membership application. however, Federation politics and a long kept secret will make your choices dificult. the final ending is up to you. Multipke endings based on your choice.
features:
Light ground and space combat
Lots of dialouge
epic trek episdoe feel
I am going to start reviweing the missions listed in this thread. Thought I would throw my new one intor the pot.
Mission: Sorti Rising
Author: Commodre_Stipe
Level and Faction: Fed 31+
Brief synopsis: You are semt tp Sorti Prime to perfrom the final evaluatiion needed for its membership application. however, Federation politics and a long kept secret will make your choices dificult. the final ending is up to you. Multipke endings based on your choice.
features:
Light ground and space combat
Lots of dialouge
epic trek episdoe feel
Commodore _Stipe,
I will add it to my list.
My updated list is as follows: Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor) - On Standby, see note below (Unable to locate this mission under any search criteria. Is it still up on holodeck?)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain)
TLC - The Reunion (Author: Faryon)
Sorti Rising (Author: Commodore_Stipe)My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device InteractionsMy First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
Duke-of-Rock I just finished Spawn of Medusa. First of all let me say well done. Very good story and map design. No plot holes and good set up for the series. A couple of thiings:
1) The third and lest fight on the surface map, in the colony, was very annoying. Using a captain squad with a commander would have been a nice fight; however, because they were nausicans templates they chained held me the whoel fight. With two of them with those energy chains guns i ilterlay was chained held the whole fight. Might want to look into that.
2) I liked the trek lore puzzles. Why; however, would an ancient device on a colony far from the Federation in Klingon territory use Federation lore? I like the iidea but using Klingon trek lore would be better.
Other than those two things i reallyh enjoyed the mission.
That's right... An honor system I'm developing on my behalf. If you play my mission, I will in return play yours. Make sure you rank it ethically and write a review so I know how to look for yours!
"Close Friends, Closer Enemies." by ianai. Check it out in search (make sure you are set up for reviewing in order to locate it)
Looking forward to playing yours!
Thanks
Just finished your mission and wanted to give a review. Overall well done. Verry interesting story and well executed. The end figth with all the clones was a very nice touch. A little hard being ganked like that but I survived with only one death.
A few problems. The whole engine room/warp core sequence had some major problems. Its to clutterd. Finding the objects to interact with was hard enough, the fight was extremly difficult becasue of all the equipment and all the non-combat NPC. I realize it is hard to do something about the NPC but you might want to clear out some equipment.
The other thing; at the beginning when you first beam aboarad I think there is a bettee and easeir way to do that. Instead of forcing the players to talk to everyone, give up the option. You can do that by givng all the NPC default prompts. That way we can spend time taking if want to but have the option not to. Some of that dialouge is important I know but good players will talk to most everyone especially if you have somen tell them to make sure to tlak to person x to get the background on this project. Most of us will. It adds a little free form nature...amkes it fell more real.
I have been enjoying the missions I have played. Well Done everyone.
Keep up the good work and keep on telling those stories.:)
My updated list is as follows:
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain)
TLC - The Reunion (Author: Faryon)
Sorti Rising (Author: Commodore_Stipe)
Descent into Madness (Author: FutureCaptain)
MISSION RERUNS:
A Day for the Assassin (Author: Kuhr) My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device InteractionsMy First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
That's right... An honor system I'm developing on my behalf. If you play my mission, I will in return play yours. Make sure you rank it ethically and write a review so I know how to look for yours!
"Close Friends, Closer Enemies." by ianai. Check it out in search (make sure you are set up for reviewing in order to locate it)
Looking forward to playing yours!
Thanks
I played your mission a few days back. It has an interesting story, but I don't get how the two crews know each other and how we knew the villain. Is there a prequel mission?
There was a lot of effort put into the map creation, but imho less is more. The places are too crowded some times and the effects are used too much in engineering.
I got alot of gaming in over the weekend, and have my updated playlist.
Please feel free to add any new ones if you have any and I will add them to
my list. I am enjoying the missions. My reviews are all in-game, and I'll send
PM's in-game with suggestions or critiques.
Thanks to those reviewing my missions as well, I appreciate the feedback.
My updated list is as follows:
Descent into Madness (Author: FutureCaptain)
Bad Blood (Author: PsychoFish64)
MISSION RERUNS: A Day for the Assassin (Author: Kuhr) My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Fairly Easy Trek Trivia Puzzles for Newer Players
*Heavy Objects/Device InteractionsMy First Series: Level 31+ (Play time: Approx 1.5 Hours each)
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
...on an honour system as the OP said, I have started playing missions supplied by some here and left votes.
However I will not honour the OP's requests to play his, because it seems only everyone but the OP is holding their end of the bargain in this thread.
...never use the term of honour system unless you provide like, Duke-X, the fact you are doing it.
Just a thought, looks like the OP just wanted hard time spent on his, but not so much others with his time.
Greetings Sirius39,
I didn't see that you had any missions on the list, but I was indeed wondering the same thing. I hadn't heard anything regarding the OP either, although it was the first mission I played. If you did play mine, thanks. If you have a mission you want played, post it on this thread or PM me, and I'll get it in my list. As the others on this thread can attest, I do play the missions I say I will, I just post reviews in-game and send PM's for any issues instead of publicly bringing them out. I don't want to be a "spoiler" on any part of the mission, so I think it works out better that way. My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Spawn of Medusa
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Fairly Easy Trek Trivia Puzzles for newer players
*Heavy Objects/Device InteractionsMy First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
Comments
Can I add another one in the mix along with "Spy Games". posted a new one that has never been reviewed yet.
My missions are never very long
New one is "Playing Vulcan"
Duke_X,
Just got a chance to play SpyGames this morning, An enjoyable quick ride.
I'll add "Playing Vulcan" to my list and try to get to it this weekend.
My Missions:
Omega Directive Revisited (Part I - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
Thanks very much. I will give yours a go too as soon as I can
Just finished playing "Just another Day." Gave it 3 stars. Good first time mission...Directions to certain areas can be worked on some or more clearer directions. But you did good.
So far I have played and rated:
Close Friends, Closer Enemies *****
Omega Directive Revisited ***
Just Another Day ***
Just finished "Spy Games." Gave it 4 stars! Solid story, well planed out and a challenged. Looking to play more of your missions!
So far I have played and rated:
Close Friends, Closer Enemies *****
Spy Games ****
Omega Directive Revisited ***
Just Another Day ***
Thanks for your feedback
I am looking to work my way through the missions on this thread also. You will notice my missions are never very long but hopefully interesting
Pro's:
* Very well written story line and the plot keeps your interest.
* Even though I am not fond of long-ish missions, this one made up for it by having a good plot to keep you interested.
* Good work on the sets - I understand the limited interiors of the Foundry and the market was wll put together.
* I like the "Yahoo Shake it" lol
* Good use of various capabilities of Captains allowed by the Foundry.
Suggestions:
Not many things I could nitpick out apart from the following:
* perhaps a bit of an explaination why the markertplace door is locked, it is a public market.
* I would suggest moving the attackers slightly closer to the station to increase the idea of imminent attack and urgency.
Good mission, I enjoyed it.
4 Stars
Wel done mate.
I was unable to leave a review as the mission did not progess for me past speaking with Lias on the station. This may be on my end I am not sure.
What I gathered up to that point:
Nice sets and believable when entering the system.
Some suggestions:
* I understand that some of our authors may not be native english speakers. It may be a good idea to do your dialogues in MS Word for example and grammar / spell check them before adding them to dialogue boxes.
* The Romulans on the station seem to be the same NPC and has "UCG contact" as their names. I suggest you change them up a little ( unless it has something to do with the story that I was unable to complete).
Unable to rate do to technical issues.
Pro's:
* Does what it says on the tin. No combat and investigation only.
* Sets are well designed within the limits of the foundry ( liked the hospital)
* Good platform to expand on the plot
Suggestions:
* Prehaps use "airborne" rather than "Aerosol"
* When reaching the system, perhaps add something to identify your mission rather than the current "continue".
Overall a nice relaxing mission : 4 stars from me.
Well done.
VA. Perhaps a load error on my side, not sure.
I am excited to announce I released my first part of my new series on Saturday. It has an all
new enemy and unlikely allies. It is a good lead in to the series, which I hope to have in 4 parts.
After the Omega Directive Revisited series, I have successfully slimmed down the play time and
cut about 30 miniutes from the missions in that series. It is available to all level players and the
puzzles are simple Trek trivia based to accomodate any new players that may attempt the mission.
The Part 1 title:
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
I have updated my list on missions I will be playing next as well:
Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain)
My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
Hope you can give them a go!
Thanks for the reviews and feedback so far as well folks.
My reviews are in game and if I have suggestions/nitpicks, I will send a PM in game)
I have enjoyed all the missions I have played so far.
Keep up the good work everyone.
Thanks for the good suggestions Duke. I will check out your new ones asap!
I have created a new banner for my new mission, but can't figure out how to put it in my message.
Does anyone have an "easy" explanation how to do it.
I would greatly appreciate it.
Thanks.
The Part 1 title:
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
I have updated my list on missions I will be playing next as well:
Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain)
My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
I would greatly appreciate ratings and reviews on my mission,
Shadow War - Mist in the Night
There have only been three reviews so far, and I feel I need more feedback before I continue the series. If you rate and review my mission, I will do the same for your mission(s) as time allows me. Thank you.
I am going to start reviweing the missions listed in this thread. Thought I would throw my new one intor the pot.
Mission: Sorti Rising
Author: Commodre_Stipe
Level and Faction: Fed 31+
Brief synopsis: You are semt tp Sorti Prime to perfrom the final evaluatiion needed for its membership application. however, Federation politics and a long kept secret will make your choices dificult. the final ending is up to you. Multipke endings based on your choice.
features:
Light ground and space combat
Lots of dialouge
epic trek episdoe feel
Commodore _Stipe,
I will add it to my list.
My updated list is as follows:
Info Gathering Episode 1, Fed Invasion (Author: Fotimor) - On Standby, see note below
(Unable to locate this mission under any search criteria. Is it still up on holodeck?)
and the rivers shall run red (Author: rpell)
Playing Vulcan (Author: Duke_X)
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain)
TLC - The Reunion (Author: Faryon)
Sorti Rising (Author: Commodore_Stipe)
My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
1) The third and lest fight on the surface map, in the colony, was very annoying. Using a captain squad with a commander would have been a nice fight; however, because they were nausicans templates they chained held me the whoel fight. With two of them with those energy chains guns i ilterlay was chained held the whole fight. Might want to look into that.
2) I liked the trek lore puzzles. Why; however, would an ancient device on a colony far from the Federation in Klingon territory use Federation lore? I like the iidea but using Klingon trek lore would be better.
Other than those two things i reallyh enjoyed the mission.
Just finished your mission and wanted to give a review. Overall well done. Verry interesting story and well executed. The end figth with all the clones was a very nice touch. A little hard being ganked like that but I survived with only one death.
A few problems. The whole engine room/warp core sequence had some major problems. Its to clutterd. Finding the objects to interact with was hard enough, the fight was extremly difficult becasue of all the equipment and all the non-combat NPC. I realize it is hard to do something about the NPC but you might want to clear out some equipment.
The other thing; at the beginning when you first beam aboarad I think there is a bettee and easeir way to do that. Instead of forcing the players to talk to everyone, give up the option. You can do that by givng all the NPC default prompts. That way we can spend time taking if want to but have the option not to. Some of that dialouge is important I know but good players will talk to most everyone especially if you have somen tell them to make sure to tlak to person x to get the background on this project. Most of us will. It adds a little free form nature...amkes it fell more real.
Otherwise very good job.
Close Friends, Closer Enemies *****
Spy Games ****
Omega Directive Revisited ***
Just Another Day ***
I have been enjoying the missions I have played. Well Done everyone.
Keep up the good work and keep on telling those stories.:)
My updated list is as follows:
Gave Peace a chance (Author: FutureCaptain)
TLC - The Reunion (Author: Faryon)
Sorti Rising (Author: Commodore_Stipe)
Descent into Madness (Author: FutureCaptain)
MISSION RERUNS:
A Day for the Assassin (Author: Kuhr)
My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Trek Trivia Puzzles
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
I played your mission a few days back. It has an interesting story, but I don't get how the two crews know each other and how we knew the villain. Is there a prequel mission?
There was a lot of effort put into the map creation, but imho less is more. The places are too crowded some times and the effects are used too much in engineering.
Feel free to visit my mission "Bad Blood".
I got alot of gaming in over the weekend, and have my updated playlist.
Please feel free to add any new ones if you have any and I will add them to
my list. I am enjoying the missions. My reviews are all in-game, and I'll send
PM's in-game with suggestions or critiques.
Thanks to those reviewing my missions as well, I appreciate the feedback.
My updated list is as follows:
Descent into Madness (Author: FutureCaptain)
Bad Blood (Author: PsychoFish64)
MISSION RERUNS:
A Day for the Assassin (Author: Kuhr)
My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Fairly Easy Trek Trivia Puzzles for Newer Players
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
My First Series: Level 31+ (Play time: Approx 1.5 Hours each)
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
However I will not honour the OP's requests to play his, because it seems only everyone but the OP is holding their end of the bargain in this thread.
...never use the term of honour system unless you provide like, Duke-X, the fact you are doing it.
Just a thought, looks like the OP just wanted hard time spent on his, but not so much others with his time.
Greetings Sirius39,
I didn't see that you had any missions on the list, but I was indeed wondering the same thing. I hadn't heard anything regarding the OP either, although it was the first mission I played. If you did play mine, thanks. If you have a mission you want played, post it on this thread or PM me, and I'll get it in my list. As the others on this thread can attest, I do play the missions I say I will, I just post reviews in-game and send PM's for any issues instead of publicly bringing them out. I don't want to be a "spoiler" on any part of the mission, so I think it works out better that way.
My new series is live now on holodeck.
The Part 1 title:
Play time: Approx. 1 Hour
All levels (Lt1 & up)
*Decent Ground Combat
*Decent Space Combat
*Dialogue Heavy Storyline
*Fairly Easy Trek Trivia Puzzles for newer players
*Heavy Objects/Device Interactions
My First Series: Level 31+
Omega Directive Revisited (Part 1 - The Investigation)
Omega Directive Revisited II (Part II - Break the Link)
btw. I have a new one, called "The Battle of Intara" ..