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"Perfect World.... Or is it?" that would catch there attention0
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IVl - Harshlands wrote: »"Perfect World.... Or is it?" that would catch there attention
Do not rush to smell the rose before contemplating its final hour.0 -
Devoted - Lost City wrote: »essay on pw?
here's a thought..
"Hi, I'm Last. I have an addiction...
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Bond - Harshlands wrote: »I cannot believe this.
"this game known as perfect world" - perfect world
Hi, I'm the reader. What in the **** is Perfect World? Using "called" works as well but that's one less word and if you're gonna complain about that you might have childhood issues.
"I admit this freely" - i admit this
I admit this =/= I admit this freely =/= I admit this ashamedly =/= I admit this (fill in your own adverb here)
"even go so far as to condemn" - condemn
"still very much chained" - chained
I don't see how you don't understand this. "Even go so far" indicates a level of impudence and contradiction that essentially FORMS THE THESIS OF MY ******N ESSAY. "Still" means they were chained before; "very much" gives a magnitude as opposed to "moderately chained" or "slightly chained."
Jesus Christ kid, you remind me of the review board for academic journals, except much less intimidating and much more---what's the word--- ****. If you're gonna nitpick about my essay (or the very small, very unedited slab-of-bull**** portion of it), at least find legitimate mistakes. Anything else you would like me to educate you on?0
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