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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    :/ does anyone even still follow this?
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Please someone say something so I can stop stressing over whether or not I did a God-awful job.
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  • Keenan - Dreamweaver
    Keenan - Dreamweaver Posts: 66 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Just read all five chapters of it, very interesting, and I liked the descriptions of the winged elves, specially of Catriona feeling the wind rushing through her wings and the anticipation of seeing Arch, haha. I loved the little references to things in the game, and it's awesome you can build a story in the world. Is the monster the one from fb19? b:chuckle

    Just curious... what class is the assassin? Bm? Will she meet stoic and lovable barbs and sassy venos? Oh and Aiden is adorable, hope to see more of him b:shy
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Keenan - Dreamweaver wrote: »
    Just read all five chapters of it, very interesting, and I liked the descriptions of the winged elves, specially of Catriona feeling the wind rushing through her wings and the anticipation of seeing Arch, haha. I loved the little references to things in the game, and it's awesome you can build a story in the world. Is the monster the one from fb19? b:chuckle

    Just curious... what class is the assassin? Bm? Will she meet stoic and lovable barbs and sassy venos? Oh and Aiden is adorable, hope to see more of him b:shy

    ^^ yay! someone speaks xD ^^ thanks for commenting.

    As for the monster, I was wondering when someone would catch that xD yep, it's the fb19 monster. I couldn't think of a reason for her to go into the cave so I had the monster come to her instead. And the assassin is actually an archer. So far they haven't really gotten out of wing elf territory but the other races will come in shortly ^^ probably most likely by chapter 6 I'll have at least humans in the mix.

    Ah yes, Aiden xD :P he'll be in there plenty.
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  • Reane - Sanctuary
    Reane - Sanctuary Posts: 140 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    That was pretty kick **** XD makes me wanna know what happens in the end o,.,o hope you dont mind continuing the story haha

    as far as your plot goes, i love it XD quite a few number of twists that keeps the story very interesting ^_^
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  • Anders - Lost City
    Anders - Lost City Posts: 325 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    uaaaghhh
    main characters had better be samurai monkeys
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Anders - Lost City wrote: »
    uaaaghhh
    main characters had better be samurai monkeys

    b:sweat Don't make me PK you b:chuckle
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Reane - Sanctuary wrote: »
    That was pretty kick **** XD makes me wanna know what happens in the end o,.,o hope you dont mind continuing the story haha

    as far as your plot goes, i love it XD quite a few number of twists that keeps the story very interesting ^_^

    ^^ thanks for reading xD and yes, I love to hear that the twists are actually working xD I always had it planned well, most of it, so it's not really a twist to me b:surrender I'm glad you like it ^^
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  • Anders - Lost City
    Anders - Lost City Posts: 325 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Kyna - Lost City wrote: »

    b:sweat Don't make me PK you b:chuckle

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2c4L4CPfQY8
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Anders - Lost City wrote: »
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2c4L4CPfQY8

    b:chuckle I'm in Whetstone right now if you care to test that b:sin
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  • Anders - Lost City
    Anders - Lost City Posts: 325 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Kyna - Lost City wrote: »
    b:chuckle I'm in Whetstone right now if you care to test that b:sin

    stawppit ur makin me whetstone b:shocked
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Anders - Lost City wrote: »
    stawppit ur makin me whetstone b:shocked

    ...b:beatup
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  • Anders - Lost City
    Anders - Lost City Posts: 325 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Kyna - Lost City wrote: »
    ...b:beatup

    K now i charge by the hour for that stuff
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Chapter 6 already on the way, I gotta try to update more often xD

    Thanks for all the comments so far, keep 'em coming ^^ I like to know what people think.
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  • Keenan - Dreamweaver
    Keenan - Dreamweaver Posts: 66 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Yay Chapter 6 soon! Ah.. I had forgotten how fun reading fan fiction could be. b:cute
  • Anders - Lost City
    Anders - Lost City Posts: 325 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Houw Dos Eye Reed?
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Anders - Lost City wrote: »
    Houw Dos Eye Reed?

    You start by not posting on my thread anymore. b:bye
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  • Chiv - Lost City
    Chiv - Lost City Posts: 79 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    well im a fan! like it alot waiting for the new chapter!! oh and if you want to read the type of fan fiction that makes you want to shoot yourself in the face look up "my immortal" on google... its a mix of harry potter and twilight that is truly hurrendous
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited August 2009
    Chapter six is finally up! Yes >_> I updated! *shock* I hope to do 2 this month, really close to each other to make up for the fact that I made you guys wait so long xD.
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited August 2009
    -_- who even still follows? I don't know that anyone that reviewed for my first chapter when this was new still reads.
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  • Chiv - Lost City
    Chiv - Lost City Posts: 79 Arc User
    edited August 2009
    i really love it so far! chapter 6 was an interesting break and i liked the references. the more PWI references the better! i like cat's narration, she has a lot of personality. only thing ive had an issue with in the entire thing so far is the crotchedy old man and nice old lady... for some reason they arent my favorite people. maybe ill like them more later! anyways love the story so far its really great
  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    Thanks to everyone who have read and left a comment so far! Feedback is very helpful! b:surrender Gonna work on chapter 8 tomorrow when I wake up x_x right now it's 4:30AM and I need to sleep. But I have updated!!
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  • Kismet - Harshlands
    Kismet - Harshlands Posts: 70 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    Kyna wow! I love your story! I just read through all seven chapters and I can't wait to see what's next. :) Your writing style has a great pace to it... everything flows so smoothly. A real pleasure to read! Keep up the great work.

    Kismet
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    ^^ thanks. I hope I can keep up the pace x_x I always worry about that with my writing style b:surrender I'm usually not very good at it. I'm glad you like it though! I've been trying to read everyone else's fanfictions too x_x lots of reading to do it seems.
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  • Kniraven - Lost City
    Kniraven - Lost City Posts: 2,620 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    b:chuckleJust read it start to finishb:victory
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    xD it's not very long yet so it's a quick read.

    Working on chapter 8 today though x_x WQ is so boring!
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    O.O I'm gonna be tormented by this now xD who wants to draw fan art? b:questionb:puzzledb:surprised
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited October 2009
    Next chapter is posted! ^^ thanks to all of you who comment and review. I'm thinking now that I have more free time (I have no internet at home now) I'll be writing more... hopefully. I also have an original story I've been working on for 5 years now that I may start posting chapters of. Please let me know if you would like to see that as well ^^ thanks!
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  • Kniraven - Lost City
    Kniraven - Lost City Posts: 2,620 Arc User
    edited October 2009
    b:victory Coolness. Just finished the chapter. :D
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited October 2009
    Does that mean it was good? xD
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