Hello Neverwinter Community, could you guys take the time to play my foundery map

mekols

Hello Neverwinter Community, could you guys take the time to play my foundery map, and tell me what you Think about it,
Know error/ portals are in map, (still useble)
Spelling error YES
. can you tell me if its to easy or to hard, ect,
Plz write a Review/donate astral/start in game, so i get 1 step closer to dungeon master rank 6,
This would really help me out so ty in advance


map: NWDMUPHQBLS
in game name;mekols
quest name; kill the corrupted dwarf

eldarth

mekols wrote: »

Plz write a Review/donate astral/start in game, so i get 1 step closer to dungeon master rank 6,
This would really help me out so ty in advance

If ^^ this is your "goal" -- you're in the wrong place. It will likely take you over a year to get to DM rank 6.
...and if that is your motivation for making foundry quests they will likely be of such poor quality that it will take you closer to two years or more.

mekols

eldarth wrote: »

If ^^ this is your "goal" -- you're in the wrong place. It will likely take you over a year to get to DM rank 6.
...and if that is your motivation for making foundry quests they will likely be of such poor quality that it will take you closer to two years or more.

Yo, Nha i actully like making the quest, and im still getting used to it, so i need rewives, but Barley anyone play it, so idk what to improv ect,

sure i want dungeonmaster rank 6, but thats just a extra goal, But hey, if you took your time completing the quest, you might aswell do the Review on it, so i know what to improv to next time

sockmunkey

I played your Elf quest, but I was unable to leave a review because I was unable to finish it. After unlocking the bridge, the portal kept showing up outside the room in the trees so it was completely inaccessible.

mekols

sockmunkey wrote: »

I played your Elf quest, but I was unable to leave a review because I was unable to finish it. After unlocking the bridge, the portal kept showing up outside the room in the trees so it was completely inaccessible.

hm that is weird, when did you play it? because i played it yesterday, and i could complete it

mekols

save the elf Queen / corrupted dwarf, are the good ones, well good and good, they are the start to someting good,

eldarth

Here you go...

Offhand, it looks like you may have only edited in 2-D editor and not done any adjustments in 3-D previewer

Detail problems:

Quest: Kill the Corrupted Dwarf

1. First door not aligned properly - can see around/thru edges
2. Not sure why there is a giant beer keg in first crypt room
3. 2 ghosts path around stairway leading to shield and stop behind stairwell and say nothing and have odd names
4. Giant boulder sticking thru back wall/2nd floor where you pickup dwarf shiled
5. dwarf shield is hard to interact with - a dwarf/short character would have to jump up on stair rail/pillar to interact
6. dwarf shield named default label "wep dwarven shield"
7. dwarf shield does not disappear when collected
8. another giant keg at back of first crypt room "floating" above floor and has no base/stand
9. dead body floating inches above floor on bridge in 2nd room
10. 2nd dead body floating inches above floor and over two different stairs
11. giant wooden door behind wagon on fire apparently meant to prevent going down west stairs toward Mysti is misaligned (and bizarre) and does not prevent stair usage by simply jumping around it.
12. Corrupted dwarves attacking "Mysti" who just stands there and ignores them
13. weird burning/glowing mushrooms on same walkway as Mysti
14. Mysti dialog - "killd" s/b "killed" - "atleast" s/b "at least" - "guard entrance," s/b "guard entrance."
15. third dead body floating incheas above floor on exit bridge of Mysti crypt area
16. odd fiery glowing smoke coming from floor on either side of crypt bridge
17. very strange that the entrance to the crypt "altar" room is a dungeon door and dungeon walls
18. odd loose crypt debris with no damage in altar room - maybe altar room is garbage pit as well?
19. lone tombstone embeded in altar room floor??
20. Cleric Elf dialog "DWARFS, what" s/b "Dwarves, what" - "HM interesting, go" s/b "Hmm. Interesting. Go"
21. "Bar area" (in Elf Clerics cathedral??) has no bar top (or maybe they're walls) as well as no way inside.
22. Flowers growing out of floor along walkway in Elf clerics cathedral.
23. "Customized Half Elf Male 7" has default name
24. "Rogue Elf 2" has default name
25. "Oni_chan" has underscore in name
26. flower garden growing directly on wooden walkway in 2nd elf room
27. flower garden (also growing on wooden walkway) from 3rd room overlaps into 2nd room
28. purple underlighting of drow priestess room overlaps into 2nd elf room
29. couple of single flowers growing out of wood floor in drow priestess room
30. bookshelf overlapping stairs/blocking hallway just past drow priestess room
31. chair overlapping stairs next to above bookcase
32. "Adventurer Cleric" fighting for drow has default name
33. flower beds growing directly out of wood flooring in most rooms
34. odd dungeon wooden transition doors exiting from elf area - doors open right thru wood ceiling on other side
35. "Customized Chicken 4" for all chickens in Portal Summoner room (why are their chickens in a ...?)
36. festival "bar" area also in Portal Summoner room - not sure why again.
37. Portal Summoner no dialog - apparently just watches people use his portal
38. Portal is also halfway below floor
39. Portal Exit is about 20' too high - prevents teleporting back to earlier areas
40. Original dwarven followers suddenly appear after exiting elf portal -- but they don't follow
41. "Moon Ghost" at bottom of spiral stairs - no dialog, nothing todo in room at bottom
42. transition portal in spiral stair room also halfway below floor
43. followers upon entry to tribal cave(?) also do not follow
44. "Adventurer Wizard" in tribal cave has default name
45. ...couldn't finish 'cause I missed talking to Elf Warrior and teleporter height prevented backtracking

dragoness10

mekols wrote: »

Yo, Nha i actully like making the quest, and im still getting used to it, so i need rewives, but Barley anyone play it, so idk what to improv ect,

sure i want dungeonmaster rank 6, but thats just a extra goal, But hey, if you took your time completing the quest, you might aswell do the Review on it, so i know what to improv to next time

Spelling, punctuation, and grammar.

I need work on it too. It slips by me sometimes.

mekols

eldarth wrote: »

Here you go...

Offhand, it looks like you may have only edited in 2-D editor and not done any adjustments in 3-D previewer

Detail problems:

Quest: Kill the Corrupted Dwarf

1. First door not aligned properly - can see around/thru edges
2. Not sure why there is a giant beer keg in first crypt room
3. 2 ghosts path around stairway leading to shield and stop behind stairwell and say nothing and have odd names
4. Giant boulder sticking thru back wall/2nd floor where you pickup dwarf shiled
5. dwarf shield is hard to interact with - a dwarf/short character would have to jump up on stair rail/pillar to interact
6. dwarf shield named default label "wep dwarven shield"
7. dwarf shield does not disappear when collected
8. another giant keg at back of first crypt room "floating" above floor and has no base/stand
9. dead body floating inches above floor on bridge in 2nd room
10. 2nd dead body floating inches above floor and over two different stairs
11. giant wooden door behind wagon on fire apparently meant to prevent going down west stairs toward Mysti is misaligned (and bizarre) and does not prevent stair usage by simply jumping around it.
12. Corrupted dwarves attacking "Mysti" who just stands there and ignores them
13. weird burning/glowing mushrooms on same walkway as Mysti
14. Mysti dialog - "killd" s/b "killed" - "atleast" s/b "at least" - "guard entrance," s/b "guard entrance."
15. third dead body floating incheas above floor on exit bridge of Mysti crypt area
16. odd fiery glowing smoke coming from floor on either side of crypt bridge
17. very strange that the entrance to the crypt "altar" room is a dungeon door and dungeon walls
18. odd loose crypt debris with no damage in altar room - maybe altar room is garbage pit as well?
19. lone tombstone embeded in altar room floor??
20. Cleric Elf dialog "DWARFS, what" s/b "Dwarves, what" - "HM interesting, go" s/b "Hmm. Interesting. Go"
21. "Bar area" (in Elf Clerics cathedral??) has no bar top (or maybe they're walls) as well as no way inside.
22. Flowers growing out of floor along walkway in Elf clerics cathedral.
23. "Customized Half Elf Male 7" has default name
24. "Rogue Elf 2" has default name
25. "Oni_chan" has underscore in name
26. flower garden growing directly on wooden walkway in 2nd elf room
27. flower garden (also growing on wooden walkway) from 3rd room overlaps into 2nd room
28. purple underlighting of drow priestess room overlaps into 2nd elf room
29. couple of single flowers growing out of wood floor in drow priestess room
30. bookshelf overlapping stairs/blocking hallway just past drow priestess room
31. chair overlapping stairs next to above bookcase
32. "Adventurer Cleric" fighting for drow has default name
33. flower beds growing directly out of wood flooring in most rooms
34. odd dungeon wooden transition doors exiting from elf area - doors open right thru wood ceiling on other side
35. "Customized Chicken 4" for all chickens in Portal Summoner room (why are their chickens in a ...?)
36. festival "bar" area also in Portal Summoner room - not sure why again.
37. Portal Summoner no dialog - apparently just watches people use his portal
38. Portal is also halfway below floor
39. Portal Exit is about 20' too high - prevents teleporting back to earlier areas
40. Original dwarven followers suddenly appear after exiting elf portal -- but they don't follow
41. "Moon Ghost" at bottom of spiral stairs - no dialog, nothing todo in room at bottom
42. transition portal in spiral stair room also halfway below floor
43. followers upon entry to tribal cave(?) also do not follow
44. "Adventurer Wizard" in tribal cave has default name
45. ...couldn't finish 'cause I missed talking to Elf Warrior and teleporter height prevented backtracking

this is good, will work on this,

archlegend1230

Hi fellow, I think I just played with you today in a skirmish XD

Tried your foundry "save the elf queen". Its interesting just need to fix the spellings...

But don't worry, fixing grammars and spellings are the very last thing I do too.

mekols

Remove this post plz