War is coming: needs a review

dohgoh

hi i just made my first foundry and i could use some feedback on it. to improve and get all bugs & glitches

''Something strange is coming investigate your feelings and find the truth. Because nobody wants to believe you on your gut feeling. The time to act is now.''

short code: NW-DGDRMS2YM
title: war is coming
my handle: @dohgoh

eldarth

Spamming your request through all the forums will likely get you ignored as opposed to helped.

Your one (and only) post belongs here:

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