The Protector (NW-DS5WNKDIS)

ladypeanut66

Hello there,

I am trading reviews for my quest "The Protector". It is the first one of my first campaign "The Warrior's Way".
This is the first version of the quest, although it is 'finished' and playable (not beta test or anything like that). I would love to know your impressions about this first quest and everything that has to be changed or it is not as good as it has to be.

Put your quest to review on a comment and I will play it and tell you about it

vayle

Hello There!

It was a nice quest with good story and a twist at the end.

Here's some things i noticed:

• You wrote misterious instead of mysterious
• The wait part was pretty unclear first.
• The first guard you encounter in the first dungeon is bugged he doesn't dissappear and doesn't follow
• I saved the people in the dungeon but i haven't got the skill to tell i did so.
• Mysterious Elf for the second time he says: andclever without space
• At the end when you talk with the elf you say I kill him instead of Killed him
• I'm not sure if its on purpose but at the end Quake is still a d&ck

Overall it's a nice quest i hope i helped with telling the things i found.

If you're interested in my first quest then here is the info -> Troubles in Market District (NW-DRIUDL4DM)

-Nemeia

ladypeanut66

Hi there!

I am playing your quest right now Just a tip: put a longer summary for the quest, it will attract more people when in New tab... Or featured, who knows? Hahahaha

At the beginning, when talking to Guard Frinko, it would be nice if he explains the player about what is happening on the Market District. The dialogue seems too short, maybe, on that part.

Loved the author's comment, by the way :P

Before going onto the building, maybe there are too many enemies, aren't there? My companion got killed (what a surprise

vayle

Thanks for the tip i'll make a longer summary and edit Frinko's dialog.

I'll also look into the enemies on the start.

-Nemeia

stjordvik

Just ran through this one. A good story and the dungeons look great. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but that was already covered in the previous post. I did have one serious bug when waiting for twilight. I waited so long the game logged me out for inactivity and then when I logged back in and resumed the quest I could continue.

If you have some time, I just posted one myself, Smuggler's Trove, NW-DEFYV90V8. Let me know what you think.

Cheers

ladypeanut66

srjordvik, I have reviewed your quest. The review is on your Thread

I have looked on the grammar and spelling mistakes, and redone the waiting part. The quest is up again, and I would love more reviews, specially about the waiting part (It drove me crazy XD).

orangefiree

Playing through now.

1.) The portal is in the ground.

2.) I'm not sure how the wait until twilight objective works. If it is a timer, you may not want to make it so long. If it is a reach point objective, the point to reach is in a really odd place.

3.) Is Loopy Mad supposed to be a Foulspawn?

4.) After getting the chest, it says "Go to Next Map" and has no exit door.

Any chance you could play through a couple parts of The Arcane Conflict in my signature? The later parts need more feedback but the story will be very confusing if you do that so it's up to you.