The Haronomous Saga H1-H4.

shandizar
shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
edited April 2014 in Foundry Quest Database
Greetings all

Here is my first effort in the foundry. They have been vastly improved over time with many updates
Check them out.

Haronomous Saga: NWS-DJIKP5IWK or you can find them singly by these codes

Harrowing Hildbrant: NW-DEDJ93JH8
Harry the Almighty: NW-DC97KVGHJ
The Harkness Legacy: NW-DETTWWQHZ
The Hildbrant Horror: NW-DPMT8ODHR

You begin by rescuing a small village from a terrible mystery, Then in chapter 2 you return to the village to help discover why all these crazy things are happening. Could they have anything to do with the wizard Harkness? In chapter 3 your hired by Eladonra the Purple to find and rescue her companions, and you discover a terrible truth, In chapter 4, once again, you return to the village. Can you put an end to the evil plots of the villain of the story?

It's a story based adventure with an ample supply of combat some of which can be avoided.

Average time is about 90 mins for the whole campaign.

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Thanks for your interest
HellsHot

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"...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
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  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited February 2014
    Update: Chapter 1. Did a complete rehash of chapter one, It's now far less evident whats going on in the begining.
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    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited February 2014
    Greetings

    Update:Wow fixing lots of grammatical errors going to be a while on this one may have to do several passes. on all 4 chapters
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings all

    Update: I removed many dead end responses from the Harry dialog and others. Made Adam's journal easier to access(I was having trouble clicking on it) both from chapter 1, went through all the dialog again looking for errors and streamlined it a bit more(also chapter 1).

    Thanks for your interest
    Shandizar
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings everyone

    Update: Finished the Gramatial sweep on chapters one and two. Whew.... That took a while! Made some repairs on the Residence cellar. I'm not sure why, but the walls in one section got moved somehow (must be gremlins). Chapter 2. Mr. Edd has returned and he sings the whole song one verse per map.... :)

    Thanks for your Interest
    Shandizar
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings all

    Update: Chapter #2, Finally! I got those patrols in the forest fixed, no more NPC's blinking around.

    Thanks for your interest.
    Shandizar
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • tiborrus
    tiborrus Member Posts: 94 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Hi!

    I just played the Chapter 1.with my Lev.60.GWF.
    Good Foundry!
    Enjoyable story, nice details and challenging fights!Interesting lighting(dark and bright rooms depend on events), perfect music in the battles.
    5/5
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings all

    Update: (Chapter #3) Resolved the path issues for the patrols in the forest (like chapter #2) also, eliminated 10 objectives by using levers to open more than one cell in the main cell block.

    Thanks for your interest
    Shandizar
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • tiborrus
    tiborrus Member Posts: 94 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Hi!
    I just played H3 with my Lev.60. GWF.

    Good chapter, enjoyable fights, but some advice:

    - in the forest some details are floating in the air(spider webs, piles of woods)

    - the dungeon is too bright (I think) and no custom details

    - in the dialogues: in lot of sentences "i" instead of "I"(i am, i do,...etc.)

    But my review: 5/5
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Thanks Tiborrus

    I am working on the floating terrain, but Those webs sure are a pain, I originally reasoned that the caves were brighter cause the Drow had Troglodyte allies who needed it (I don't have a 4th edition Monster Manual to check if Troglodytes have night vision.) If anyone can tell me they do, I will diminish the light in the caves. I am also working on the grammar on chapters 3 and 4. In the review you asked why the house is so bare in chapter 2? The reason for that is stated in the dialog with Harry. Seems he was attempting a magical spell and it backfired.

    Thanks for your interest
    Shandizar(@HellsHot)
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings

    Update: Added a ton of new details to Eladonra's tower in Chapters 2 and 3. Look up.

    Thanks for your interest
    Shandizar (@HellsHot)
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings

    Update: Vastly improved Chapter 1 visually it's now equal to the rest of the series.

    Thanks for your interest
    Shandizar(@HellsHot)
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Greetings

    Update: Chapter 1, Weird Pete is now part of the story, and no longer just a random encounter. It's now correctly night as you leave the mansion to speak with the Protector.

    Thanks for your interest.
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited April 2014
    Greetings all

    Update: Did a big detail sweep to make sure all details are the same in all chapters using the same maps. Some maps I had to recreate from scratch because the duplicate map button kept crashing my game. Anybody else have that problem?

    Thanks for your interest.
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
  • shandizar
    shandizar Member Posts: 144 Arc User
    edited April 2014
    Greetings

    Update: Added a number of new NPCs, some may even help with combat. Others just add to the story. Stepped up the difficulty on the final combat in chapter H3.
    5734556npsTK.png
    "...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
    HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
    1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
    2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
    3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.