Into the Pit NW-DHPPFCRU4

guitarzan698

Submitted for beta testing.

I published this adventure two days ago.. 88 views to the post... not one play. Hmmmmm.
Come on Gang... can I get a play or two please? I would greatly appreciate some critique on my work. I believe this quest is ready to go but I would like a fresh pair of eyes to give it a look... and some comments. The quest should run about 15 to 20 minutes. It's designed as the introduction to the "Adventures in Zephyr Ridge" campaign which will be a series of quests set here in this valley.

"AZR - Into the Pit" NW-DHPPFCRU4

Give it a try... thanks.

Guitarzan

melinden

Your title might be scaring some folks away. Not from any fault of yours but that most of the XP grinds are just called "Pit of [thing that you are going to kill non-stop for 30 minutes]"

Can you tell us more about it? Does it feature puzzles, lots of combat, exploration? Since I often can't complete heavy combat quests I often leave reviewing those to others who will enjoy that challenge.

Finally, the best way to get reviews is to trade them. Now that you've posted here you should go into other threads (which you may have done, I haven't looked at all the threads) and review their quests so they will come here and review yours.

guitarzan698

Thanks.. that's good advice. I really didn't like the title anyways. Now to think of something good... hmmm.

guitarzan698

Any suggestions? I'm thinking like 'A Short Vacation' or 'Weekend in the Mountains' or something like that. Basically, the whole thing is about the character trying to take a country vacation.. and he gets drafted to rescue a villager from a local menace. This quest acts as an introduction to the area, which is used for the whole campaign. Light combat, medium role play, medium outdoor exploration.

How about 'A Short Vacation in Zephyr Ridge'?