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The Hunt

roxorixroxorix Member Posts: 4 Arc User
edited July 2013 in Foundry Quest Database
Name: The Hunt by @roxorix

Short Code: NW-DLQZASUFM

Mission Type: Story, Combat, Lore, Puzzle, Solo

Average Duration: 20-30 minutes

Amount of Combat: Medium

Starts at: Skyrunner's Pass (World Map)

Mission Summary:

"The Hunt begins!
Lord Skyrunner calls on brave adventurers, hunters and slayers!
Everyone who dares to join The Hunt has to sign on the list below!
Riches and glory awaits!"


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My 1st Foundry Quest - The Hunt (NW-DLQZASUFM)!
Check it out! Suggestions, Reviews etc. are welcome! :)
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Comments

  • technoskaldtechnoskald Member Posts: 19 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    I liked your level design in general, although there are a LOT of map transitions (maybe you could merge a few of these). The pacing is a bit uneven and the writing could use a spellcheck, but it's very atmospheric in general and I think you may have a story in here someplace I'd like to enjoy more at some point.
  • karitrkaritr Member Posts: 662 Bounty Hunter
    edited July 2013
    I agree with a lot of technoskald's points. I didn't mind there being a lot of map transitions so much, but I would have liked to spend more time enjoying the maps themselves...you really did create some wonderful ambience - particularly in the Hunter's camp maps and the swamp.

    My thoughts while playing:
    • I thought the barricade was a great feature
    • Nice to see you had taken on board feedback re: falling into the mine
    • I would have preferred to see the ceiling and walls of the 'magic' tent lined with cloth so it could remain a tent without the need to cheese it up as 'magical' :p
    • Creating a second map to show the hunt ready to move forward deserves a star by itself. Now that's attention to detail! (and greatly appreciated)
    • Wish Shani would stop blushing around my PC lol. On the other hand, if the Mysterious Man made a move...
    • Riddles are always good.
    • I think I acquiesced to Mr Coda's request too easily. This conversation should be given more depth if I am to be persuaded to turn on my patron.
    • The ending felt a bit rushed, but I really enjoyed playing this quest.
    • Hope I get to bump into Mr Coda again some day *blushes*

    Sort out the grammar and you have a definite 5* on your hands :)
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