NW-DDTLPFIKS : Forgotten Treasure Pt1

krisrmurray

[Review Trade] Announcing my first ever foundry adventure and am looking for feedback. The game is balanced between story/fighting/puzzle with an emphasis on puzzles.

Forgotten Treasure Pt1
NW-DDTLPFIKS

Willing to trade reviews, let me know!

Happy Treasure Hunting!
~Kris

zbkolde

Good quest. You have a good understanding of the tools and assets. It needs some testing and tweaking, but it looks like you'll have no trouble making adjustments and improvements. And yes it is a good mix of story, combat, and puzzle.

I'll send you my notes in a forum private message.

krisrmurray

Thanks for the feedback.

Still need reviews. Any others?

aracnakat

Kris, it was a great quest. I completely enjoyed it although I'm terrible when it comes to jumping so that took me a few tries -hehe-. I saw a typo and meant to write it down but my son came into the room and distracted me ... it's when the spider is talking and he says something about me not being able to get to the door lever.

Anyways, thanks again for reviewing my quest as well.

Donna

docsc00ter

Kris, I just ran your dungeon and intended to offer a review. But I'm not sure if I did something wrong at the end. I ended up teleporting out and never completing the adventure. No final chest. No opportunity to post a review.

In any case, I was going to let you know that I really enjoyed the adventure. It was a good length with balanced combat. I especially liked the conversation with the spider, and the opportunity to "slow down" and read more carefully.

Scooter

krisrmurray

Thanks for the feedback scooter and Donna! I'll search for that typo (I think I know where you're talking about).

redneckronin

This is great quest. Well put together, nice maps, the puzzles / jumping are enough to take you out of the "rush in and kill" mindset, but not so complex as to become a chore, very nicely paced combat as well. The Story is nice, there's a couple of very well done "set-pieces" and it engaged me so well I have no idea how long it took me because I never once looked at a clock, I was that interested in the story.

If it gets to be Daily Eligible it will go straight in to my rotation list.

Gave it 4/5 Stars.

Really, really, really enjoyed it, just a few elements need a little bit of polish.

All The Best

krisrmurray

Thanks for the playthrough and feedback! I'm planning to continue adding polish to give greater context and lore into the adventure as well as other bits to lead up to the next adventure.