Act I: The Awakening from my campaign "Machinations of Devils"; This is my very first quest, and would greatly appreciate constructive criticism. It was originally designed as one whole Act I but when I kept getting "Packet corruption" errors whenever I tried to save or add another object I split it into two parts, which is probably for the better since it was bordering on 45+ minutes to fully complete. It's now around 15 - 20 minutes per part. It's a little dialogue heavy, but most is from side NPCs which can be ignored. Good amount of combat involved. I believe it's a balanced quest. I've added some side-quests, and spent most of my time adding detail on the maps. I'm thinking about adding two more Acts depending on the response. I hope you guys will take the time to play and review it. I'll review in kind. I've added a couple of screenshots from a couple of maps. The short codes for both are listed at the bottom. Thanks!
Campaign: The Machinations of Devils NWS-DH23RSSYS
Act I: Part I
NW-DGDH5ZYE5
Act I: Part II
ND-DUGC8287P