First foundry quest - quick five minuter

bolt1981

Hey guys, this is my first foundry, a test to see how it works and what people think. Its very quick and simple.

I intend to make a story/campaign out of the wight Elri'sa and the adventures to combat her. The dungeons will become longer, and more complicated.

Please be honest but decent (im not the greatest at foundry) about it. Im not looking for tips just a friendly critique

The quest is called Crypt of Elri'sa
ID is NW-DBFW2LSDL

Thank you

dzogen

Hello,
first off I liked that it was short.
I gave you an extra star as it's your first review and in anticipation of some of these (fundamental) changes being made:

1) You need to include a respawn fire
2) "go to next map" should not be the starting mission - give it something scary or intersting sounding
3) Don't stack encounters. You did this on the first few packs. Only reason I didn't drop was I was playing a low level rogue. My higher level toon would have been frustrated and quit. Only stack in certain (very limited) cases, but you need to know when to break this rule. To start, just don't do it.

Once you get these basics out of the way

A little more backstory (optional)

Hope this helps mate. Keep at it.

bolt1981

dzogen wrote: »

Hello,
first off I liked that it was short.
I gave you an extra star as it's your first review and in anticipation of some of these (fundamental) changes being made:

1) You need to include a respawn fire
2) "go to next map" should not be the starting mission - give it something scary or intersting sounding
3) Don't stack encounters. You did this on the first few packs. Only reason I didn't drop was I was playing a low level rogue. My higher level toon would have been frustrated and quit. Only stack in certain (very limited) cases, but you need to know when to break this rule. To start, just don't do it.

Once you get these basics out of the way

A little more backstory (optional)

Hope this helps mate. Keep at it.

thanks for the advice (and the tip), ill bear it mind

vaelic

I'll give it a shot. can you review mine too?




Campaign Name: CH. 1 - Don't "Count" on it by @vaelic76



Short Code:NW-DQ3H4MXKG
Mission Type: Story/Mystery/Combat
Average Duration:15-20 minutes
Amount of Combat: Average
Starts at: Protector's Enclave
Mission Summary: A mysterious figure called "The Count" is rumored to dwell within the city of Protector's Enclave. Does this mysterious figure exist? Embark on an adventure where nothing is as it seems and the mystery unravels!



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