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  • muzrub333muzrub333 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    I will be continuing my reviews this week; I like to do one foundry per night after work, so hopefully I'll get these things done soon.
  • labmouse42labmouse42 Member Posts: 64
    edited May 2013
    Could you please review my quest -- shown in the sig file?
    Its my first one and I would love some constructive feedback.

    In case the sigs are blocked
    Foundry Quests
    Author : @labmouse43
    Short Code : NWS-DB76GRRHK
    Name : Save the Village
    Foundry Quests
    Author : @labmouse43
    Short Code : NW-DJHHV5CGY
    Name : The Frosty Protologist
    Duration : 15 minutes
  • gladmoregladmore Member Posts: 6 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    I guess this thread is dead? I never saw a review.
    Ghosts of Loved Ones [Light Lore] [Heavy Combat] [25-45min] NW-DO7G4LK2H
  • irtoof75irtoof75 Member Posts: 28 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    If any of you fellow foundry junkies get the chance please try my first foundry quest. I am working on the second part now and I would like any feedback good or bad to try and make the second part better.


    Thanks
    "Crayons taste like purple"

    Campaign: Night of Embers - NWS-DQX5GVNKO
    1: A Flame In The Darkness - NW-DE47BTDI9
  • irtoof75irtoof75 Member Posts: 28 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    Hi Labmouse

    I enjoyed the humor of your quest a ton. Your combat mix was just right IMO. I really liked that almost all your NPCs had something to say. A little feedback. There were a couple of floaties when I played through, a table in the corner and a book on one of the tables. Also Frostys bed is floating too. :) Some of the grammar is not correct also. Try running all your dialog and quest steps through a spellcheck program, sucks I know but it really detracts from the experience when there are errors.
    "Crayons taste like purple"

    Campaign: Night of Embers - NWS-DQX5GVNKO
    1: A Flame In The Darkness - NW-DE47BTDI9
  • cheiftomcheiftom Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    Heya :) I have a brand new campaign @ NWS-DGSPHKAX5. I am sure you will love it! Cheers
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • warstormforumwarstormforum Member Posts: 41
    edited June 2013
    I'd like it if you reviewed mine the code is in the Sig

    I'd mostly like comments on:
    - the grammer (not native english here so il probably make some mistakes)
    - thoughts on mob costumes/names
    - decorations inside
  • pavvopavvo Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    Hi

    Nice of you to do this. Appreciate a run through of all quests below (Or just the Amulet of Shining Sun if you don't have the time)

    Cheers (Links in sig)
    The Tale of the 3 Suns - NWS-DA9XX8WIV
    #1: 3 Suns Aligned NW-DFEKZANXF
    #2: The Amulet of the Shining Sun NW-DRKKGUI26
    #2 has choices that give a high amount of replayability

    The Legend of Khyber - NWS-DK33EIYMY
    #1: The Holy Symbol of Khyber NW-DU3HEVWJ7
    #2: The Gauntlets of Khyber NW-DN0006FAZ
    Heavy combat/light story
  • luckybutjinxedluckybutjinxed Member Posts: 2 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    If you're still doing this, could you test my first quest? NW-DBPC9ILJF
  • lolsorhandlolsorhand Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 981 Bounty Hunter
    edited June 2013
    Feel free to check my signatures below :) Both finished work, so i've started on part 3.
    I like turtles.

    Brethren of the Five, Campaign. - Story focused
    The Dwarven Tale - Hack 'N Slash
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