More Review Trading! First-Time Poster/Quest!

bulvyne

Howdy, all!

Still learning the ropes of course, but having fun with the Foundry and with the game in general!

My first quest is awaiting reviews, and like others, I'd love to have your review, and in turn I'd be happy to play through yours and post a review as well!

My question info:

Writer: @INDYTIMS
Quest Name: The White Wizardess
Code: NW-DADUFOLCX

(that is the letter O in the code, NOT the number zero, just to be sure!)

If you run through it and post a review, feel free to reply here with YOUR quest code and I'll play it withing 24-48 hours!

Thank you all! And remember, while I love feedback, be gentle! This is my first! :P

crok2

What is the estimated time? If it's not too long I will run it much later tonight

bulvyne

20-30 min I believe. My first time though, my estimate could be off by 5-10 min or so!

crok2

Alright. If I have time I will run it later tonight... hopefully drag a few friends along too.

crok2

Ok, we did the quest and I must say we really enjoyed it We tried to stay in the instance for a while so we wouldn't tank the time below 15 minutes but when we left it now shows as 11 minutes long. I think you need to add more to it because you want it to make the 15 minute mark and people will go in groups like we did.

One small critique: It says to follow the girl to the estate which seems misleading because she can't move :P A lot of people may try and wait for her hehe.

Anyway, great attention to detail! I love to play peoples foundries that spent a lot of time making it look good

edit: we did run into the bug where we lost the quest from our journal and had to relog to get it back after leaving to get our reward. This is a cryptic bug though.

voivodak

bulvyne, I just tried your quest. First of all, I can finally say that I have found a human interior well built. The rooms are large and detailed enough. Nice work ... i can see that you've lost time behind it. The story doesn't have a lot of dialogues, but they are very well written.

Unfortunately i was kicked out of the quest. After killing the lieutenant are returned to the lady, who told me to go back to town to get my reward. However, when I exit out the door, i lost all the progress. I don't know if i chose the wrong door or if you need to adjust the transition. In the first case maybe try to make more visible the exit.
i'll Try again tomorrow and I hope to finish it. However, I would have given it 4 stars.

Mine quest is in sign if you want return the favor

bulvyne

Voivodak,

The problem you experienced seems to have cropped up for a few different people in other quests as well. Logging out then logging back in puts the quest back in your log, and you can proceed right to the chest and collect the reward, finishing the quest for the xp, etc.

It remains to be seen if it's a 'builder' mistake, or if it's a bug... but I think it's a bug. I ran through the quest again in the Foundry itself and it works fine. But out in the live game-world... poof... exit the house and the quest disappears, etc. There are at least two other threads expressing the same issue from other authors with their quests as well, so I'd be surprised if all of us screwed something up somehow. LOL!

Will see if Cryptic takes a look at this or not.

Thank you for running through it, and the comments! Mucho appreciated!

dugada

I will try your quest, mine is:
http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?256402-The-camp-and-bandits
NW-DDJJA7X98 - THe Cry from the Past

dugada

I played your quest and here are my notes:
-very nice enviroment
-I think you should allow players to track quest to lieutenant - its easy to get lost yourself there
-I think, this foundry has quite good potencial, but you can make it better -for example add some traps (I dont mean traps as objects, but something like " you walked in the room, the door closed and you need to find way to get out of there"

but very nice job with details and enviroment:)

voivodak

Okay, I was able to complete it and get the reward.:)
I also added a short review in-game with the stars of course