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notaurious

Quest: Memnon: Invoking the Old God
Short Code: NW-DJC4R9H3R
Duration: ~20 minutes
Difficulty: This quest is best played by people with companions. It gets progressively harder.

Intro story: You've overheard about a great treasure at a site called the Sacred Ground. While exploring the area, you came across a portal that took you deeper within. What should have been a simple excursion to loot and weapon upgrades turned into a complicated nightmare about cultists invoking a lunatic old god.

NOTES: Sub your quests here and I will review them. I will review yours first if need be, but only until the first few people don't return the favor.

Reviews In Progress/Completed

Author: Dugada Short Code: NW-DDJJA7X98 Status: Review Complete
Author: LostCharta Short Code: NW-DIRYOWUKY Status: Review In Progress

Thank you for your time. Looking forward to seeing what all is out there!

notaurious

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notaurious

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notaurious

Feel free and post your quests in advance. I can review your quest first.

dugada

Here is my quest : NW-DDJJA7X98 -The Cry from the past
http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?256402-The-camp-and-bandits

I will try your quest, when my GF will leave my place

lostcharta

Trying yours now.
Quests are in my signature. Do either, or both if you're feeling generous.
Could you put the review in my quest thread? The link is also in the signature.

Edit: Done with LV50 control wizard
That was really good. I liked the story (it ended abruptly but I assume that's just because you intend to continue it in other quests). The characters were interesting and I'm curious to see where it goes from here.

Minor problems
* Quest starts with "go to the next map". You could change the text for greater immersion
* Dungeon portcullis' have the default name ("Dungeon Portcullis 01" or something)
* The 1st arrow trap is hanging slightly out of the wall
* Having a mindflayer show up out of nowhere was kind of strange. Maybe reskin it so it's not as obviously a mindflayer? Or if it's supposed to be a mindflayer that has (for whatever reason) joined the cult then you could dress it like the other cultists to show that.
* Don't know if I'm remembering incorrectly but I think that the orb that was supposed too be "dropped" by the mid-boss was there all along.

slaidz

I'll put this on my "to play" list.

notaurious

dugada wrote: »

Here is my quest : NW-DDJJA7X98 -The Cry from the past
http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?256402-The-camp-and-bandits

I will try your quest, when my GF will leave my place

I have completed your review.

notaurious

lostcharta wrote: »

Trying yours now.
Quests are in my signature. Do either, or both if you're feeling generous.
Could you put the review in my quest thread? The link is also in the signature.

Thanks for review. I will be doing yours shortly. If not this afternoon, then this evening when I return from work.

dugada

So I tried your quest, here is my notes:
-First objective is just "Go to next map" (its okey, but maybe it will discourage some ppl)
-Dont know if its your intention, but there are blue small fires everywhere where will be some enemies - its quite easy to know where you should expect enemies
-Allow players to track quest - I wasnt sure where to go sometimes

Fights:
-Very good, challenging but very good

Idea and story:
-I really like it, maybe one note - when I entered that dungeon, I wasnt sure why I am there.

voivodak

my quest is in sign. I'll play yours very soon, probably tonight. Please, return me the favor

notaurious

voivodak wrote: »

my quest is in sign. I'll play yours very soon, probably tonight. Please, return me the favor

I will note yours to do tonight when I am back from work.