3 Suns Aligned - Part 1 of the Amulet of the Suns campaign

pavvo

3 Suns Aligned
NW-DFEKZANXF
Author: pavvo
Duration: 20min

A mysterious traveler has enlist your help in acquiring ancient artifacts. At first you refuse, but the amulet the traveler is wearing compels you to help. Can you recover the artifacts and discover the secret of the Amulet?
This quest will take you to the underdarks of a goblin cavern, battle drow in the open plains and a unique twist at the end!

This is my first foundry quest, and also my first in the series of 5 which I've planned (more to come!) Please rate and review and I appreciate any feedback.

Please also take a look at my 2nd quest - Holy Symbol of Khyber

Cheers

flaminggnats

Played and reviewed.

pavvo

Thanks! Really appreciate the playthrough! Will definitely add some scenery to the 2nd map. Cheers

pavvo

EDITS
Changed objective so you will be have to find the map back to Blacklake District after killing the Shock Devil
Changed the scenery and mob spacing in the 2nd and 3rd map. (I think you'll like what you can see now)

tabris82

Hello. Reviewed your quest just now. It is a nice beginning but there are a few things i have found:

Maybe to make the text more readable use [/ooc] for the descriptions instead of just brackets inside the text.

Found a typo with the traveler compells - should be compels.

When you are leaving the first cave the transition say Go to the next map.

In the Resounding plains you some mobs stuck in the rocks.

When you are leaving the resounding plains the transition say Go to the next map.

I also though the first mobs inside the cave were a bit stacked, maybe give the possibility of pulling them separately, with care.

I hope this helps. Thanks ^_^

dominemesis

3 Suns Aligned
NW-DFEKZANXF

5 Stars, really fun quest!

zefrimex

I would give it 3 stars. The goblin cave was my favorite part. I think that if you are going to use this quest as an opening for a campaign you should try and make the story hook a little more intriguing. Just gathering some amulets we know nothing about isn't that interesting. I also think fighting drow out in a field is odd as they are the most likely to want to fight in darkness. I do like the fact that you use that type of outdoor setting though. You don't get to see much of that.