I am working on a campaign based on a tabletop DnD campaign my kids and I made up. I would LOVE some feedback if anyone out there would be willing to give it a try for me and provide some constructive criticism I would GREATLY appreciate it.
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vendryasMember, Neverwinter Beta UsersPosts: 25Arc User
edited May 2013
I went ahead and made a review on the Foundry itself (@vendryas) but since the word limit was a bit too short for my tastes I decided to just go ahead and make a similar one here for you as well.
I really liked the overall story of the quest, and the dialogue options were plentiful and answered all of the questions that I had with the story. The encounters were entertaining and varied, some of them pretty challenging for my level four Cleric, especially in the forest as I tried to go through the thicket of trees to move around the mobs, only to find that I was ambushed on all sides by orcs... It was a painful death, but I definitely learned my lesson and took the most direct route. It was still nice to have that little bit of surprise though.
I can only really offer two criticisms, one being the grammar (which is easily fixed and I don't take too seriously) and the detail of the various places you created for the quests. I'll admit when I went into Rothye's (? - I logged off so I don't know if I spelled that right) house and saw that it was bare, I was a bit disappointed. A lot of the places felt like they could be touched up a bit. But still, that can always be added in later on. I believe you mentioned that you were still working on it.
Overall I enjoyed the experience for the time I spent with it, and I'm definitely subscribing for more whenever you intend on releasing it. I'll give it 4/5 just like I did on the Foundry itself.
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libertarian1Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero UsersPosts: 8Arc User
edited May 2013
Thank you.
Yeah, I'm in the military and currently deployed. A lot of the spelling errors were due to me working on the dialogue on laptop in barracks after a 14 hour work day. (one day I only got 1 hour of sleep before going back to work... lesson learned, won't do that again) I did ask my wife to play today and she gave me some suggestions.
The maps are pretty weak, I understand. I was just trying to get the basics down for now, focusing on the story first to get some feedback. I'm starting to work on the maps now. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate the extensive feedback. It is appreciative and helpful!
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I really liked the overall story of the quest, and the dialogue options were plentiful and answered all of the questions that I had with the story. The encounters were entertaining and varied, some of them pretty challenging for my level four Cleric, especially in the forest as I tried to go through the thicket of trees to move around the mobs, only to find that I was ambushed on all sides by orcs... It was a painful death, but I definitely learned my lesson and took the most direct route. It was still nice to have that little bit of surprise though.
I can only really offer two criticisms, one being the grammar (which is easily fixed and I don't take too seriously) and the detail of the various places you created for the quests. I'll admit when I went into Rothye's (? - I logged off so I don't know if I spelled that right) house and saw that it was bare, I was a bit disappointed. A lot of the places felt like they could be touched up a bit. But still, that can always be added in later on. I believe you mentioned that you were still working on it.
Overall I enjoyed the experience for the time I spent with it, and I'm definitely subscribing for more whenever you intend on releasing it. I'll give it 4/5 just like I did on the Foundry itself.
Yeah, I'm in the military and currently deployed. A lot of the spelling errors were due to me working on the dialogue on laptop in barracks after a 14 hour work day. (one day I only got 1 hour of sleep before going back to work... lesson learned, won't do that again) I did ask my wife to play today and she gave me some suggestions.
The maps are pretty weak, I understand. I was just trying to get the basics down for now, focusing on the story first to get some feedback. I'm starting to work on the maps now. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate the extensive feedback. It is appreciative and helpful!
Thanks again!