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1st try - tyvm

angelxeyeangelxeye Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 1
edited April 2013 in General Discussion (PC)
I moved this thread over to moonstone mask area.
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THANK YOU! for all the comments! These especially go out to:
Gillrmn: http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?23281-Deities-of-New-Neverwinter-Detailed&p=356571#post356571
riqita: Call to action advice!
Neverwinter Wiki: http://forgottenrealms.wikia.com/
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  • derangedheroderangedhero Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited April 2013
    Interesting premise. :)
    Made me want to keep reading after the text had ended, so I think the background for a fun character is taking root.
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  • moondawg13moondawg13 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users, Silverstars Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited April 2013
    It makes me want to read more...
    Campaign: The Legend of Snowmane
    Chapter One: In Search of the Legend
  • thunderspankerthunderspanker Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Silverstars Posts: 713 Bounty Hunter
    edited April 2013
    Very compelling.. This is a great story, and premise.
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    On one side of the mountain, there were bones...
  • martianmanrapermartianmanraper Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 61
    edited April 2013
    Quit fishing for positive reinforcement. The story's alright. Glad to see someone's being creative with the game, though.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • riqitariqita Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 297 Bounty Hunter
    edited April 2013
    It's... OK.
    Seems like Oghma is the obvious choice for deity.
    Which is fine because Oghma accepts all alignments for worshippers. He is Unaligned in 4e. (Not sure if that's the case in the MMO)

    The main problem I see is there is no Call to Action
    And she seems to already be acting as a hero in the Ordinary World, so I don't really get a feel of how the character will change.
    Nor why she chooses to go to Neverwinter. Nor what she truly hopes to accomplish.

    I think you have to bump those last two motivations up a couple notches. At the very least.
  • angelxeyeangelxeye Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 1
    edited April 2013
    Thanks for all the feed back-
    Call to action: you are right, the demon awakening alone is kind of hollow. Honestly I was not sure if Teiflings had demons in 4e, (I read there were a lot of changes - but not sure what they were.)
    Oghma: I read he was true neutral in 3e somewhere so I was not sure- I prob will use him then. I like the quest for knowledge and might use that as my 'call' so to speak - thirst for knowledge and all that. TY Ill try to repost in a few days with my updates.
    Fish: No no, I dont know D&D like some of you guys. Some posts here make me feel like I am reading a different language (I did not know there were multiple editions until a few months ago). But I really want to get into this game - so time for me to at least start working on it and ditch the tourist in me.
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