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Just finished playing your quest. Impressive work. Very good story, detailed environments. I was very entertained during the whole story. A few minor points - to minimize clutter, maybe have the gate key disapear when opening the door, no point on cluttering the inventory. The last portal was sideways, maybe it was…
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Hello everyone. Has I am going into vacation, I'll have less time to review for the next couple weeks (I'll take the laptop but I won't play as much) - also for every review I manage to make, 2 or 3 requests pop out :D Since it takes some time to run them, I'll stop accepting new request for now - until I have the pending…
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Hello, finished reviewing your quest (you were lucky, some were before you but yours was the quickest and we did not have lots of time today). The story is interesting but the quest needs some polishing. The house is very empty, well most of your decor are. Maybe place the respawn inside the fireplaces so they are not in…
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Just finished it! It was nice ^_^ I prefer when the quests offer a bit more dialog options, even if they are leading to the same result, just letting different personalities for different alts speak in a different way. You could have something to remove the 2 key bits for the inventory, I don't like the clutter and I…
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The quest has potential, but the dialogs were really odd. Most of the options given cancel the talk (objective fail or w/e its called), which made no sense. You should really review the dialogs to correct this. Maybe you are unaware but you can link answers, so various positive answers can lead you to the same conclusion.…
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The paiinnn. Your quest had no story at all, just kill them, kill them, kill them. The gameplay is not even rewarding because your friend Pynde dies in the end. Since i duoed it, we managed to kill all the many encounters you placed and finish it but it was a pain. The exterior was nicely decorated though (maybe its a…
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Very nice quest. I had a lot of fun and everything made sense. I liked the kobold god too I found no mistakes other than "wont" instead of won't on an answer you give to the necromancer, but as you know I am the last person that could give grammar help ^_^ I had no problem at all with the teleports and your placement of…
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Very nice quest. I had a lot of fun and everything made sense. I liked the kobold god too :D I found no mistakes other than "wont" instead of won't on an answer you give to the necromancer, but as you know I am the last person that could give grammar help ^_^ I had no problem at all with the teleports and your placement of…
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I ran your quest, the writing is excellent and i really liked the animations you chose for the dialogs. I thought that the castle approach looked a little barren, the whole land under the bridge is totally empty. There was also grass inside the hut before the gate to the courtyard (nitpicking), since it had a floor, I…
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I thought the quest was ok but given the weird setup involved I would have expected more humor, and in the end it did not hit the mark for me. It could use more polishing. You enter the houses of weird mobs, try to kill them all, then their boss say "ok, take the flour/honey". How did they know it was was I wanted? Felt…
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Hello, nice short little quest, straight to the point. The fights are a bit stacked, but i duoed it so it was fine and fun (would have been a nightmare alone though). Two things i noticed: your transitions have Go to the next map instead of a personalized exit. On the eerie bookshelf there is missing a ">" on the third…
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Hello, nice short little quest, straight to the point. The fights are a bit stacked, but i duoed it so it was fine and fun (would have been a nightmare alone though). Two things i noticed: your transitions have Go to the next map instead of a personalized exit. On the eerie bookshelf there is missing a ">" on the third…
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Both methods are really nice. Thank you for taking the time to share them @ninjanerdbgm and @zovya. I'll have some use for those timers on my second quest :D let's see how i fare ^^
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Hello! So i just finished your quest. Did it solo with a Cleric, the combats were a bit hard but nothing overwhelming. It was fun and i liked how there was plenty of dialog options that would fit different personalities. A few things i noticed that you might want to change should they not be intended: The first encounters…
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Wow Tsumoro, awesome job on those reviews! If you ever get time I would be honored if you ran mine :D Tale of a key-losing Rat Short Code: NW-DLNI2LJDW url: http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?271511-UGC-Tale-of-a-key-losing-Rat Difficulty: Variable (multiple choices) Avg. time: 23 min. I have quite the list of…
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Hello! So i just finished your quest. Did it solo with a Cleric, the combats were a bit hard but nothing overwhelming. It was fun and i liked how there was plenty of dialog options that would fit different personalities. A few things i noticed that you might want to change should they not be intended: The first encounters…
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Hello. Reviewed your quest just now. It is a nice beginning but there are a few things i have found: Maybe to make the text more readable use [/ooc] for the descriptions instead of just brackets inside the text. Found a typo with the traveler compells - should be compels. When you are leaving the first cave the transition…
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Name: 3 Suns Aligned Short code: NW-DFEKZANXF Hello. Reviewed your quest just now. It is a nice beginning but there are a few things i have found: Maybe to make the text more readable use [/ooc] for the descriptions instead of just brackets inside the text. Found a typo with the traveler compells - should be compels. When…
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Heya! Just finished reviewing your one page quest. Nice use of interactions for the DM descriptions. Just some thoughts: The Transition to the cave has "Go the the next map" You say Explore the long dark, but there was way too much illumination in my opinion. The Priestess was inside the altar before the combat, not sure…
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Name: Any cave can lead to adventure! Short code: NW-DQF4T7QYH Heya! Just finished reviewing your one page quest. Nice use of interactions for the DM descriptions. Just some thoughts: The Transition to the cave has "Go the the next map" You say Explore the long dark, but there was way too much illumination in my opinion.…
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Hi. Finished running it again. This time i had all the items so it was easily finishable. I enjoyed it! The dialogs were really good and i was unable to find any mistakes. Even alone i still do not like how the items are handled. The banner puzzle is weird, not only you keep all the items (that you just layed there) but if…
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Wow! Thanks a lot! Amazing review, this will help me tremendously! (could you believe I did not know that the I's needed capitalization? Already corrected most, but there are always more! ^_^)
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Heya, you're welcome. About the mobs, the issue could be that we suck xD or... (drumrolls) with the levels. Before level 30 everything is ALOT easier. then 30+ there is a spike in difficulty and lvl 60 foundry mobs have way more xp compairing to you, their growth is not linear. You have to consider this when placing mobs…
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Hello, just finished your quest. There are some issues on playing it with more than one player, since it seems that some of the interactions need to have the item in hand. For instance Glenda asks you for the honey, but then to give you the second chore you need to have the storeroom key. Since i had the key, and my bf had…
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Heya, i'll have to restart your quest or do it solo, as a duo i was not able to finish it as we took different objects. Some input i can give you as of now: The text was pretty good, i read it carefully and did not find any screaming mistakes (then again my english is far from good, but sometimes i manage to spot typos…
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Thank you for your review. Did you accept the quest today? it almost feel like you ran an old version, the quest used to suffer from the quest drop you mentioned but this was changed after the first 2 reviews i got, almost a week ago. Now you never go back to PE, you just get the quest from there and thats it. The ideia of…
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Hello, Just finished reviewing your quest. It was a nice little adventure but i found some issues: the first transition say go to toumbledown instead of Tumbledown The quest has us search for the 3 spider corpse before actually speaking with the alchemist. The third eggs are on the air, but they dont have a texture behind…
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Hello ryask, just copy the short code into the best quests tab, it will appear. Since the new only has new and ours dont qualify yet, it wont show there on the search, but on the first tab it will.
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Loved your quest, its reviewed on your thread. Some typos and stuff but very nice story, had a blast. Thanks!
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Ok just finished reviewing your quest (did it alone with a 32 CW) I must say very nice quest! It was engaging and made me read through all the text i found (it was not too much so i did not feel overwhelmed and did not feel like skipping through). The puzzle was a bit confusing tho, while some answers were clear (when the…