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I might write something, going to be a ***** to tie it into my contuining narrative though.... I was thinking of introducing a Star Fleet aspect into it, but i;m loving the Klingon side to. and I havent written bout Doutra/Romulans in a while either. Choices, choices....anyone want to push me in any direction? Was planning…
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Thanks for the review Scarlet! Gotta admit I enjoy writing Klingons, same goes for Romulans. Klingons got the warrior culture and Romulans the BSG feel, trying to find a home and all. Ill try to put more of Krishna in next time :)
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Here's a hint...read mine first ;D
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Bit late here but I;m a big fan of Whytelyon's story. I love the Apocalypse version we glimpsed ever so briefly in Parallels. Kudos on that one.
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The Question marks are gone and I added a few things. Enjoy!
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I posted mine, the dreaded question mark sickness struck again. Ill edit it tommorow, 3 o clock here...
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Captain's Log Commander Gorvar of the IKS Dauntless Stardate 98704.57, Qo'noS time is 1223 This might be my final log as Captain of the Dauntless. We are currently en route to Qo'noS with our cargo bay filled to the burst with escape pods from a race we didn't know existed until 0600 this morning. The Romulan Republic has…
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@ danqueller changed the things you suggested, thanks for the read! Glad to see everyone seems to like the Gorn round these parts.
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Being a Gorn is AWESOME! ... You get to bite people!
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So....the blue guys are Athens, right?
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I like Kevin Sorbo! He was awesome in the Hercules series!
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I actually wrote a dissertation on that take you just said scruffyvulcan. Characters like Batman and Superman are part of the Collective Consciousness now. Show anyone a picture of either and even if they never read a comic chances are they still know who both are. Superman I compared tp Jesus Christ because...well he is a…
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@ danqueller A nicely paced story with good technobabble...sorry, actual scientific fact that backs it up :D. Shows you i need to start watching Carl Sagan more often. Anyways, it was really good and it did remind me of a few episodes, Next Gen and Enterprise, where the crew had to flee/fight off a enemy that was WAY out…
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Thanks! Although I noticed for a Romulan storyline...I dont have many Romulans on my ship haha. Made a few edits here and there.
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I feel your pain brah haha, had the same issue for mine as well. I liked it, it was very Star Trek-e with space trying to kill you and wormholes and whatnot. Kudos, deffo want to see more.
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Posted mine, decided to continue Doutra's storyline while introducing some bridge crew members, including a Gorn mad scientist because....-shrug-
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Doutra sat up straight as she awoke from her nightmare. Her heart was pounding, cold sweat ran from her head and the gut wrenching emotion of fear was only slowly ebbing away. She was still gasping for air as the person next to her in her bed stirred awake. Despite him being half-asleep still, he knew the routine and was…
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IKS Dauntless It sounds bad TRIBBLE, something you dont want to mess with...which fits perfect for a Klingon ship no? I think I heard of it first in pirates of the Caribbean and it kind of fits. It's a though ship whose commanding officer is rpetty much like my Gorn, Gorvar. It only seemed to fit really. RRW Virinat's…
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Thanks! It's so classy.
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Well it either depends on the next challenge or if that challenge doesn't mesh well with that backstory i'll write it and post it seperatly. I'm glad you liked the dialogue and forgive me for shamelessly ripping of GoT. Almost two weeks and only now someone notices haha. Glad to know the Centauri watch it as well. Thanks…
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Okay just finished "The Last Candle Burns" ....and I really liked how you handeld the Gorn and the Klingon in this while still being all Star Trek-e. Ssharki is an interesting character to see him reduced to nothing...and then given a chance to build up again. I think it's the cold bloodedness that sells it to me. He lsot…
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He is going JURASSIc on that Klingon booty! .... No-one? Really? Okay. Yeah I thought it would seem to fit that my character would fall for a Klingon female who sees past the scales and sees the honourable warrior within. Also it would make sense he would fall for a Klingon because he feels like one. I may have opend a can…
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Well for what I gather from the Gorn, they are willing to attack the Federation and really want to fight for the Empire ( save for some rebel forces) but they want to be proper represented in the High Council which isnt happening so far. I'm shamed to admit i dont know the stance with the Nausicans and the Orion people in…
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Haha, yeah. I wanted to make an Kaang kind of guy mixed with Spock in a way with the non-Klingon thing working agaisnt him. But he is calm like a Samurai and sophesticated :D Although he fights for the Empire, he knows some would still see him as a lumbering dinosaur. Doutra is on the other side of the mirror as in she…
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Any reviews for mine if i may be so bold as to ask? Ill keep the quote thing in mind for next time.
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I quite liked it, and to be honest I cant blame Veleen to side with Starfleet...although personally I picked the Klingons because they did fight by side with you when the Tal shiar came, but that's off topic. Also her voicing " Yeah i might have a boyfriend someday" is a bit...yeah okay, we need to keep the population up…
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I had a small problem with quotation marks on mine...everything turned to question marks heh...first time entry as well so now I feel pretty damn stupid.
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The smell of burning pyres, the sound of warriors laughing and arm wrestling and the taste of bloodwine on his tongue were things Gorvar enjoyed most in life. Even though the conference on Khitomer was of great importance for the Empire, he did not mind and In fact encouraged his crew to enjoy some shore leave. As long no…