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Coming soon. My own Star Trek adventures. I always want to write my own Star Trek adventures. I starting to write my missions. So by the time the foundry be on the holodeck I will have some missions ready to work on. I can't wait for the foundry be on the holodeck. I will work hard on my missions. I do hope you will like my missions. I got lots of story ideas. COMING SOON.
UPDATE 2/6/2011 : When I start this post I did start to write my missions but after few days then I have stop writing my missions. That's why I am going to just do it on the foundry beta.
UPDATE 2/6/2011 : When I start this post I did start to write my missions but after few days then I have stop writing my missions. That's why I am going to just do it on the foundry beta.
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Good luck!
COMING SOON
JEREMY SCHULTZ'S STAR TREK: MY ONLINE ADVENTURES
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Give us something to whet our appetites..... a Hors 'd oveur? Little short story..... I'll give it a go!
COMING SOON: Jeremy Schultz's Star Trek: My Online Adventures
However, if your mission is good on Tribble, the devs will elect it themselves to Holodeck. Just wait for the crazy first anniversity event to end, and people will return to tribble for extra content reviews....
This is just lame...
I have an bridge in manhattan, not for sale now....BUT soon
Palm, Apply directly to the forehead, Apply directly to the forehead, Apply directly to the forehead
He helped me even when I was silly enough not to agree with him. He knows what it takes to get your mission noticed.
Secondly saying I'm going to do my own adventures and using the foundry tool are two totally different things. I hope you love Sim type games. I love Train simulators and love making my own maps. If you think that is nerdy and boring good luck with Foundry.
Thirdly I have been playing with foundry for 3 weeks now for many many many many hours and still have not got a mission worth bragging about.
Fourthly I may be literate, but am a published paid writer and find it difficult to create story arch's on foundry.
I do not write this to lower your motivation or put you down in anyway. It's just you need to hope on tribble foundry and work your little tail off, otherwise when foundry hits holodeck there is going to be so much golden content your mission will be lucky to get a look in.
Here is something I've been using may help.
beginning of set intro
title: Title of your script
description: your mission, who-why-when-how-what
grant mission dialogue
costume: who is giving you the mission
style: what's there emotion
text: what are they saying
map transition (to create a map transfer,the spawn point/contact/enemy/object must be on a new map)
leaving;what map does your mission start from
leave from:were in the sto universe does your mission start
costume:who is is your first contact
style:what's there emotion
text:what are they saying
button:what is on the button to start your mission
spawn point at:name of your first spawn point
map mission:title of first map mission
end of set intro
tools
task interact with object
mission text: what is the objective
way points: do you want the object highlighted on the map
object: what is the object
project map:what map are you on
text: what do you want written on the button
animation: what emotion animation is taking place
duration: what is the duration of interacting with the object
task - kill enemies
mission text:what is the objective
way point: do you want the object highlighted on the map
encounter: who are you killing
project map: what map are you on
task talk to contact
mission text: what is the objective
way points: do you want the object highlighted on the map
actor: what is the title of the person you wish to talk to
project map: what map are you on
style: what's there emotion
text:what are they saying
button: what is on the button to reply or continue
pop up dialogue (Can be placed anywhere)
costume:who is is your contact
style:what's there emotion
text:what are they saying
button: what is on the button to reply or continue
task reach marker
mission text:what is the objective
way points:do you want the object highlighted on the map
marker:what is the title of the marker
project map:what map are you on
reached text:what is the objective once marker is reached
Or are you scared of opinion? If you wait, you may get more than you have bargained for....
It's just lame you most a nonexistent mission on THIS Foundry forum, Tribble BTW, and have nothing to show?
I'm done like juan, people just iggy this whole affair, and Iggy me..
It's not bad to announce that your mission is done and to request people to play it for feedback, but constant spam-bumping to advertise a mission that simply doesn't exist yet and by your own admission won't exist for several more weeks is simply useless and, to be straight up honest with you, annoying.
If you absolutely had to do this, I'd recommend the Tribble thread, but since this one is more about Foundry authors helping Foundry authors as opposed to advertising missions, I suggest you keep that in mind and move your adverts elsewhere.
Just to bring my point home a little, I have VERY little compulsion to try your mission now. Not just because I've been annoyed to death by reading the constant bump messages of "coming soon', but also because I've noticed slightly substandard grammatical finesse in your own postings even here. In other words, and I hate it if I come off as a snot, but you simply haven't done yourself any favors with this thread.
Yeah I was hoping you'd get the iliterat joke. Luckely I have an editor who I'm getting to look over my Foundry missions. And by editor I mean my mother. You see I come from a line of writters. I'm just the first dyslexic one. lol... sometimes i do it just for fun.
Any who.....
This is the your audience, welcome to the foundry. Don't let us get you down, prove us wrong. Eithur give us something we can help you with, something you are willing to let us criticise and this thread could be worth while. You have the attention of some amazing, knowledgeable sto players and I suggest you use it.
You're not the first I've seen use "arch" on the forums...it's becoming a pet peeve at this point.
I'll assume the rest of that is at the OP.
My first mission was called 'FILS1EP1 Mysterious Grace" besides the fact that people would not play my mission because the title was ugly, that is the limit on the characters.
My 2nd Draft is called "Can't Keep A New Suit Clean"
I suggest you stick to a good title and if your episodes are cannon use part 1. 2. 3. etc etc...
People will not play your mission if the title doesn't have a trek feel. Trust me I learned the hard way.
Check out my old thread...
http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?p=3300956#post3300956
If you don't seriously start to listen and ask questions. I will stop posting, Because you are starting to waste my valuable Sto Time...
And annoyed valuable people that have tried to help you...
More truth to this than anything else...
Newsflash: Foundry (Beta) is currently on Tribble. Build a mission, already! Even if it's just a test mission, to figure out what you can, and cannot, do!
Just about everyone in this thread is trying to help you, by suggesting that you get on Tribble, and start working with the Foundry, NOW! Learn the tools. Plan things out. Test options.
And, yet, you refuse to hear any of their suggestions. If you truly want others to help you, don't turn down their help now, accept it.
Why should I play your mission? What's it about?
No, don't start a new thread. Just don't make any until you have something ready to show people. Some people don't like it when you say "Coming Soon!" and have nothing coming soon. You don't even know when Foundry Beta will move to Holodeck. It could be months from now.
If you hype something early then by the time it comes out we will have forgotten about it.
Duke Nukem Forever.
But that example disproves your point