Status report:
Due to the foundry being down for several week, I was not able to repair the broken part of this mission when it was first reported to me. Meanwhile people were attempting to play it and were getting stuck about halfway through. I have it fixed now.
New edits:
map transition failure fixed
some edits to spelling and dialog
some objectives repositioned
This is my first foundry project. It's short (about 30 minutes), and not very complicated. it's an exploration story and short on combat. I tried to concentrate on snappy dialog and introduce some interesting NPCs and places that I plan to use in further adventures.