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New Fed Mission: Planet Mine

I put this mission together months ago, but never really promoted it.

Your ship is called on to deliver supplies to an anthropology outpost on a planet inhabited by a primitive race. But once you arrive you will find that something is terribly amiss and someone has broken the Prime Directive.

I hope it is enjoyed and critiques are welcome.
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  • uncle2fireuncle2fire Member Posts: 68 Arc User
    I played through it just now, and I want to say I really enjoyed it! The plot wasn't at all what I was expecting when I started, and it was a pleasant surprise to figure out what was going on. I especially liked your indoor map of the research station, which I explored thoroughly in between story progression items, and it was detailed well. The characters were well-written so that I didn't have any troubles remembering who was who, and I didn't have any trouble following the story or dialogues.

    I did want to mention a couple super minor things that I noticed, just so you know about them.

    A lot of the ground enemies made use of Hirogen hologram generators, so I ended up fighting against some giant Hirogen holograms as well as the intended enemies, which seemed a bit out of place, given the location and who I was supposedly fighting against. I assume it was because you were re-skinning some specific mob type, and wasn't intentional.

    I noticed on the outside map that the roaming mobs were jumping to the tops of the trees around them seemingly as a pathfinding error. Obviously this isn't something you can fix directly, but it jumped out at me while I was playing. Maybe if you adjusted their paths to avoid trees?

    There were a couple times when letters in the dialogues would be weirdly capitalized, which I mostly noticed at the very end of the mission. I unfortunately can't remember more specifically than that, but it might be worth a quick proofread if that's something you're concerned about.

    Overall it was great though! Definitely a fun playthrough.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • rancidmojo#7824 rancidmojo Member Posts: 105 Arc User
    Thanks. I'll look into and try to adjust things you mentioned! I hope you enjoyed it!
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