Foundry series: Universe

matthewluctaylor

Universe is a six episode series where the player has been assigned to a new fleet operating on the Cardassian front but is a more sinister force lurking in the dark?

gawainviii

Helping my fleet-mate out a little bit. Here's detail info for the first mission in his series:

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Mission Name: Universe: Gamma Rising S1:E1
Author: matthewluctaylor
Minimum Level: none
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HICMM73XJ
Estimated Mission Length: ? minutes

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A starship using experimental engines has got stuck in the gamma quadrant and you have been tasked with helping them get back.

Starts at badlands and set in 2410

This is my first foundry mission and has been updated its now 1.3 and should work without anybugs

ashstorm1

Ok, i just played this Foundry mission, and since the review function is currently down, i think i might as well leave feedback right here.

All in all, it is a decent mission. The story is okay, albeit without surprises, and the battles are correctly balanced. The grammar and spelling are kinda off, though, and they could definitely use some refining, since the many typos and absence of punctuation make the dialogues rather confusing at times.

For a first attempt, it is not bad at all, but it could use some rework.

matthewluctaylor

Thanks for the feedback, been a real paing getting around to but thanks for the feedback always helps a lot!