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New Mission for review

cokeymoncokeymon Member Posts: 21 Arc User
edited May 29 in The Foundry for Star Trek Online - Mission Database
This is my first mission. It is more story than fighting so I hope you will enjoy it.


Handle = @Solauri

Mission Name = Summit at Alhena

Faction = Federation or Federation Allied Romulans

Level = Playable at any level

Synopsis =

You have volunteered to escort Ambassador Jennifer Kyle to the Alhena Refueling Station at Alhena in the Donatu Sector. What starts as a simple escort mission ends up turning into a trip which not only puts the Ambassador in danger but threatens the life of your entire crew.

This mission can be started by talking to Linnea outside Admiral Quinn's office on Earth's Space Dock.



Please try my mission and let me know how you liked it by commenting on it at the end.
Thank you.
Post edited by baddmoonrizin on

Comments

  • isthisscienceisthisscience Member Posts: 863 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    First of all, you do have some good elements. It's good to use the social maps a bit more and the inclusion of the puzzle is more than most people bother with. However for such a short mission, so much is taken up by map transitions. Most of those maps consisted of a single dialogue box which is annoying given the length of map loading time we have. By using fewer, but more in depth, maps you'll be able to get a lot more out of the playtime.
  • cokeymoncokeymon Member Posts: 21 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    isthisscience wrote: »
    First of all, you do have some good elements. It's good to use the social maps a bit more and the inclusion of the puzzle is more than most people bother with. However for such a short mission, so much is taken up by map transitions. Most of those maps consisted of a single dialogue box which is annoying given the length of map loading time we have. By using fewer, but more in depth, maps you'll be able to get a lot more out of the playtime.

    Thank you for your feed back and for taking the time to try my mission. I will revamp the transitions and maybe add a ground combat section. One question, do I withdraw the project while making changes or just update the project and republish it?

    Again thank you, any feed back is welcome as again it is my first try at this :)
  • cokeymoncokeymon Member Posts: 21 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Anyone who has tried this mission, please run through it again. I have removed some of the useless map changes and added a map of ground fighting which I'm sure will take you by surprise. The mission is on the short side but it is my first attempt. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated.

    Thank you for your consideration.
  • cokeymoncokeymon Member Posts: 21 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    To anyone who has played this mission, please take a minute to play it again. I have made numerous changes and additions. I think you all will enjoy it. Also, as always, any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

    Thank you,
    Cokeymon
  • darkfirewithindarkfirewithin Member Posts: 44 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Very well done :)
  • cokeymoncokeymon Member Posts: 21 Arc User
    edited May 2014
    I have updated this project to reflect the new layout of ESD. Hope to hear any comments you have.

    Thank you for taking time to play my mission.

    Cokeymon


    P.S. This mission now qualifies for standard foundry rewards :)
  • cokeymoncokeymon Member Posts: 21 Arc User
    edited June 2014
    Thank you for your feedback. :)

    I hope to hear more from you all. I have made some changes to fine tune

    the mission a bit. If anyone has more suggestions I would appreciate any feedback

    you have.

    Again, thank you for taking the time to play my mission.

    Cokeymon

    P.S. This mission quallifies for standard rewards now. Enjoy! :)
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