Virinat Pristine:
The opening dialog could scroll more slowly.
The fruit in vendor baskets seems rather excessively two dimensional. Like, severly imersion breaking.
A few more ambient dialogs might help.
The animations of the drone kidnapping are fantastic, but they could stand to be slowed down to add a little excitement.
Virinat Ruined:
The Federation officers seem a little two willing to brand you as a terrorist. A statement like "I recognize some of them from the terrorist reports" might make it flow better.
Khitomer:
The Klingons and Federation could use a few extra random dialogs.
The Tal'shiar intruders are still wearing tal'shiar pants!
Powers:
Hazard Emitters: Seems to be grayed out a lot. As in. nearly always.
General:
Some mission dialog confuses whether you chose federation or kdf.
When entering many systems, the camera pans way out and zooms in. Nt sure if this is working as intended.
The Romulan ship interiors are too nice. You need to redo KDF and Feds now. Chop chop.
J'mpok: I know the battle masters want to talk, leave me alone, you crazy old turtlehead!
The Brown ship color, while a really cool option to add some diversity of color, could stand to be more... Well, more brown!